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Everything was fine until mc started to travel to different worlds. I don't mind that, but the execution was horrible and not planned properly. Also, don't expect vampire diaries story, this fic barely covered the originals past. Mc is hundreds of years away from the plot.
it started out good but then suddenly skipping and jumping from different perspective. the author focused on the non important things. sometimes forgot where the last chapter ended and didn't continue from then on. i have no problems with it looking like a summary aslong as it is complete. sometimes the story is not written in chronological order or just plain skip certain parts.
So i was absolutely loving this at first. I thought the astrid storyline in the beginning was very good. But its clear that the author sucks at romance so i gave him a break the problem is then he went and got with Quetsuya and that just made the problems worse. I think it would have been better if you showed more of that relationship. But at least you showed some of both. It was very mid but not out of the blue romance so I had no huge problem with it. After that the arc's were really cool and fun all the way till the one that dropped the score from a 4.5 to a 2.6. The Agents of Shield arc. In my opinion is where this MC went to die. A god travels to a place where he starts lying to mortals. Not just allowing them to believe what they want and slyly telling them "sure" no by lying to them and pretending to be a weak overly emotional character. Then telling them you're an inhuman then telling them no not that im a god. And the problem is i kept skipping chapters hoping he would go back to how he was in the beginning but its like the author forgot how to write him because he changed his MC. So even when he goes to the infinite war where you would think "okay now he can just say i'm a god here to help." But....no no that didn't happen. So i can only say he's an idiot scared little boy lying to mortals for no reason and changing his behaviour for no reason. The funny thing is i never minded the jokes but the way he began to behave like a passive follower who follows around the shield people instead of doing his own stuff and how he interacted with them. It was all like a different MC not the one i've been reading for so many chapters.
Super cool 😎 Interesting Unique Love it 😍 Also I can’t wait for more chapters I hope there is more chapters about MC kol ,with original sibling…
you literally had the golden goose till the whole Astrid plot, he wasn't becoming stupidly op from nowhere and he wasn't leaving his lovers behind in power then out of left field you make them fight
même pas 100chapitres (a peine la moitier) sur l'univers des originaux, et en cent chapitres deja 3 univers exploré, comment ont peux mettre en place correctement les situations les notes sont ridicule.
Hello author I have not seen the chapter update for 1 month are you gonna drop the novel pls don't do that because I love this book pls finish it and keep uploading chapter please
The story is great, the sequencing of events and worlds is a bit confusing but it's still tolerable and quite entertaining. The characters give a medium amount of growth through the story which seems nice and the mastery of each world or universe is astonishing and commendable. Now for the cons. The romance of the characters felt a bit empty. Like with Astrid and Kol where they fought and after that, they suddenly get to talk to each other. There was no drama with the reunion, there was no "missing you" thingy for couples despite them not seeing each other for centuries and there was a minimal amount of intimacy which never gave away if they made up or not. The biggest con though would be the Mikaelson name. I see no reason for the MC to be a Mikaelson with this type of storyline. The story would still be the same if the MC was just another MC with OP powers since the Mikaelson heritage wasn't that highlighted or even the family thing with the originals. The arc of the originals was so short it left no impact on the novel making it no sense for the novel to highlight him being a Mikaelson.
Was 5/5 at the start of the story and in the middle part of the story but as the Astrid arc begins the story feels like someone murdered and replaced the author and destroyed the story. it's like a train on the path of heaven suddenly derailed in the path of trash. Sigh
I really like this story but I would not recommend it because it takes forever to update a chapter I'm talking one single chapter one or maybe 2 months for one chapter
it start good but then get worse and worse..right now is just a fast pace summary and sadly really boring one! .
Очень интересное чтиво. Автор старается и это видно. Спасибо за хорошую историю............................................................................. ....
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it's kind of boring to compare to other stories, but i would recommend reading "as chronicas de vali masters" (everything missing here is there) the plot is forced to stay the same, even when the MC changes a lot (and this without any real justification , just padding), writing and development as a whole need a big improvement. and I'm not talking about changing the MC's personality, but about the author's own mistakes to force the story when I mention the other book
I can only say ... wow. I loved this fanfic. Character development is pretty good. It is not necessary to have seen any of the original stories, because the author makes sure to explain. And if you think something does not make sense, it is because it is preparing for a future event in history.
Legal ( Cara eu odeio esse negócio de precisar de 140 caracteres para poder postar uma revisão para as histórias 140 140 140 140 140 140 )
this is awesome its funny and it has massive potential please dont go crazy with the harem....................................................................................................................
Very good. Some chapters boring but overall good.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is a very good read and you can tell that the author put a lot of time and effort into his craft. The only "negative" thing I would say is that its 1 chapter a week, but the quality outweighs the quantity its just a shame I can't read this everyday
This is the kind of Fan Fiction that I love. An author that's not afraid to go of the rails of a story. A main character that actually affects the plot. This isn't someone watching a movie and typing it out scene for scene. That what I like.
Not bad, but gets significantly worse as time goes on. In general the beginning was pretty good, the wishes were odd at first but they come together well later on, proving that the mc had a plan all along but as the story goes on, especially once the mc gets to VD:L it becomes significantly worse, characters (especially the mc) begin acting completely out of character, like they suddenly become different people. Very disappointing in general. Still at least the first 2/3's of the story is pretty good and worth your time even if that's not true for the last 1/3.
The grandfather thingy is just straight BS. Bor (which is Thor’s grandfather name) is supposed to be in hel cuz he died dishonorably and he’s vindictive, paranoid warmonger not some nice loving grandpa, even at one point Thor kills him after hela revives him but in Thor’s defence he didn’t know it was his granpa and Bor never mentioned to tell him that in the comics. You should just retcon the whole grandpa thing imo it just sounds stupid. Overall it’s a good fanfic if you ignore the little inconsistencies here and there.
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Hellooo!! how are we? I just want to say that this novel gives me good vibes, I have not started it yet because I want to finish watching the series to have more information. I just wanted to ask the author for a little favor ... PLEASE make Katherine Pierce the love interest !! (if she hasn't yet), or some other villain ...
Honestly i just like the conference the author has of i will love this novel so 5/5 will write a proper review when i have actually read the novel
the starting story was good. the story progression after the 2 world is just pure shit . Good thing you dropped this bullshit .🤢🤢
Everything was fine until mc started to travel to different worlds. I don't mind that, but the execution was horrible and not planned properly. Also, don't expect vampire diaries story, this fic barely covered the originals past. Mc is hundreds of years away from the plot.
it started out good but then suddenly skipping and jumping from different perspective. the author focused on the non important things. sometimes forgot where the last chapter ended and didn't continue from then on. i have no problems with it looking like a summary aslong as it is complete. sometimes the story is not written in chronological order or just plain skip certain parts.
So i was absolutely loving this at first. I thought the astrid storyline in the beginning was very good. But its clear that the author sucks at romance so i gave him a break the problem is then he went and got with Quetsuya and that just made the problems worse. I think it would have been better if you showed more of that relationship. But at least you showed some of both. It was very mid but not out of the blue romance so I had no huge problem with it. After that the arc's were really cool and fun all the way till the one that dropped the score from a 4.5 to a 2.6. The Agents of Shield arc. In my opinion is where this MC went to die. A god travels to a place where he starts lying to mortals. Not just allowing them to believe what they want and slyly telling them "sure" no by lying to them and pretending to be a weak overly emotional character. Then telling them you're an inhuman then telling them no not that im a god. And the problem is i kept skipping chapters hoping he would go back to how he was in the beginning but its like the author forgot how to write him because he changed his MC. So even when he goes to the infinite war where you would think "okay now he can just say i'm a god here to help." But....no no that didn't happen. So i can only say he's an idiot scared little boy lying to mortals for no reason and changing his behaviour for no reason. The funny thing is i never minded the jokes but the way he began to behave like a passive follower who follows around the shield people instead of doing his own stuff and how he interacted with them. It was all like a different MC not the one i've been reading for so many chapters.
Super cool 😎 Interesting Unique Love it 😍 Also I can’t wait for more chapters I hope there is more chapters about MC kol ,with original sibling…
you literally had the golden goose till the whole Astrid plot, he wasn't becoming stupidly op from nowhere and he wasn't leaving his lovers behind in power then out of left field you make them fight
même pas 100chapitres (a peine la moitier) sur l'univers des originaux, et en cent chapitres deja 3 univers exploré, comment ont peux mettre en place correctement les situations les notes sont ridicule.
Hello author I have not seen the chapter update for 1 month are you gonna drop the novel pls don't do that because I love this book pls finish it and keep uploading chapter please
The story is great, the sequencing of events and worlds is a bit confusing but it's still tolerable and quite entertaining. The characters give a medium amount of growth through the story which seems nice and the mastery of each world or universe is astonishing and commendable. Now for the cons. The romance of the characters felt a bit empty. Like with Astrid and Kol where they fought and after that, they suddenly get to talk to each other. There was no drama with the reunion, there was no "missing you" thingy for couples despite them not seeing each other for centuries and there was a minimal amount of intimacy which never gave away if they made up or not. The biggest con though would be the Mikaelson name. I see no reason for the MC to be a Mikaelson with this type of storyline. The story would still be the same if the MC was just another MC with OP powers since the Mikaelson heritage wasn't that highlighted or even the family thing with the originals. The arc of the originals was so short it left no impact on the novel making it no sense for the novel to highlight him being a Mikaelson.
Was 5/5 at the start of the story and in the middle part of the story but as the Astrid arc begins the story feels like someone murdered and replaced the author and destroyed the story. it's like a train on the path of heaven suddenly derailed in the path of trash. Sigh
I really like this story but I would not recommend it because it takes forever to update a chapter I'm talking one single chapter one or maybe 2 months for one chapter
it start good but then get worse and worse..right now is just a fast pace summary and sadly really boring one! .
Очень интересное чтиво. Автор старается и это видно. Спасибо за хорошую историю............................................................................. ....
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it's kind of boring to compare to other stories, but i would recommend reading "as chronicas de vali masters" (everything missing here is there) the plot is forced to stay the same, even when the MC changes a lot (and this without any real justification , just padding), writing and development as a whole need a big improvement. and I'm not talking about changing the MC's personality, but about the author's own mistakes to force the story when I mention the other book
I can only say ... wow. I loved this fanfic. Character development is pretty good. It is not necessary to have seen any of the original stories, because the author makes sure to explain. And if you think something does not make sense, it is because it is preparing for a future event in history.
Legal ( Cara eu odeio esse negócio de precisar de 140 caracteres para poder postar uma revisão para as histórias 140 140 140 140 140 140 )
this is awesome its funny and it has massive potential please dont go crazy with the harem....................................................................................................................
Very good. Some chapters boring but overall good.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is a very good read and you can tell that the author put a lot of time and effort into his craft. The only "negative" thing I would say is that its 1 chapter a week, but the quality outweighs the quantity its just a shame I can't read this everyday
This is the kind of Fan Fiction that I love. An author that's not afraid to go of the rails of a story. A main character that actually affects the plot. This isn't someone watching a movie and typing it out scene for scene. That what I like.
Not bad, but gets significantly worse as time goes on. In general the beginning was pretty good, the wishes were odd at first but they come together well later on, proving that the mc had a plan all along but as the story goes on, especially once the mc gets to VD:L it becomes significantly worse, characters (especially the mc) begin acting completely out of character, like they suddenly become different people. Very disappointing in general. Still at least the first 2/3's of the story is pretty good and worth your time even if that's not true for the last 1/3.
The grandfather thingy is just straight BS. Bor (which is Thor’s grandfather name) is supposed to be in hel cuz he died dishonorably and he’s vindictive, paranoid warmonger not some nice loving grandpa, even at one point Thor kills him after hela revives him but in Thor’s defence he didn’t know it was his granpa and Bor never mentioned to tell him that in the comics. You should just retcon the whole grandpa thing imo it just sounds stupid. Overall it’s a good fanfic if you ignore the little inconsistencies here and there.
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Hellooo!! how are we? I just want to say that this novel gives me good vibes, I have not started it yet because I want to finish watching the series to have more information. I just wanted to ask the author for a little favor ... PLEASE make Katherine Pierce the love interest !! (if she hasn't yet), or some other villain ...
Honestly i just like the conference the author has of i will love this novel so 5/5 will write a proper review when i have actually read the novel
the starting story was good. the story progression after the 2 world is just pure shit . Good thing you dropped this bullshit .🤢🤢