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Exactly what you want to see from a My hero academia fanfiction, has a nice amount of content to keep you busy and a very large harem that for the size of it only feels a little bit forced, which is great. The ending was not the greatest though.
USJ arc showed how much of a coward and idiot the MC is and every single comment was angry and confused with how poor the writing was to have that trash forced drama but the author kept writing the trash USJ arc. The MC is the definition of a coward. Maybe my rating will change but with how garbage that arc was idk if it can.
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@akikan40, please refrain from creating stories that consist solely of copied main characters. All your novels seem to feature protagonists with identical personalities, revolving around a God complex and infidelity towards female characters. I can appreciate your desire to craft a harem narrative, but consider making the protagonist more relatable and ensuring the storyline possesses a sense of common sense.
This story was good enough to entertain me, the author manages to make consistent stories. It has a lot of CN tropes and clichés, but remains entertaining overall.
The author really said wait until ch 140, then it gets good. Seriously I think k is pretty late for a story to get good at that point.
it was all great until the chapter 72 where he didn't even use all the quirk he got and his basis is he didn't want his quirk to be know, ah bug wait based on his logic on the previous chapter there is an "traitor" in his class which already know how strong and what is his quirk it so obvious that this development is very forced like putting a photo of a real person in a cartoon
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the mc is so annoying. he is changing is mind on things way too many times. the way the "harem" is handled is really bad. the usj incident was extremely garbage. There really is nothing positive about this FF.
I had doubts when I first saw this story because the MC reincarnated as Mineta which is not a favorable character in MHA and just thinking about his personality gives me an unsettling vibe to be honest. However, after reading this story I'd say that it's quite decent and even became one of my favorite books, my only problem is that the MC is a hypocrite and annoying. I don't really understand his reason for using other people when they are completely genuine to him from the beginning. And another thing I don't like is the way he wasn't contented on having one girlfriend. I honestly have no problem with him having a harem but after seeing that the first GF was genuine about her feelings and accepted him when he was still a nothing, It just doesn't feel right to have multiple lovers when it was only one girl that stayed with him even when he still had Mineta's original appearance.
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less 0.2 point bwcause i ddont ven read it but because i already read you fanfic before like siscon chat gp until hitose not I'm sure it not bad evwn if it not good.i happy you had new fanfic because i stop using webnovel 2 year ago because busyness but now you had new fanfic goodjob[img=recommend][img=update]
I like it, I'm just frustrated with his system giving out master skills like it's nothing. I was hoping all new skills unlocked would start at beginner stage, then it would be upgradable in the system shop. MC being a pro-level hero even before the Academy arc kinda numb any additional upgrades he gets. I don't hate systems, but a system that give away a 500k point skill even before it was activated was a bit too much.
Writing quality: 5 - I hardly find any mistakes.Story development: 4 - It's good, but sometimes it can be boring.Characters: The main character (MC) is likable, unlike the former Minata. However, I will deduct one point as he was portrayed as stupid in the USJ arc.Updating: 5 - No issues here.World Background: 5 - I can't say much, but it's okay.
Great story with perfect grammar. The idea is new and pretty creative and is implemented very well. The interactions between characters so far doesn’t seem forced and follow
Yah, meskipun aku tidak mengharapkan banyak dari yang satu ini, tapi apa boleh buat? Karya Akikan selalu menarik untuk dibaca, dan aku selalu menunggu karya-karya hebatnya yang lain. Semoga saja dia bisa menulis sesuatu yang serupa seperti grup obrolan dimensi yang sebelumnya
I loved the beginning, it was one of the best in my opinion, but then it went overboard when it began to have 80% of the content of the chapters of pure repetitive description of the abilities, and it began to make ibara unfaithful (Forced Out or not) there were other ways to introduce the harem that was not that way, with that I say everything.
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Start - 1 June 2023 End - 5 June 2023 The journey has come to an end. Mineta had grown so much as a character both emotionally and physically throughout the story. There were bad things in the novels but I won't say anything about them so to let you judge the story for yourself.
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This was amazing. I enjoyed reading this over time, though there were some hiccups. I would have enjoyed some chapters that had a bit more detail in what the MC and the heroins did but the way this was set up made it to where I could hardly complain. I didn't really like the way he dealt with his emotions and the way he dealt with the heroins emotions though. Over great story.
I usually don't read the comments b4 reading something because it can influence my opinion about the story Anyway, that being said, this is my personal opinion for those who intend to read the book. First of all, Mc is obsessed with a goal, so he will try to achieve it by all means(I.e f**king the girls) 2nd, most ppl felt pretty annoyed cuz mc has betrayed his gf, well, idk what to say about it but for ur information, after that girl found out, mc created a situation where he got injured/is worshipped (Anyway he orchestra an event okay) and he subtly influence his gf with his speech(again) for her forgiveness(my opinion), he said it's for his goal and didn't show much expression when he's manipulating her but I personally think if he didn't care, he won't go that much trouble and just f**k her silly since at that point he have already have her body under his control(again he's being Tsun at that point in time is just my opinion) the 3rd point, he kept f**king girl around and ppl thought it's getting boring after the girl count surpassed the number of fingers u have but this time I have to say it, It's a Fanfic, in other words it's a world where ur dreams and expectations can come true, mha world have so many beauties that some of u might wanna taste them all, no? idk about u but I love every second of it, even if his actions and the steps he took are repetitive I still love it since I love almost all the female chars in mha and it's pretty fun to see them on bed(this 3rd opinion isn't in bystander POV but in my own POV so it's a little one sided) Well, that's the problem ppl mostly complain about. Other than that, there are no problems(I think?) That's all the major things ppl complain about, I guess, oh, and yes, those who worry about grammar problems, no need to worry since the author gave it his best.
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This story is great and original, but I can't handle it anymore. I'm at chapter 60 and I can't read it. It is breaking my heart I honestly feel so sorry for that girl that I had to stop. If it gets better pass chapter 60 please tell me because I can not continue.
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I really like this novel, the only complaint i have is that the dialogue is somewhat awkward (ex: chapter 37) but other than that i recommend this book.( only read up to chapter 37)
I just wanna say it was good even though ending was a bit rushed but as someone who has seen many BNHA fanfic I had a great time reading it. Atleast I'm happy the author didn't drop the fanfic and gave us an ending. Well I'll be waiting for you with your new works in the future.
Best my hero fanfic ever 10/10 Its been long journey my dear friend Akikan40 , You are the best Author I could’ve asked for in this god forsaken place.
and it ended, the development near the end was a mess, and the ending was unsatisfying. But still a 7/10........................................
Good ending was rushed but I understand more than 300 ch is better than 99% of these fan fics. Wished there was an epilogue but either way one of my favorites
A well-written fanfic staring someone reborn as Mineta in MHA. And though it may have ended now I firmly believe this was a masterclass read. The writing quality was shaky near the beginning but you can visibly see the improvement throughout the story. The Updates happened with almost two chapters a day everyday since the beginning of the book, one 3 times did the author delay this(They would post a chapter informing us the readers of a small break). Though the world may have been MHA, the author did expand on it and create an amazing read and I hope to read another Story like this from the author soon...
Not good.Writing 4/5Story 1/5Charakter Design 1/5Update stability 5/5World Background 3/5A sad attempt at creating a hero with a love system. The MC is absolute Trash, a hypocrite, and a coward.The system gives him power by interacting with women and girlfriends. He creates a harem for himself and doesnt have the guts to stand by his decision till the far end of the Story. it made me sick to the stomach even skimming through the whole Story.Wouldnt even recommend my enemies this story.
Exactly what you want to see from a My hero academia fanfiction, has a nice amount of content to keep you busy and a very large harem that for the size of it only feels a little bit forced, which is great. The ending was not the greatest though.
USJ arc showed how much of a coward and idiot the MC is and every single comment was angry and confused with how poor the writing was to have that trash forced drama but the author kept writing the trash USJ arc. The MC is the definition of a coward. Maybe my rating will change but with how garbage that arc was idk if it can.
ネタバレを明かす @akikan40, please refrain from creating stories that consist solely of copied main characters. All your novels seem to feature protagonists with identical personalities, revolving around a God complex and infidelity towards female characters. I can appreciate your desire to craft a harem narrative, but consider making the protagonist more relatable and ensuring the storyline possesses a sense of common sense.
This story was good enough to entertain me, the author manages to make consistent stories. It has a lot of CN tropes and clichés, but remains entertaining overall.
The author really said wait until ch 140, then it gets good. Seriously I think k is pretty late for a story to get good at that point.
it was all great until the chapter 72 where he didn't even use all the quirk he got and his basis is he didn't want his quirk to be know, ah bug wait based on his logic on the previous chapter there is an "traitor" in his class which already know how strong and what is his quirk it so obvious that this development is very forced like putting a photo of a real person in a cartoon
ネタバレを明かす the mc is so annoying. he is changing is mind on things way too many times. the way the "harem" is handled is really bad. the usj incident was extremely garbage. There really is nothing positive about this FF.
I had doubts when I first saw this story because the MC reincarnated as Mineta which is not a favorable character in MHA and just thinking about his personality gives me an unsettling vibe to be honest. However, after reading this story I'd say that it's quite decent and even became one of my favorite books, my only problem is that the MC is a hypocrite and annoying. I don't really understand his reason for using other people when they are completely genuine to him from the beginning. And another thing I don't like is the way he wasn't contented on having one girlfriend. I honestly have no problem with him having a harem but after seeing that the first GF was genuine about her feelings and accepted him when he was still a nothing, It just doesn't feel right to have multiple lovers when it was only one girl that stayed with him even when he still had Mineta's original appearance.
ネタバレを明かす less 0.2 point bwcause i ddont ven read it but because i already read you fanfic before like siscon chat gp until hitose not I'm sure it not bad evwn if it not good.i happy you had new fanfic because i stop using webnovel 2 year ago because busyness but now you had new fanfic goodjob[img=recommend][img=update]
I like it, I'm just frustrated with his system giving out master skills like it's nothing. I was hoping all new skills unlocked would start at beginner stage, then it would be upgradable in the system shop. MC being a pro-level hero even before the Academy arc kinda numb any additional upgrades he gets. I don't hate systems, but a system that give away a 500k point skill even before it was activated was a bit too much.
Writing quality: 5 - I hardly find any mistakes.Story development: 4 - It's good, but sometimes it can be boring.Characters: The main character (MC) is likable, unlike the former Minata. However, I will deduct one point as he was portrayed as stupid in the USJ arc.Updating: 5 - No issues here.World Background: 5 - I can't say much, but it's okay.
Great story with perfect grammar. The idea is new and pretty creative and is implemented very well. The interactions between characters so far doesn’t seem forced and follow
Yah, meskipun aku tidak mengharapkan banyak dari yang satu ini, tapi apa boleh buat? Karya Akikan selalu menarik untuk dibaca, dan aku selalu menunggu karya-karya hebatnya yang lain. Semoga saja dia bisa menulis sesuatu yang serupa seperti grup obrolan dimensi yang sebelumnya
I loved the beginning, it was one of the best in my opinion, but then it went overboard when it began to have 80% of the content of the chapters of pure repetitive description of the abilities, and it began to make ibara unfaithful (Forced Out or not) there were other ways to introduce the harem that was not that way, with that I say everything.
ネタバレを明かす Start - 1 June 2023 End - 5 June 2023 The journey has come to an end. Mineta had grown so much as a character both emotionally and physically throughout the story. There were bad things in the novels but I won't say anything about them so to let you judge the story for yourself.
ネタバレを明かす This was amazing. I enjoyed reading this over time, though there were some hiccups. I would have enjoyed some chapters that had a bit more detail in what the MC and the heroins did but the way this was set up made it to where I could hardly complain. I didn't really like the way he dealt with his emotions and the way he dealt with the heroins emotions though. Over great story.
I usually don't read the comments b4 reading something because it can influence my opinion about the story Anyway, that being said, this is my personal opinion for those who intend to read the book. First of all, Mc is obsessed with a goal, so he will try to achieve it by all means(I.e f**king the girls) 2nd, most ppl felt pretty annoyed cuz mc has betrayed his gf, well, idk what to say about it but for ur information, after that girl found out, mc created a situation where he got injured/is worshipped (Anyway he orchestra an event okay) and he subtly influence his gf with his speech(again) for her forgiveness(my opinion), he said it's for his goal and didn't show much expression when he's manipulating her but I personally think if he didn't care, he won't go that much trouble and just f**k her silly since at that point he have already have her body under his control(again he's being Tsun at that point in time is just my opinion) the 3rd point, he kept f**king girl around and ppl thought it's getting boring after the girl count surpassed the number of fingers u have but this time I have to say it, It's a Fanfic, in other words it's a world where ur dreams and expectations can come true, mha world have so many beauties that some of u might wanna taste them all, no? idk about u but I love every second of it, even if his actions and the steps he took are repetitive I still love it since I love almost all the female chars in mha and it's pretty fun to see them on bed(this 3rd opinion isn't in bystander POV but in my own POV so it's a little one sided) Well, that's the problem ppl mostly complain about. Other than that, there are no problems(I think?) That's all the major things ppl complain about, I guess, oh, and yes, those who worry about grammar problems, no need to worry since the author gave it his best.
ネタバレを明かす This story is great and original, but I can't handle it anymore. I'm at chapter 60 and I can't read it. It is breaking my heart I honestly feel so sorry for that girl that I had to stop. If it gets better pass chapter 60 please tell me because I can not continue.
I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------ I always give Akikan-sensei 5 stars..... ------------------
I really like this novel, the only complaint i have is that the dialogue is somewhat awkward (ex: chapter 37) but other than that i recommend this book.( only read up to chapter 37)
I just wanna say it was good even though ending was a bit rushed but as someone who has seen many BNHA fanfic I had a great time reading it. Atleast I'm happy the author didn't drop the fanfic and gave us an ending. Well I'll be waiting for you with your new works in the future.
Best my hero fanfic ever 10/10 Its been long journey my dear friend Akikan40 , You are the best Author I could’ve asked for in this god forsaken place.
and it ended, the development near the end was a mess, and the ending was unsatisfying. But still a 7/10........................................
Good ending was rushed but I understand more than 300 ch is better than 99% of these fan fics. Wished there was an epilogue but either way one of my favorites
A well-written fanfic staring someone reborn as Mineta in MHA. And though it may have ended now I firmly believe this was a masterclass read. The writing quality was shaky near the beginning but you can visibly see the improvement throughout the story. The Updates happened with almost two chapters a day everyday since the beginning of the book, one 3 times did the author delay this(They would post a chapter informing us the readers of a small break). Though the world may have been MHA, the author did expand on it and create an amazing read and I hope to read another Story like this from the author soon...
Not good.Writing 4/5Story 1/5Charakter Design 1/5Update stability 5/5World Background 3/5A sad attempt at creating a hero with a love system. The MC is absolute Trash, a hypocrite, and a coward.The system gives him power by interacting with women and girlfriends. He creates a harem for himself and doesnt have the guts to stand by his decision till the far end of the Story. it made me sick to the stomach even skimming through the whole Story.Wouldnt even recommend my enemies this story.