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MC PASSÍVO ELE DA MUITA RIQUEZA PARA OUTROS DE GRAÇA, E TAMBÉM ELE TEVE PRIMEIRA BANDEIRA VERDE DA SUA PRIMEIRA MULHER, E CONTRUIU O UMA CASA PARA ELA E SEU NTR (SEU IRMÂOS), E TAMBÉM ELE CONTA SUA HISTÓRIAS DA VIDA DELE PARA OUTROS E DEPOIS SOME DA VISTA DELES
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long pages made book. a little hard to read though. Once you started reading, you got stuck. Spools on the middle part of the book. Have always had a bit of a hard time with world jumpers. but it works. Not alwasy the most thriling and a bit dispointed in the world chosen. As a hole a solid book.
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Honestly in love wonderful job author good concept good writing good overall Novel and You Deserve greatness sir ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Classical beta mc, his woman gave up their child and fucks his brother and you what he does, he builds her a fucking house afterward. He gave the salvortores 100 million dollars cars the first day he meets them, I am surprised he hasn't spread his asshole for them. He even turns random people into powerhouses and gives them all his magical knowledge on a whim. Shittiest taste of women, judging that his first girl cucked and the next Bonnie Bennett who is a pushover for he friend, who he serves like she is his mistress. I have only read a bit about the first volume and the start of marvel where he decided to bend his ass over for natasha too and turn her into a goddess after the first day of meeting her
To be honest, this was a good read, there are mistakes here and there, some questionable decisions by the Main, but it's better than most. My only (biggest)problem with this fic is the pairing, which isn't the author's fault, I merely dislike Bonnie as a character. Beside that, the story feels kinda slow at time. Overall? I'd give it a solid 4,3-4,6 out of 5.
Huge fan of your stories the beginning and original heretic story I like story that start as a self insert in he vampire di are original universe you are one of my favourite Arthur's with how you actuallyy mange your characters ability to actually travel the multiverse with your storyline it's and amazing how you manifest to conect to with the ascension of gods to the multiverse... I was actually hoping to see if you could write an Idea of mine I am not a very good write my self and have dislexia so it is hard to write in a good ways so I normally give ideas and therioes to different writes to see if they use hem and how the develop,, And idea that I have actually had for a long time but no body has actually taking up writing it bu t I read your stories and I would love to see how you could combined it with your story,,,,, the story is where a not a spycopath but some one with few emotions becomes a self insert as klaus milkason but they have no memory of their 1st life as they ask the being who self insert them to make sure the story goes exactly the same as in did in the vampire diaries rite up until klaus write after he brakes his curse from Elaina and just afte he runs of in his wolf form he gains every memory of his first life and the deal he made with the being who reincarnated and because he how he came to this world he gained the ability to be a siphoner but no one know of this ability and he didn't either because it was locked away with his curse and when he was human the reason he wasn't much stronger then a normal human as a werewolf was because of his siphon ability was constantly siphoning his werewolf ability but with his curse broken when he transform back sens is he's becoming stronger and weaker and realise he's a siphoner
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A Very underestimated fanfiction, should get more people to read it, very nice and relatable main character, diferent from the usual everyone weaker than me doesn't really matter like we usual get in this supernatural universes fanfictions that is not girl romance, give a more realistic setting to the story. For me this is one of the few vampire diaries fanfiction worth reading.
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So good I have enjoyed the whole of this fanfic it was great. Do wellnjfijfl Life dndidjbsh Forever ndjdidheokd Then jejdidjsbsj Death jejdsijsn Or not
Good story, well written with good development, there are a few issues that I would call minor, but still enjoyed reading this greatly.72252(72(8258/58528258258/58/585/8/58/58258528/58-58-584-58-585858585-&(—8518158188
if the mc is an heretic wouldn't he be able to siphon himself like in the vampire diaries but more on a greater scale because his is the original heretic
Vera good story , looking forward to next chapters, the grammar in good, its interesting , very well written , the only thing that bothers me is that the chapters all too long(15 chapters which could be made in like 150 chapters of normal lenght)
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Please don't drop this they always drop original fan fics and this is a good one I like it it has a cool mc plus a good storyline can't wait for more chapters
This was the most beautiful thing I read in a while it tickled my heart and was a great stress relief for all the negativity around caused by the virus
A story with some faults but better writen than 90% of the random reincarnation stories that clutter this site. It is deffinetlly worth a try for all who like stories in the genre.
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an idea of the story is great and has potential, plus the drama is so heavy that it looks like a Mexican soap opera, the personality of the MC is very different from what was written in the introduction in the ves of an Alpha he is a Disney prince charming cliché he had potential and a thousand years to become the op he spent hiding, what did he do with the canon’s future knowledge? he servile king, and bla bla bla to accumulate wealth, being that he is a vampire if he wants something is just a little mind control and that's it. (my grade is not lower because the grammar is good)
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I don't know how i missed this amazing Fanfic but i already love it ! It is amazing and i hope that the author will continue to write .
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I found it extraordinary I truly hope you continue the story The cliffhanger was splendid
MC PASSÍVO ELE DA MUITA RIQUEZA PARA OUTROS DE GRAÇA, E TAMBÉM ELE TEVE PRIMEIRA BANDEIRA VERDE DA SUA PRIMEIRA MULHER, E CONTRUIU O UMA CASA PARA ELA E SEU NTR (SEU IRMÂOS), E TAMBÉM ELE CONTA SUA HISTÓRIAS DA VIDA DELE PARA OUTROS E DEPOIS SOME DA VISTA DELES
Один из Самых скучных работ когда-либо я читал, главного герой неимоверно тупой и дарит другим все бесплатно. да еще гг пассив Один из Самых скучных работ когда-либо я читал, главного герой неимоверно тупой и дарит другим все бесплатно. да еще гг пассив
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ネタバレを明かす long pages made book. a little hard to read though. Once you started reading, you got stuck. Spools on the middle part of the book. Have always had a bit of a hard time with world jumpers. but it works. Not alwasy the most thriling and a bit dispointed in the world chosen. As a hole a solid book.
ネタバレを明かす Honestly in love wonderful job author good concept good writing good overall Novel and You Deserve greatness sir ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Classical beta mc, his woman gave up their child and fucks his brother and you what he does, he builds her a fucking house afterward. He gave the salvortores 100 million dollars cars the first day he meets them, I am surprised he hasn't spread his asshole for them. He even turns random people into powerhouses and gives them all his magical knowledge on a whim. Shittiest taste of women, judging that his first girl cucked and the next Bonnie Bennett who is a pushover for he friend, who he serves like she is his mistress. I have only read a bit about the first volume and the start of marvel where he decided to bend his ass over for natasha too and turn her into a goddess after the first day of meeting her
To be honest, this was a good read, there are mistakes here and there, some questionable decisions by the Main, but it's better than most. My only (biggest)problem with this fic is the pairing, which isn't the author's fault, I merely dislike Bonnie as a character. Beside that, the story feels kinda slow at time. Overall? I'd give it a solid 4,3-4,6 out of 5.
Huge fan of your stories the beginning and original heretic story I like story that start as a self insert in he vampire di are original universe you are one of my favourite Arthur's with how you actuallyy mange your characters ability to actually travel the multiverse with your storyline it's and amazing how you manifest to conect to with the ascension of gods to the multiverse... I was actually hoping to see if you could write an Idea of mine I am not a very good write my self and have dislexia so it is hard to write in a good ways so I normally give ideas and therioes to different writes to see if they use hem and how the develop,, And idea that I have actually had for a long time but no body has actually taking up writing it bu t I read your stories and I would love to see how you could combined it with your story,,,,, the story is where a not a spycopath but some one with few emotions becomes a self insert as klaus milkason but they have no memory of their 1st life as they ask the being who self insert them to make sure the story goes exactly the same as in did in the vampire diaries rite up until klaus write after he brakes his curse from Elaina and just afte he runs of in his wolf form he gains every memory of his first life and the deal he made with the being who reincarnated and because he how he came to this world he gained the ability to be a siphoner but no one know of this ability and he didn't either because it was locked away with his curse and when he was human the reason he wasn't much stronger then a normal human as a werewolf was because of his siphon ability was constantly siphoning his werewolf ability but with his curse broken when he transform back sens is he's becoming stronger and weaker and realise he's a siphoner
ネタバレを明かす A Very underestimated fanfiction, should get more people to read it, very nice and relatable main character, diferent from the usual everyone weaker than me doesn't really matter like we usual get in this supernatural universes fanfictions that is not girl romance, give a more realistic setting to the story. For me this is one of the few vampire diaries fanfiction worth reading.
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So good I have enjoyed the whole of this fanfic it was great. Do wellnjfijfl Life dndidjbsh Forever ndjdidheokd Then jejdidjsbsj Death jejdsijsn Or not
Good story, well written with good development, there are a few issues that I would call minor, but still enjoyed reading this greatly.72252(72(8258/58528258258/58/585/8/58/58258528/58-58-584-58-585858585-&(—8518158188
if the mc is an heretic wouldn't he be able to siphon himself like in the vampire diaries but more on a greater scale because his is the original heretic
Vera good story , looking forward to next chapters, the grammar in good, its interesting , very well written , the only thing that bothers me is that the chapters all too long(15 chapters which could be made in like 150 chapters of normal lenght)
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Please don't drop this they always drop original fan fics and this is a good one I like it it has a cool mc plus a good storyline can't wait for more chapters
This was the most beautiful thing I read in a while it tickled my heart and was a great stress relief for all the negativity around caused by the virus
A story with some faults but better writen than 90% of the random reincarnation stories that clutter this site. It is deffinetlly worth a try for all who like stories in the genre.
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an idea of the story is great and has potential, plus the drama is so heavy that it looks like a Mexican soap opera, the personality of the MC is very different from what was written in the introduction in the ves of an Alpha he is a Disney prince charming cliché he had potential and a thousand years to become the op he spent hiding, what did he do with the canon’s future knowledge? he servile king, and bla bla bla to accumulate wealth, being that he is a vampire if he wants something is just a little mind control and that's it. (my grade is not lower because the grammar is good)
ネタバレを明かす I don't know how i missed this amazing Fanfic but i already love it ! It is amazing and i hope that the author will continue to write .
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I found it extraordinary I truly hope you continue the story The cliffhanger was splendid