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GODDAMN I ain't ever been willing to do a review cause screw that noise but this is too damn good to not give a high ass score and tell you beautiful peoples that this is hella good
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Stop being a baby, the story is great continue doing it please. Hahaha I’m kidding but seriously tho I like the story I hope you keep it up and if you do drop it let us know!!!
Damn your characters are interesting and would be fun to explore the way you’ve built the world so far shows that there’s more than meets the eye and you’ve taken aspects of the DC universe that not a lot of people have gone through in fanfiction‘s that I’ve read so far I don’t know about everybody else but I do enjoy reading this hopefully more chapters to come one thing that I feel needs to work on is how with a Shazam character in all comics he still just a kid and only his powers make him look like an ***** which is cool everything but if you got to use this aspect in your book hopefully you actually get to the portion where he is an ***** Hopefully that makes sense Well anyway great book so far hope to read more
Only negatives are the silly wishes and stability of update Otherwise this novel is a gem In depth details regarding mc thoughts and plans, really intriguing work
So I didn’t give it five stars because it is not a finished product (** will come back and give a review when it’s completed) and so far what I’ve seen is that there is updates but it is infrequent but they have pumped them out every 1-3 days so you don’t know when you’re going to get the next chapter. Now with negatives aside this is a great product. In that they tie in allot of elements from the DC universe in with so far little to no flaws through out the book and so far no glaring grammatical errors (unlike other fanfics on this site). Another positive is the pitfalls of many fanfics like Op mc/ harem mcs which so far he has not implemented :). Finally this title starts with a mc that can be built upon and grown into something that I think we as an audience can appreciate. So final review my personal review on this fanfic is a (can’t give it a numerical grade with the stars) 9.75/10 also side note thanks for all the hard work that you put in author even though I just binged all your work. Stay healthy, safe, and clean through these trying times- BallisticBunny
(Português) espero que você continue a história, estou gostando muito dela. ................... .............................................
This story has developed well and I hope it keeps going........................................................................................................
Aside from updates (I can wait if it's for quality **** and this is quality) which I don't mind the novel is clean with only the occasional error in spelling and with how long each chapter is it's understandable if some words are missed. 10/10 novel Don't Drop Don't Drop Don't Drop Don't Drop Don't Drop
This story is loosely tied into authors other fic which is a marvel fic. Starts out a little rough cause of wishes of a naive mc quickly smooths out after fixing mc naivete and giving mc opportunities for power and growth. As of this post cannon dc events have not started but mc should have a decent power level and allies by the time of start. Chapters are large-huge and release rate is very good considering the size of chapters.
As I love this novel, it hurts that the update is very slow. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
I really like your character, I think it is a breath of fresh air to read about someone who will actually use the League instead of destroying them. Although I hope he does not forgive Talia, he really needs to punish her hard. I cannot wait for a new chapter and to see maybe a bit of a time skip or run similar to the time line of Frank Millers The Dark Knight Returns.
love the story keep it up XD, the character's are great and i like that he has shazam's powers and will use them more effectively against his foes.
I really enjoy the story because it's unique the first time I've personally seen a take on DC through the league of assassin's. Also huge props for not giving Mc super op wishes so he can actually develop as a character in this environment.
The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read.
I love the book and you have a great writing style and idea of the story is great and the interaction between characters is great and an extra plus for me is that it is a DC book I like fanfics about DC but most of them are dropped soon after they are started. I don’t usually comment or review I am not lazy but since I’m the latest chapter you said how you fell I will comment and say my opinions more often because this is a great book and I hope you don’t drop it cuz it’s one of the best fan ficus I read. But I suppose the only thing I dislike is updating stability but it isn’t that big of a problem because I don’t have a problem waiting a bit longer
I like this book has good long chps unlike most fanfics on here not slot people comment but they still like it so keep up the hard work I tried writing it was not my calling
I see the sincerity in your heart, my child and I like your writing, keep healthy and struggle and my stones is yours👼👼👼👼👼🏿👼🏿👼🏼👼🏼👼🏿👼🏼👼🏼👼🏿👼🏼....................................................,.....,..,.........................,.,.
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Cliche but there are some interesting plot development and the writing quality is considered well done compared to other fanfics. Although the stability of the updates for each chapter is unpredictable, I think that this fanfic have a lot of potential.
1 2 3 4 I am so very bored 5 6 7 8 when is this going to update 9 10 11 12 I couldn't think of one for this one someone continue 😜😜😜😜😜😜😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😜😜😜
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although it not the nonhuman mc the story itself is beyond good it's eggcellent
A great story was nervous to read because authors other fanfic is sooooo good and I didn't want a lesser story taking up his time but I can happily say this fanfic is just as good as his other
One of my favorite novels personally and I like how much detail is put into it. Keep up the good work!////——-((:((/(:(:(:()/)/$):!);?;&;&;&&;
great story this is one of my favorite dc fanfics and while all the good ones tend to be drop this is one of the few that is continuing strong so I will recommend this to everyone who reads my review
Love reading your work, even tho the updating is a little bit erratic it's good none the less so keep it up. Got a question, what verses will you be doing for example; arrowverse, flashverse, Legends of Tomorrow. SO ON AND SO FORTH
Really good so far, I like the starting zone for the main character really unique really really unique. I hope the mc conqueror Talia some how..........................................
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So.... I just caught up on your other story and I just have to say... this is diffrent. I didn't expect you to be bold enough to go through with a torture scene. I thought it was interesting. I also thought that the shazam powers were pretty cool. I didn't expect it. I haven't seen that in q fanfic yet so I gotta give you props.
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GODDAMN I ain't ever been willing to do a review cause screw that noise but this is too damn good to not give a high ass score and tell you beautiful peoples that this is hella good
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Stop being a baby, the story is great continue doing it please. Hahaha I’m kidding but seriously tho I like the story I hope you keep it up and if you do drop it let us know!!!
Damn your characters are interesting and would be fun to explore the way you’ve built the world so far shows that there’s more than meets the eye and you’ve taken aspects of the DC universe that not a lot of people have gone through in fanfiction‘s that I’ve read so far I don’t know about everybody else but I do enjoy reading this hopefully more chapters to come one thing that I feel needs to work on is how with a Shazam character in all comics he still just a kid and only his powers make him look like an ***** which is cool everything but if you got to use this aspect in your book hopefully you actually get to the portion where he is an ***** Hopefully that makes sense Well anyway great book so far hope to read more
Only negatives are the silly wishes and stability of update Otherwise this novel is a gem In depth details regarding mc thoughts and plans, really intriguing work
So I didn’t give it five stars because it is not a finished product (** will come back and give a review when it’s completed) and so far what I’ve seen is that there is updates but it is infrequent but they have pumped them out every 1-3 days so you don’t know when you’re going to get the next chapter. Now with negatives aside this is a great product. In that they tie in allot of elements from the DC universe in with so far little to no flaws through out the book and so far no glaring grammatical errors (unlike other fanfics on this site). Another positive is the pitfalls of many fanfics like Op mc/ harem mcs which so far he has not implemented :). Finally this title starts with a mc that can be built upon and grown into something that I think we as an audience can appreciate. So final review my personal review on this fanfic is a (can’t give it a numerical grade with the stars) 9.75/10 also side note thanks for all the hard work that you put in author even though I just binged all your work. Stay healthy, safe, and clean through these trying times- BallisticBunny
(Português) espero que você continue a história, estou gostando muito dela. ................... .............................................
This story has developed well and I hope it keeps going........................................................................................................
Aside from updates (I can wait if it's for quality **** and this is quality) which I don't mind the novel is clean with only the occasional error in spelling and with how long each chapter is it's understandable if some words are missed. 10/10 novel Don't Drop Don't Drop Don't Drop Don't Drop Don't Drop
This story is loosely tied into authors other fic which is a marvel fic. Starts out a little rough cause of wishes of a naive mc quickly smooths out after fixing mc naivete and giving mc opportunities for power and growth. As of this post cannon dc events have not started but mc should have a decent power level and allies by the time of start. Chapters are large-huge and release rate is very good considering the size of chapters.
As I love this novel, it hurts that the update is very slow. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
I really like your character, I think it is a breath of fresh air to read about someone who will actually use the League instead of destroying them. Although I hope he does not forgive Talia, he really needs to punish her hard. I cannot wait for a new chapter and to see maybe a bit of a time skip or run similar to the time line of Frank Millers The Dark Knight Returns.
love the story keep it up XD, the character's are great and i like that he has shazam's powers and will use them more effectively against his foes.
I really enjoy the story because it's unique the first time I've personally seen a take on DC through the league of assassin's. Also huge props for not giving Mc super op wishes so he can actually develop as a character in this environment.
The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read. The book is a good read.
I love the book and you have a great writing style and idea of the story is great and the interaction between characters is great and an extra plus for me is that it is a DC book I like fanfics about DC but most of them are dropped soon after they are started. I don’t usually comment or review I am not lazy but since I’m the latest chapter you said how you fell I will comment and say my opinions more often because this is a great book and I hope you don’t drop it cuz it’s one of the best fan ficus I read. But I suppose the only thing I dislike is updating stability but it isn’t that big of a problem because I don’t have a problem waiting a bit longer
I like this book has good long chps unlike most fanfics on here not slot people comment but they still like it so keep up the hard work I tried writing it was not my calling
I see the sincerity in your heart, my child and I like your writing, keep healthy and struggle and my stones is yours👼👼👼👼👼🏿👼🏿👼🏼👼🏼👼🏿👼🏼👼🏼👼🏿👼🏼....................................................,.....,..,.........................,.,.
Don’t drop it*\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/* *\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/* *\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/**\(^o^)/*
Cliche but there are some interesting plot development and the writing quality is considered well done compared to other fanfics. Although the stability of the updates for each chapter is unpredictable, I think that this fanfic have a lot of potential.
1 2 3 4 I am so very bored 5 6 7 8 when is this going to update 9 10 11 12 I couldn't think of one for this one someone continue 😜😜😜😜😜😜😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😜😜😜
ネタバレを明かす although it not the nonhuman mc the story itself is beyond good it's eggcellent
A great story was nervous to read because authors other fanfic is sooooo good and I didn't want a lesser story taking up his time but I can happily say this fanfic is just as good as his other
One of my favorite novels personally and I like how much detail is put into it. Keep up the good work!////——-((:((/(:(:(:()/)/$):!);?;&;&;&&;
great story this is one of my favorite dc fanfics and while all the good ones tend to be drop this is one of the few that is continuing strong so I will recommend this to everyone who reads my review
Love reading your work, even tho the updating is a little bit erratic it's good none the less so keep it up. Got a question, what verses will you be doing for example; arrowverse, flashverse, Legends of Tomorrow. SO ON AND SO FORTH
Really good so far, I like the starting zone for the main character really unique really really unique. I hope the mc conqueror Talia some how..........................................
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So.... I just caught up on your other story and I just have to say... this is diffrent. I didn't expect you to be bold enough to go through with a torture scene. I thought it was interesting. I also thought that the shazam powers were pretty cool. I didn't expect it. I haven't seen that in q fanfic yet so I gotta give you props.
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