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I hope the author would release more chapters. It’s definitely rough I hope you can find an editor. Thanks for an interesting read though. I’m giving 5 stars not cause u deserve it more like I hope it motivates you!
Its as interesting as it sounds but why the low rating....extremely short chps...most of it is info...character development is almost non exisitent...by reading the latest chp..I think its safe to assume the MC is going to be an issei type generic SI -MC that just travels worlds and collects women...hopefully I am wrong and everything will improve cause the concept of this ff is quite interesting
Lots of jumping around without any explanations as for why. He didn't do anything in the first world before moving to the next.
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I hope the author would release more chapters. It’s definitely rough I hope you can find an editor. Thanks for an interesting read though. I’m giving 5 stars not cause u deserve it more like I hope it motivates you!
Its as interesting as it sounds but why the low rating....extremely short chps...most of it is info...character development is almost non exisitent...by reading the latest chp..I think its safe to assume the MC is going to be an issei type generic SI -MC that just travels worlds and collects women...hopefully I am wrong and everything will improve cause the concept of this ff is quite interesting
Lots of jumping around without any explanations as for why. He didn't do anything in the first world before moving to the next.