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I just wanted to ask if you are done writing this? I thought it was really really good and didn’t want to get my hopes up If you are done with it.
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Good development you could ease up on the willing to kill attitude a bit but all in all very good job keep it up All this book needs is a consistent and timely update schedule and your golden.
I love your thought process of what you are doing to this book it’s amazing of how you can just see the ideas rolling off this book like what if you add other things to this like supernatural and others
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Honestly,so far so good.I m not a picky reader. As long as you didnt throw in some japanese cliche beta mc that got pull into all sort of stuff and still smile foolishly,and been driven like slave for no reward other than a hug and a kiss... For me,stable release, good grammar and great story idea and concept is enough to hook me in. Your concept is not as much fresh,but still above average and i love how he is one very determined character that really could stand on his own feet rather than some other mc that just had tons of skill like Tiberius but instead of using it,they hide it and only get it out when the situation is in dire..
tiene un buen desarrollo historia tiene un protagonista que no están entre el bien y el mal la verdad todo a su favor como el quiere y después de que no cambia repentinamente eso es lo único que he visto interesa bastante este fic y espero que haya más en el futuro
in synopsis say ***** content .. then in story i read you skip lemon scene T_T ..............................................................................................
Back at the latest chapter 13 and still love it and can't wait to see what happens next❤👍
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
I didn't think at first i would like this fanfic as much as i do, but with all the scheming and power he holds(not op, just power as in his standing in wizard Society) as well as with Hermione who I've always liked for her intelligence and comon sense being his love intrest❤, (that ron clearly never had) I'm finding myself impatiently waiting for more updates😁 keep up the good work👍
I'm my biggest fan and I'm giving myself 5 stars. Come in, stay awhile, and share it with you friends. This story will bring a hall new approach to crossover and the journey to Godhood with a self made OP MC.
it's obviously going to be good when made by this author it has his standard theme of kind, and caring to those mc loves, but completely ruthless any other time, and will do anything for power. if you honestly expected something different then you're insane if you like this dude's other storys you'll like this one
I just wanted to ask if you are done writing this? I thought it was really really good and didn’t want to get my hopes up If you are done with it.
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Good development you could ease up on the willing to kill attitude a bit but all in all very good job keep it up All this book needs is a consistent and timely update schedule and your golden.
I love your thought process of what you are doing to this book it’s amazing of how you can just see the ideas rolling off this book like what if you add other things to this like supernatural and others
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Honestly,so far so good.I m not a picky reader. As long as you didnt throw in some japanese cliche beta mc that got pull into all sort of stuff and still smile foolishly,and been driven like slave for no reward other than a hug and a kiss... For me,stable release, good grammar and great story idea and concept is enough to hook me in. Your concept is not as much fresh,but still above average and i love how he is one very determined character that really could stand on his own feet rather than some other mc that just had tons of skill like Tiberius but instead of using it,they hide it and only get it out when the situation is in dire..
tiene un buen desarrollo historia tiene un protagonista que no están entre el bien y el mal la verdad todo a su favor como el quiere y después de que no cambia repentinamente eso es lo único que he visto interesa bastante este fic y espero que haya más en el futuro
in synopsis say ***** content .. then in story i read you skip lemon scene T_T ..............................................................................................
Back at the latest chapter 13 and still love it and can't wait to see what happens next❤👍
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
I didn't think at first i would like this fanfic as much as i do, but with all the scheming and power he holds(not op, just power as in his standing in wizard Society) as well as with Hermione who I've always liked for her intelligence and comon sense being his love intrest❤, (that ron clearly never had) I'm finding myself impatiently waiting for more updates😁 keep up the good work👍
I'm my biggest fan and I'm giving myself 5 stars. Come in, stay awhile, and share it with you friends. This story will bring a hall new approach to crossover and the journey to Godhood with a self made OP MC.
it's obviously going to be good when made by this author it has his standard theme of kind, and caring to those mc loves, but completely ruthless any other time, and will do anything for power. if you honestly expected something different then you're insane if you like this dude's other storys you'll like this one