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This story is by far one of the most awesome necromancer books I’ve read said to see it just collect dust even though it really is a hidden gem I would love to see it be expanded upon and hopefully the author picks back up instead of letting it sit
Novel is monotonous you would think its slice of life the plot stagnates and the worldbuilding is minimal the main character is not a protagonist because he takes no initiative and simply follows others the mc is a blank sheet even after tens of chapters, losing his memory was interesting but now its an excuse to prolong the novel Grammar is good but it takes more than that to write a good story Overall the novel will put you to sleep because there is no suspense or anything to keep your attention, mediocre at best
Well I’m done. The deadline has passed, and he’s gone dark. It’s a great read, and the only thing you’ll regret when reading it is that its not finished. Best of luck everyone.
I know you dropped the novel, but I want you to know that your novel is great!.…................................................... ........
love this to pieces and cant wait for the new chapters also can someone please explain to me why reviews have a word min cuse this mini rant is just to fill to that
Hes coming back soon y’all! Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Expect it sometime in December or January.
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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Hi author! I only read the synopsis so far but I can feel the story is very promising. However its been months since the last chapter was updated. I would love to read your novel but I really dont like to read an unfinished work. So I hope it would not be dropped forever. Pls continue to write!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
I really liked the story and the fights, the character's skills are very well explained which makes reading very realistic without those boring lapses of power when the protagonist needs it. I didn't understand why you stopped posting out of nowhere, I really hope you come back because this work ended up becoming one of my favorites for being realistic and also because I always like necromancers
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I read a few chapters and so far i like it, however....i can't help but notice that there a few updates in this novel in the last few months so i'm not going to continue reading it until it reach 300 chapters at least,
A very engaging story with multiple views into this exciting world, if this story restarts I have high hopes for where it goes from here.
I am really invested in this book! Can't wait for the next chapters to be released. The author does a great job of reeling you into this storyline.
All I can see is a person being used as a test subject. Nothing more. I would rather live in wild than with people who doesn't even tries to lend a hand and makes me go through such pain of one's soul getting torn apart repeatedly even when I am too weak( the person even said earlier that I might die anytime as my soul fire is just a flickering flame.). The father just makes the already weakened man to tear apart more of his soul until he collapses and wakes up to the smell of food. And after that they talk as if everything is normal and it is just another day. A human who feels pain will stop even if someone is telling them to keep tearing thier soul apart. And the mc in the story is just following whatever is being said to him to the word.. he doesn't have any other interaction.
I’m really enjoying the new take on necromancy and the mc is pretty interesting. I’m a little worried that the author hasn’t put anything out for 2 months as I want to continue the series
Really love this novel hope the writer can come back soon to continue with his work. The review is supposed to be longer so I’ll say it reminds me of D&D with the races so it’s easy to pick up.
XP................................... But yes, it’s a good story with so little bad points they are negligible. The rest comes to personal tastes.
Esta historia me parece increíble y de muy buena calidad el problema que veo que lleva 1 mes y medio sin actualizarse Alguien puede decirme por qué o si solo se ha detenido temporalmente? Porque no veo explicado en ningún comentario el por qué se ha detenido la actualización de capítulos
It’s pretty good..................................................................................................................................
la portada me párese interesante ..voy a darle una oportunidad... esperfaffffffffffffffffffffffffccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
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Is really hard to find well written stories like this one, it has a solid narrative and adds many new elements to the gender, Unlike many novels that i have read so far this one dont overuse the common factors of today´s fantasy stories. it makes want to write one on my own! good work!
This is really good👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Amazing story so far, came across this whilst searching for a kingdom-building novel and can't be more happy with what I found. Love the concept of necromancy and the subordinates so far have been really interesting to say the least. The power he has seems elaborate and mysterious so far and I'm looking forward to finding out more as it reveals itself through the story. Worldbuilding has been great so far with a few tidbits here and there to make it intriguing enough. I like the idea of building a city for himself and the troops/subordinates he manages and slowly seeing the progress of that whilst the story continues. The races seem a little cookie cutter but I don't mind that, it's a standard Human Dwarf Elf story with a spin of a variety of invading races. The godhood hasn't been explained enough for me to judge but it seems like an interesting spin on that regular 3 race formula in his home world. The creatures have been superb and the images on the discord really help to form an idea of what they look like, even though the book itself describes it in enough detail aswell. The writing is great and feels professional, not much to add there beyond that the grammar and words used feel great in combination; making for a pleasant reading experience. Read on the discord that the Author just got out of the hospital for Corona, hope you get resettled soon and feel better! Take your time and I'll continue reading once you come back. Thanks for writing Author! (*˘︶˘*).｡*♡
The reason that it was not 5 star is because of the updates. I just recently read this novel and I saw that the latest update was 12 days ago. I can understand that it might be because the author has some health problems but I am still giving the stability of updates a 4 stars. When it comes to the novel itself, I love the story and the diversity of races and creatures in the novel itself. I hope that this novel is not dropped in the future as I have been heartbroken when great novels just suddenly stop updating, even the translated one. Anyway, great job and keep it up, this is my 2nd favorite original novel next to Chrysalis and I hope that it picks up steam like that novel. And I hope that you include a snake like race in the future too.
Nicely balanced, intriguing story Seems just average the first couple of chapters, but it has a rich background Would rate it to be at the same level as coiling dragon
Hello fellow Webnovel readers, Author here with a shameless 5 star self review as is tradition. I began reading reading webnovels about 2-3 years ago and fell in love instantly in part due to the sheer length of webnovels. I am a man with entirely too much free time so 2000+ chapters gives me days of entertainment. About a month ago i began writing about an interesting world/universe idea for a novel and before i knew it the world building notes were almost 50 pages long before i had even written a word of the actual story. I am still fairly new to writing so feel free to criticize, as it will only help me improve. Anyway, i hope you all enjoy this world that i have crafted and if you have any questions feel free to ask!
This story is by far one of the most awesome necromancer books I’ve read said to see it just collect dust even though it really is a hidden gem I would love to see it be expanded upon and hopefully the author picks back up instead of letting it sit
Novel is monotonous you would think its slice of life the plot stagnates and the worldbuilding is minimal the main character is not a protagonist because he takes no initiative and simply follows others the mc is a blank sheet even after tens of chapters, losing his memory was interesting but now its an excuse to prolong the novel Grammar is good but it takes more than that to write a good story Overall the novel will put you to sleep because there is no suspense or anything to keep your attention, mediocre at best
Well I’m done. The deadline has passed, and he’s gone dark. It’s a great read, and the only thing you’ll regret when reading it is that its not finished. Best of luck everyone.
I know you dropped the novel, but I want you to know that your novel is great!.…................................................... ........
love this to pieces and cant wait for the new chapters also can someone please explain to me why reviews have a word min cuse this mini rant is just to fill to that
Hes coming back soon y’all! Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Expect it sometime in December or January.
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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Hi author! I only read the synopsis so far but I can feel the story is very promising. However its been months since the last chapter was updated. I would love to read your novel but I really dont like to read an unfinished work. So I hope it would not be dropped forever. Pls continue to write!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
I really liked the story and the fights, the character's skills are very well explained which makes reading very realistic without those boring lapses of power when the protagonist needs it. I didn't understand why you stopped posting out of nowhere, I really hope you come back because this work ended up becoming one of my favorites for being realistic and also because I always like necromancers
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I read a few chapters and so far i like it, however....i can't help but notice that there a few updates in this novel in the last few months so i'm not going to continue reading it until it reach 300 chapters at least,
A very engaging story with multiple views into this exciting world, if this story restarts I have high hopes for where it goes from here.
I am really invested in this book! Can't wait for the next chapters to be released. The author does a great job of reeling you into this storyline.
All I can see is a person being used as a test subject. Nothing more. I would rather live in wild than with people who doesn't even tries to lend a hand and makes me go through such pain of one's soul getting torn apart repeatedly even when I am too weak( the person even said earlier that I might die anytime as my soul fire is just a flickering flame.). The father just makes the already weakened man to tear apart more of his soul until he collapses and wakes up to the smell of food. And after that they talk as if everything is normal and it is just another day. A human who feels pain will stop even if someone is telling them to keep tearing thier soul apart. And the mc in the story is just following whatever is being said to him to the word.. he doesn't have any other interaction.
I’m really enjoying the new take on necromancy and the mc is pretty interesting. I’m a little worried that the author hasn’t put anything out for 2 months as I want to continue the series
Really love this novel hope the writer can come back soon to continue with his work. The review is supposed to be longer so I’ll say it reminds me of D&D with the races so it’s easy to pick up.
XP................................... But yes, it’s a good story with so little bad points they are negligible. The rest comes to personal tastes.
Esta historia me parece increíble y de muy buena calidad el problema que veo que lleva 1 mes y medio sin actualizarse Alguien puede decirme por qué o si solo se ha detenido temporalmente? Porque no veo explicado en ningún comentario el por qué se ha detenido la actualización de capítulos
It’s pretty good..................................................................................................................................
la portada me párese interesante ..voy a darle una oportunidad... esperfaffffffffffffffffffffffffccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
ネタバレを明かす Is really hard to find well written stories like this one, it has a solid narrative and adds many new elements to the gender, Unlike many novels that i have read so far this one dont overuse the common factors of today´s fantasy stories. it makes want to write one on my own! good work!
This is really good👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Amazing story so far, came across this whilst searching for a kingdom-building novel and can't be more happy with what I found. Love the concept of necromancy and the subordinates so far have been really interesting to say the least. The power he has seems elaborate and mysterious so far and I'm looking forward to finding out more as it reveals itself through the story. Worldbuilding has been great so far with a few tidbits here and there to make it intriguing enough. I like the idea of building a city for himself and the troops/subordinates he manages and slowly seeing the progress of that whilst the story continues. The races seem a little cookie cutter but I don't mind that, it's a standard Human Dwarf Elf story with a spin of a variety of invading races. The godhood hasn't been explained enough for me to judge but it seems like an interesting spin on that regular 3 race formula in his home world. The creatures have been superb and the images on the discord really help to form an idea of what they look like, even though the book itself describes it in enough detail aswell. The writing is great and feels professional, not much to add there beyond that the grammar and words used feel great in combination; making for a pleasant reading experience. Read on the discord that the Author just got out of the hospital for Corona, hope you get resettled soon and feel better! Take your time and I'll continue reading once you come back. Thanks for writing Author! (*˘︶˘*).｡*♡
The reason that it was not 5 star is because of the updates. I just recently read this novel and I saw that the latest update was 12 days ago. I can understand that it might be because the author has some health problems but I am still giving the stability of updates a 4 stars. When it comes to the novel itself, I love the story and the diversity of races and creatures in the novel itself. I hope that this novel is not dropped in the future as I have been heartbroken when great novels just suddenly stop updating, even the translated one. Anyway, great job and keep it up, this is my 2nd favorite original novel next to Chrysalis and I hope that it picks up steam like that novel. And I hope that you include a snake like race in the future too.
Nicely balanced, intriguing story Seems just average the first couple of chapters, but it has a rich background Would rate it to be at the same level as coiling dragon
Hello fellow Webnovel readers, Author here with a shameless 5 star self review as is tradition. I began reading reading webnovels about 2-3 years ago and fell in love instantly in part due to the sheer length of webnovels. I am a man with entirely too much free time so 2000+ chapters gives me days of entertainment. About a month ago i began writing about an interesting world/universe idea for a novel and before i knew it the world building notes were almost 50 pages long before i had even written a word of the actual story. I am still fairly new to writing so feel free to criticize, as it will only help me improve. Anyway, i hope you all enjoy this world that i have crafted and if you have any questions feel free to ask!