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The idea of it is quite nice but everything else is like "meh". This story seems more of a wish-fulfillment one rather than a normal fanfic. The growth of the MC seems so slow, the level of intelligence of the MC seems a bit low, although the powers might be good, the execution was a bit bad. Even the fact that he claims he read many novels but in different worlds, he was portrayed to be ignorant of some events. The worst thing that threw me off of this novel was the grammar. Dude, you could've installed Grammarly while writing this thing. Even the romance sucks, it's like he meets someone and then they just want him. I dont know why authors have this obsession of making their MC way too handsome for the audience. I see no point in it if it has no substance.
too childish I will only say that and nothing else this is not to criticize the author everyone is free to create and do what they want but simply too childish for me I will read something else but I will leave the 5 stars out of boredom.
novel ini bagus, dan ceritanya agak santai jadi bisa dinikmati, ditambah sifat MCnya juga menyenangkan, tetapi sayangnya novel ini sudah dropped 2 tahun lalu, ditambahnya lagi saya baru tau bahwa ada novel yang bagus seperti ini:'(
it is a great novel..................................................................It's stupid you have to type 140 letters to post review................................
It leaves much to be desired. The mc itself is just nerfed in general. mc just has low self esteem combined with low intelligence. like mc cowering to a weaker enemy than himself...really?! Getting walked on by his female...He has such a pushover mentality.
Jajajajajajajajaja seguí seguí está interesante la novela 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Language needs a lot of work it's a mess. The story not bad MC is just annoying. It's one of those give power to a annoying childish idiot. Honestly has potential just needs a better MC preferably one with a brain. Best of luck with your story author I'm out
lusting over a grandmaa. MC really have low standards author have so many options but because dxd world has so many beauties and MC settled on a more than 200 year old married grand maa I just got disappointed
He is Complete push over He gives his wife the strength, save her and still help her but she orders him whether he can have another wife or not (he is afraid of his wife) he is super strong but when he meets gremory and sitri they act as if they are superior and he doesn't do anything and they're still asking for compensation for beating fallen Angel
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it's a great book. U normally read this genre and I was still suprized at this book. I hope the author continues the book. I love it a lot.
Writing Quality 1/5 Stability of Updates 3/5 Story Development 2/5 Character Design 1/5 World Background 4/5 "11 inches" Siempre me sorprende, como una frase estupida puede completamente arruinar mi percepcion de una historia (sobre todo si es al el principio).
V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V HMmm!!!!!!!! ok.’ Okokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokok
1 Wish alucards blondine withaut his weak Pointe FuCk we need rosseweisse in harem 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😉😁😁😁😀😀😁😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I like the story development well.. if the Author is reading this review please DON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORYDON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORY
This? It's not a fanfic, that's a badly done parody of a fanfic, I... can't unsee it now. It's so disgustingly horrible that I regret that I even saw the first chap and I'm immensely regretting it now.
NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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The story is not good there is not enough character building or any explanation of the world he is currently in other than a summary of levels of power and the mc goes through no struggle due to his OP system.overall it's a childish story written by someone out of boredom rather than passion
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I just finished chapter 135 and I'm loving the story and characters but is this the end or are you still writing somewhere else
The idea of it is quite nice but everything else is like "meh". This story seems more of a wish-fulfillment one rather than a normal fanfic. The growth of the MC seems so slow, the level of intelligence of the MC seems a bit low, although the powers might be good, the execution was a bit bad. Even the fact that he claims he read many novels but in different worlds, he was portrayed to be ignorant of some events. The worst thing that threw me off of this novel was the grammar. Dude, you could've installed Grammarly while writing this thing. Even the romance sucks, it's like he meets someone and then they just want him. I dont know why authors have this obsession of making their MC way too handsome for the audience. I see no point in it if it has no substance.
too childish I will only say that and nothing else this is not to criticize the author everyone is free to create and do what they want but simply too childish for me I will read something else but I will leave the 5 stars out of boredom.
novel ini bagus, dan ceritanya agak santai jadi bisa dinikmati, ditambah sifat MCnya juga menyenangkan, tetapi sayangnya novel ini sudah dropped 2 tahun lalu, ditambahnya lagi saya baru tau bahwa ada novel yang bagus seperti ini:'(
it is a great novel..................................................................It's stupid you have to type 140 letters to post review................................
It leaves much to be desired. The mc itself is just nerfed in general. mc just has low self esteem combined with low intelligence. like mc cowering to a weaker enemy than himself...really?! Getting walked on by his female...He has such a pushover mentality.
Jajajajajajajajaja seguí seguí está interesante la novela 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Language needs a lot of work it's a mess. The story not bad MC is just annoying. It's one of those give power to a annoying childish idiot. Honestly has potential just needs a better MC preferably one with a brain. Best of luck with your story author I'm out
lusting over a grandmaa. MC really have low standards author have so many options but because dxd world has so many beauties and MC settled on a more than 200 year old married grand maa I just got disappointed
He is Complete push over He gives his wife the strength, save her and still help her but she orders him whether he can have another wife or not (he is afraid of his wife) he is super strong but when he meets gremory and sitri they act as if they are superior and he doesn't do anything and they're still asking for compensation for beating fallen Angel
add add add add add add new new new new new new new chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter. add add add add add add
it's a great book. U normally read this genre and I was still suprized at this book. I hope the author continues the book. I love it a lot.
Writing Quality 1/5 Stability of Updates 3/5 Story Development 2/5 Character Design 1/5 World Background 4/5 "11 inches" Siempre me sorprende, como una frase estupida puede completamente arruinar mi percepcion de una historia (sobre todo si es al el principio).
V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V HMmm!!!!!!!! ok.’ Okokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokok
1 Wish alucards blondine withaut his weak Pointe FuCk we need rosseweisse in harem 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😉😁😁😁😀😀😁😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I like the story development well.. if the Author is reading this review please DON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORYDON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORY DON'T DROP THIS STORY
This? It's not a fanfic, that's a badly done parody of a fanfic, I... can't unsee it now. It's so disgustingly horrible that I regret that I even saw the first chap and I'm immensely regretting it now.
NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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The story is not good there is not enough character building or any explanation of the world he is currently in other than a summary of levels of power and the mc goes through no struggle due to his OP system.overall it's a childish story written by someone out of boredom rather than passion
More release plz More release plz More release plz More release plz More release plz👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I just finished chapter 135 and I'm loving the story and characters but is this the end or are you still writing somewhere else