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Soooo Goooood. please dont drop. this thing is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥. No lie. observe the flames and see how good it is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Interesting...........................(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)........ ..............................(ㆁωㆁ)...................... .......✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧.................................◉‿◉ ..............................(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)....................... Yawwnnnn.......................... (~‿~)Zzz...
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the whole concept is great this would be an amazing book if the book was a little better written, but I think you deserve a pat on the back for making something this creative. I haven't read something like this before and it was really good. but again sorry I just can't get over the grammer mistakes sorry😕
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That was a really good novel with great story. It's a shame that the author decide to drop this. Sorry for my bad english it is not my first language
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i loved it...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing Quality is below Average The author goes from 1st Person to 3rd, the word "for" is used too much come on dude you can use a lot of words with the same/close meaning to it. Story Development is ok but can use more work, don't add useless stuff that won't help the story/plot. Character Design is average, Author doesn't really explain a lot about people who are the subordinates of MC only exception is MC, Family and Powerful people. World Background is Good cause author explains a lot about the Apocalypse. OK read if you want to read some apocalypse novels.
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Good novel............................................................... ...........,............................................ . ...................
The writing quality is good but it's a grammatical horror show. The character and story development are good and the plot holds great potential for growth. The story has been pretty darn funny by far. However, the author updates very erratically and you may have to wait for over a month for a single chapter. As of the date when I'm posting this comment, there's no confirmation whether the author has gone on a hiatus or dropped the novel altogether. Warning: It's a great read, but don't start reading unless you're fine with never getting to the end of it.
Mc is one hell of a crazy guy. He’s not hesitated at all when he committed suicide (meaning, it may trigger some readers, so please consider this aspect of novel before reading - just because Mc can disregard his own life does not means the other should follow his example). The author really creative when he utilize Mc’s power, cause Mc to be able to do something similar to teleport. This guy is also crazy enough to kill himself so many times to gain point or grid skills. (Well, consider his past life, it is to be expected for Mc to be a bit of a bonker). Any future plans to created a bunker in the apocalypse are quite promising, but sadly because of the disappearance of the author, we are unable to see it come to fruition.
All I can say is, the book is good but I'd have preferred if he had a limited chance to respawn daily. It gets boring real fast when the protagonist is practically immortal.
I’m like 80% I already reviewed this book but the review disappeared so imma be lazy and instead of the several paragraph review that is supposed be here I’ll give a summary instead of my old review Amazing job on your MCs ability most authors even with said ability would rarely kill MC but in your book he dies several times in some chapters so good job on that I know that was a lazy bad and uninspiring review but whatever too lazy to type anything longer sorry 😐 not my fault my old one disappeared I’ve read up to chapter 74-76 or something and new chapters are out but I’m letting them build up because i can read the like 14 new chapters in one sitting easy
MC is not your typical overly righteous guy nor the type that would seek vengeance against a rival(as of now). Though I can feel the potential main villain. The writing can be fixed and there must be some sort of transitioning of perspectives and no abrupt changes from 1st person to 3rd person. The story is awesome and has the potential to be great among post-apocalyptic genre. The author MUST CONTINUE and NOT DROP this novel. Though you must thoroughly think about future plot scenarios and other characters that may be introduced.
This story is one of my favorites and one of the few where I don't mind waiting for updates. The story progress is great and I have no real complaints about anything. This is a great story.
The concept of the book is just wonderfully made. I mean not being able to die to anything at the beginning of the apocalypse and having the knowledge of future events is a match made in heaven in my books. Any awesome story keep up the good work 👍!
It’s interesting the mc personality is an acquired taste but still so far so good I neither love nor hate this I’m somewhere in the middle his sister tho I hate her that I’m 100% sure of can’t stand her not even a little bit if only I could reach int this novel sadly I don’t have that ability for now but fingers crossed I’ll still continue reading this though it passes the time just don’t take it to seriously like I made the unfortunate mistake of doing
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So here my first time writing review. Edgy mc and nice world building. Although some plot feels of for me, this is an entertaining novel to read nonetheless. Haha Keep the good work author!
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I don't care about the stats lol! I just like it so much that I give it 5 stars for it to be at least a little more famous. I'm not kidding! It really is excellent so you should read it whenever you have time
This novel reminds me of manga know as king of apocalypse... Mc and sister... blood rain.. otherworlders... stuff like that... sister different type of human...
Really enjoying this story. It's a very interesting take. Can't wait for more. Given the stuff already referenced in the story makes me think this is going to be an amazing ride. (Trying to praise without spoiling)
i really liked the plot and read 89 chapters in 2 days, sadly this has been dropped! wish the author will have a change of mind or just one day going to surprise all of us with a mass release 😞💀
Soooo Goooood. please dont drop. this thing is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥. No lie. observe the flames and see how good it is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Interesting...........................(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)........ ..............................(ㆁωㆁ)...................... .......✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧.................................◉‿◉ ..............................(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)....................... Yawwnnnn.......................... (~‿~)Zzz...
WHY DROP IT.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
the whole concept is great this would be an amazing book if the book was a little better written, but I think you deserve a pat on the back for making something this creative. I haven't read something like this before and it was really good. but again sorry I just can't get over the grammer mistakes sorry😕
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That was a really good novel with great story. It's a shame that the author decide to drop this. Sorry for my bad english it is not my first language
author come back..................[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i loved it...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing Quality is below Average The author goes from 1st Person to 3rd, the word "for" is used too much come on dude you can use a lot of words with the same/close meaning to it. Story Development is ok but can use more work, don't add useless stuff that won't help the story/plot. Character Design is average, Author doesn't really explain a lot about people who are the subordinates of MC only exception is MC, Family and Powerful people. World Background is Good cause author explains a lot about the Apocalypse. OK read if you want to read some apocalypse novels.
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Good novel............................................................... ...........,............................................ . ...................
The writing quality is good but it's a grammatical horror show. The character and story development are good and the plot holds great potential for growth. The story has been pretty darn funny by far. However, the author updates very erratically and you may have to wait for over a month for a single chapter. As of the date when I'm posting this comment, there's no confirmation whether the author has gone on a hiatus or dropped the novel altogether. Warning: It's a great read, but don't start reading unless you're fine with never getting to the end of it.
Mc is one hell of a crazy guy. He’s not hesitated at all when he committed suicide (meaning, it may trigger some readers, so please consider this aspect of novel before reading - just because Mc can disregard his own life does not means the other should follow his example). The author really creative when he utilize Mc’s power, cause Mc to be able to do something similar to teleport. This guy is also crazy enough to kill himself so many times to gain point or grid skills. (Well, consider his past life, it is to be expected for Mc to be a bit of a bonker). Any future plans to created a bunker in the apocalypse are quite promising, but sadly because of the disappearance of the author, we are unable to see it come to fruition.
All I can say is, the book is good but I'd have preferred if he had a limited chance to respawn daily. It gets boring real fast when the protagonist is practically immortal.
I’m like 80% I already reviewed this book but the review disappeared so imma be lazy and instead of the several paragraph review that is supposed be here I’ll give a summary instead of my old review Amazing job on your MCs ability most authors even with said ability would rarely kill MC but in your book he dies several times in some chapters so good job on that I know that was a lazy bad and uninspiring review but whatever too lazy to type anything longer sorry 😐 not my fault my old one disappeared I’ve read up to chapter 74-76 or something and new chapters are out but I’m letting them build up because i can read the like 14 new chapters in one sitting easy
MC is not your typical overly righteous guy nor the type that would seek vengeance against a rival(as of now). Though I can feel the potential main villain. The writing can be fixed and there must be some sort of transitioning of perspectives and no abrupt changes from 1st person to 3rd person. The story is awesome and has the potential to be great among post-apocalyptic genre. The author MUST CONTINUE and NOT DROP this novel. Though you must thoroughly think about future plot scenarios and other characters that may be introduced.
This story is one of my favorites and one of the few where I don't mind waiting for updates. The story progress is great and I have no real complaints about anything. This is a great story.
The concept of the book is just wonderfully made. I mean not being able to die to anything at the beginning of the apocalypse and having the knowledge of future events is a match made in heaven in my books. Any awesome story keep up the good work 👍!
It’s interesting the mc personality is an acquired taste but still so far so good I neither love nor hate this I’m somewhere in the middle his sister tho I hate her that I’m 100% sure of can’t stand her not even a little bit if only I could reach int this novel sadly I don’t have that ability for now but fingers crossed I’ll still continue reading this though it passes the time just don’t take it to seriously like I made the unfortunate mistake of doing
Hopes mc get sloth Ksjnsjsksksksksosksksksksksjsjznsnznznsnsnzznsnsnkssksmsmsmzmzmznznsbsnanzsj in nnzsnsnznsnznzkzkzkkzkzmzkznznzzbsbs snsnsjss s sjsnz sja asks zkanznaks z
So here my first time writing review. Edgy mc and nice world building. Although some plot feels of for me, this is an entertaining novel to read nonetheless. Haha Keep the good work author!
Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring Cool start and then ... Boring
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!
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I don't care about the stats lol! I just like it so much that I give it 5 stars for it to be at least a little more famous. I'm not kidding! It really is excellent so you should read it whenever you have time
This novel reminds me of manga know as king of apocalypse... Mc and sister... blood rain.. otherworlders... stuff like that... sister different type of human...
Really enjoying this story. It's a very interesting take. Can't wait for more. Given the stuff already referenced in the story makes me think this is going to be an amazing ride. (Trying to praise without spoiling)
i really liked the plot and read 89 chapters in 2 days, sadly this has been dropped! wish the author will have a change of mind or just one day going to surprise all of us with a mass release 😞💀