Onepiece Magic Summoner

LV 4

amaturewriter

I really liked the concept....its DOPE...the MC's power is the definition of a one man army....BUT!.. this ****er spend 10 years fighting 200 million levels beasts and couldnt find stronger animals? thats BS...and what the hell? he didnt learn haki? he could've easily found some new world pirate [cause he was at that level and be self taught or hell he could've just gotten the marine training manuals from the underworld..or for some other BS reason..PLUS..he has the ability to learn 10 times faster and he took 10 years to reach mid-high tier vice admiral level? Stupid..he should've joined/created a friendly relationship with an emperor or hell even reighling [sorry for misspelling] or Grap..Point is this ****er is too weak for his DOPE powers and accomplished nothing in 10 years..plus joining luffys crew is stupid cause its overdone... Quite tragic cause this would've been an epic book if done well..

LV 14

jonathan_galael

good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good......better cont author good development