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It is absolutely, horrifyingly, exceptionally, cheesingly awesome ! Like really really awesome, the best fate fanfic and one of the overall best fanfics in this website.
For now I'm going to give this rating based on the reviews that are given to this wonderful fanfic. Although I haven't really read it because I don't have time, but from the way the reviews said, it must really be a good fanfic. One quick question though, does this have romance?.....
"The Prince Of Magic" has one of the best writing and best prologue I have read for sometime. Making the MC came from the world of FFXV to Typemoon was brilliant. However even though the writing is good, the world get muddle and convoluted. I had a hard time reading this story and understanding what was going on that the author lost me by the 7th chapter. I am a vivid player of FFXV that made me enjoy reading about the lore and the powers used by the MC. Unfortunately Fate series one's is a hit and miss for me.
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This... this right here is the type of fanfic I´ve always wanted to read! On top of that, an mc who actually isn´t completely dense and doesn´t have edgy teenage syndrom? No harem tag? What is this glorious piece of fanfic?
Bro! I really salute your writing style. Gonna give this all a perfect rating though I'm still in chapter one. The world background intro is pretty amazing. Continue to keep up the good work. We might not know you will be one of the top writers here if the story line is very good. Anyway, on to chapter two!
Early review, but I’m feeling confident??? If you like the Fate series, then this is a good read! The writing reminds me a lot of reading the original novel, with a good balance of character banter and elegance.
Seven Chapter is not enough to say anything precise. Nonetheless, these seven chapters show that the story has potential. There were few to zero grammatical errors, and the characterisation was nice. The writing style was impressive, and while reading this, I found myself being immersed into it! Good job, author!
A life of accomplishment and service, then death. Death is elusive for those of acclaim, being sometimes called forth to the world again. Different, legends, still making a mark in the world.
From the first 4 chapters of this novel, it is quite clear that the author is a fan of the lore of the series that he bases it on so far, FF15 and Fate universe. The history and descriptions are vivid and detailed as he walks you through a new MC that has a similar destiny as that of the FF15 MC, as well as another important character from the Fate universe. It was an overall interesting experience and a well-written piece. However, this passion in these details is possibly off-putting to some people who already are somewhat familiar with the series or may be new to it all. While the writing itself is good, I did find myself starting to speed through some of the explanation in order to get to the parts that drove the plot forward. Because of this, I did notice that the author tended to front load the explanations and background a bit heavily. There is a lot of information to sink in here, which can bog down the pace of a novel. My suggestion is to pepper some of this lore and explanations throughout the events. There is no need to show all the cards at the same time. Reserve some of that history as a reference or revelation that the character draws on as he faces something. Readers familiar with the series will get a bit of fanservice while those unfamiliar will see it as an aspect that adds layers to the character. This novel has just started and it is rich in setting up the world building. While I've yet to see where the story is heading, my hopes is that the advancement of the plot will be treated with the same detail as the setup has been. Personally, I found it difficult to judge the novel at this point, as I was very interested in the setup, but was anxiously waiting for where things were heading. I'll leave the score like this for now and keep an eye on future chapters.
Just read through and I’ll say, there are only 4 chapters but the chapters are very long so there is a good amount of material to read. Also the novel is very descriptive, so you are able immerse yourself into the world. From what I understand this is a Fate Fan-Fic with crossovers into other worlds, so having background knowledge may help, but I don’t think it’s necessary as the author is creating a work that can stand independently.
This story is really good. Even if there are only several chapters in, it can easily get a reader to relate. It's rich in details, and the world feels... almost real. I'm not the type to leave a review like this, but just for this story, I'm willing leave one. This one is a solid 5/5 for me. I can feel its potential, as the story goes on. Give it a read, you guys wont regret it! 😎😎
Your writing is really good! The way you carry your characters is almost as if you are documenting non-fiction stories in perfect detail! Can't wait to see how this stories go, keep up the good work!
It's long overdue. But this is a great story so far. I haven't play FF15, but you provided me a glimpse of that world. I have to commend you on providing lots of details about Nasuverse. I love this franchise. Keep up!
Cool story. I am a fan of the FF and Fate series so I will wait to see how it will go. The author gave himself more freedom by using different time-line as such you can expect to see something different from the original plot
This story has the ability to become a great novel. The world is starting to appear and will become very vibrant I am expecting. I look forward to reading more!
i love ff! this novel has pretty long chapters and vivid descriptions. i'm hoping for more character interactions in the future and maybe familiar game elements? this one goes straight to my reading list. it's enjoyable and it should be a fun ride.
The novel's style is more akin to western fantasy than regular xianxia. Readers are embroiled in rich descriptions of the world and its surroundings — instead of a couple of lines that just say "the city is 1 million kilometers long." It's a great read with superb world building and an interesting premise for the MC.
make the paragraph short please for better reading ❤👌 and i like the creativity. btw don't dive deep into politics and make him live his life to the fullest 😍 and thank you.
is this a fate fanfic...?...either way its interesting plus the chs are pretty long yay!f this is fate fanfic make MC save sakura, felt bad for her...dont make this a tragic and angst...maybe add romance and fluff..OP MC.. either way these are just suggestion
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It is absolutely, horrifyingly, exceptionally, cheesingly awesome ! Like really really awesome, the best fate fanfic and one of the overall best fanfics in this website.
For now I'm going to give this rating based on the reviews that are given to this wonderful fanfic. Although I haven't really read it because I don't have time, but from the way the reviews said, it must really be a good fanfic. One quick question though, does this have romance?.....
"The Prince Of Magic" has one of the best writing and best prologue I have read for sometime. Making the MC came from the world of FFXV to Typemoon was brilliant. However even though the writing is good, the world get muddle and convoluted. I had a hard time reading this story and understanding what was going on that the author lost me by the 7th chapter. I am a vivid player of FFXV that made me enjoy reading about the lore and the powers used by the MC. Unfortunately Fate series one's is a hit and miss for me.
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This... this right here is the type of fanfic I´ve always wanted to read! On top of that, an mc who actually isn´t completely dense and doesn´t have edgy teenage syndrom? No harem tag? What is this glorious piece of fanfic?
Bro! I really salute your writing style. Gonna give this all a perfect rating though I'm still in chapter one. The world background intro is pretty amazing. Continue to keep up the good work. We might not know you will be one of the top writers here if the story line is very good. Anyway, on to chapter two!
Early review, but I’m feeling confident??? If you like the Fate series, then this is a good read! The writing reminds me a lot of reading the original novel, with a good balance of character banter and elegance.
Seven Chapter is not enough to say anything precise. Nonetheless, these seven chapters show that the story has potential. There were few to zero grammatical errors, and the characterisation was nice. The writing style was impressive, and while reading this, I found myself being immersed into it! Good job, author!
A life of accomplishment and service, then death. Death is elusive for those of acclaim, being sometimes called forth to the world again. Different, legends, still making a mark in the world.
From the first 4 chapters of this novel, it is quite clear that the author is a fan of the lore of the series that he bases it on so far, FF15 and Fate universe. The history and descriptions are vivid and detailed as he walks you through a new MC that has a similar destiny as that of the FF15 MC, as well as another important character from the Fate universe. It was an overall interesting experience and a well-written piece. However, this passion in these details is possibly off-putting to some people who already are somewhat familiar with the series or may be new to it all. While the writing itself is good, I did find myself starting to speed through some of the explanation in order to get to the parts that drove the plot forward. Because of this, I did notice that the author tended to front load the explanations and background a bit heavily. There is a lot of information to sink in here, which can bog down the pace of a novel. My suggestion is to pepper some of this lore and explanations throughout the events. There is no need to show all the cards at the same time. Reserve some of that history as a reference or revelation that the character draws on as he faces something. Readers familiar with the series will get a bit of fanservice while those unfamiliar will see it as an aspect that adds layers to the character. This novel has just started and it is rich in setting up the world building. While I've yet to see where the story is heading, my hopes is that the advancement of the plot will be treated with the same detail as the setup has been. Personally, I found it difficult to judge the novel at this point, as I was very interested in the setup, but was anxiously waiting for where things were heading. I'll leave the score like this for now and keep an eye on future chapters.
Just read through and I’ll say, there are only 4 chapters but the chapters are very long so there is a good amount of material to read. Also the novel is very descriptive, so you are able immerse yourself into the world. From what I understand this is a Fate Fan-Fic with crossovers into other worlds, so having background knowledge may help, but I don’t think it’s necessary as the author is creating a work that can stand independently.
This story is really good. Even if there are only several chapters in, it can easily get a reader to relate. It's rich in details, and the world feels... almost real. I'm not the type to leave a review like this, but just for this story, I'm willing leave one. This one is a solid 5/5 for me. I can feel its potential, as the story goes on. Give it a read, you guys wont regret it! 😎😎
Your writing is really good! The way you carry your characters is almost as if you are documenting non-fiction stories in perfect detail! Can't wait to see how this stories go, keep up the good work!
It's long overdue. But this is a great story so far. I haven't play FF15, but you provided me a glimpse of that world. I have to commend you on providing lots of details about Nasuverse. I love this franchise. Keep up!
Cool story. I am a fan of the FF and Fate series so I will wait to see how it will go. The author gave himself more freedom by using different time-line as such you can expect to see something different from the original plot
This story has the ability to become a great novel. The world is starting to appear and will become very vibrant I am expecting. I look forward to reading more!
i love ff! this novel has pretty long chapters and vivid descriptions. i'm hoping for more character interactions in the future and maybe familiar game elements? this one goes straight to my reading list. it's enjoyable and it should be a fun ride.
The novel's style is more akin to western fantasy than regular xianxia. Readers are embroiled in rich descriptions of the world and its surroundings — instead of a couple of lines that just say "the city is 1 million kilometers long." It's a great read with superb world building and an interesting premise for the MC.
make the paragraph short please for better reading ❤👌 and i like the creativity. btw don't dive deep into politics and make him live his life to the fullest 😍 and thank you.
is this a fate fanfic...?...either way its interesting plus the chs are pretty long yay!f this is fate fanfic make MC save sakura, felt bad for her...dont make this a tragic and angst...maybe add romance and fluff..OP MC.. either way these are just suggestion
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