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I realy want author to uptade this. i realy Like this novel. it Has good background good characters. but i dont know od he countinue to write.
Pretty good. While she needs to be developed more I like the mc. I'd like to see some more from loraine. Looking forward to the mc getting more confident and creative with her choices and actions.
It is amazing, the story is really inspiringly intricate and incredibly intriguing, one of the few features that i find myself interestingly interested in how the story shall progress, particularly in her career and character........i really do find this story to be one of the best on here! Definitely earned a recommendation from me
Hey, IgorRSAW here, I had problems with my old account, so I'm here to repost this novel to continue the story here, I'm sorry for what happened. I also continued my other novels, I ask for your cooperation. New link: https://***.webnovel.com/book/17003471006244305
This novel continues to be published here, on the Scribblehub website: https://***.scribblehub.com/series/67872/i-reincarnated-as-a-little-girl/ The author decided to abandon this site.
This stories delicious................................. ...............................................................................chomp
Really amazing i have found a number of amazing series and author's on this app Igor you are definitely one of those author's hope to read more of this series its amazing !.
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Overall this is an entertaining story of a guy being reincarnated as a girl. The author still has a lot of room for improvement but is doing great!
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Writing messy, at least at start. Mc is idiot, when he can cast some meteor or other crazy spell he just make faces and knoked out =/ mc power level is all over the place, at one moment he goes to sleep, coz he tired, even without saying to his maid vital info(like damn plot to kill him) then awakens tied and ready to be killed, next moment he can go like week with no need for sleep, then again he tired and need sleep. One moment mc kills some mobs with magic like a boss, next chapter cant do crap against humans =/ and there many points like this, one moment he kill, next moment goes crap like oh its young guard he has all his life ahead, and oh all castle guarded by 15 yo so cant kill anyone or just destroy whole thing. Summary: its bad read
One word... Dumb MC. Other than that, the story is enjoyable as long as you turn off your brain and ignore some plotholes here and there...
Honestly? The MC is a bit mentally retarded. There's also the lack of empathy for her first murder. We're led to believe that the MC is a downtrodden otaku living a day to day existence but when she instantly murders the maid and barely flinches? That is some messed up stuff man. Otaku? nope. That's a psycho mike myers right there. As for the mentally retarded part? Well she has immense magical powers that don't seem to have any limits. Now what's the problem with that you ask? Well there isn't a problem with that, not at all. The problem is that there's a multitude of situations or "Forced Plot" that could easily be solved with her magical powers but "Hurr Durr" I could easily solve my problems with my magic powers right now but uhh.. what's magic? MC's magic powers are conveniently forgotten during the forced plot sequences which is bad. This problem isn't the overpowered magic but the writing itself. It's not all bad though, grammar is good and the story is on the level of the average japanese light novel.
Thank you for your support so far, I hope you continue to follow my work. I have some family problems and my mom is very sick, so if I don't post chapters, I'm sorry. Thanks for the support. MY DISCORD: https://discord.gg/P5JynPh
• I like this Novel pretty much just the Creator's native isn't English so he/she messed up in grammar. • MC is different than in other novels main's that makes her "MC" different but good, she's like a phycho Loli with cautious personality not like certain someone as in "Cautious Hero" XDD. • MC'S background is a complete mess hope Creator do something about it like explaining will be much better in his/her future chapters. • Story isn't developing at all if I may be honest it's like Creator doesn't know what to add next so he/she's only stretching the same story over and over and maintaining chapter stability to daily upload currently. • Overall i hope Creator give some thoughts about this if they saw this any time. That's it, thx for reading my review heh~!!
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a cute story about a guy who is transferred to another world don't worry about the gender bender tag there's no mention of anything sexual related until chapter 50. You don't even learn her age till past 30 thirteen or so. The concepts are brilliant while the story is told in a very simple manner. This story is almost completely innocent.
I don't really like Lolis! But I love the gender-bender! I'm here for that! The author is publishing a lot! Waiting for more chapters! ..........
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Sounds very interesting.....according to previews .....hopefully it won't disappoint looking forward to reading it............................
Loving the story cant wait for more keep up the great work just keep working on the English man and you will be a great author in no time I can promise you that!
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This story is very well developed. But there is quite a few issues with grammatical errors. It does not affect the understanding of the story just a little annoying when its a female the writer is talking about but it keeps saying he or his or him. I truly love this story and hope it keeps getting updated fast as I finished all the chapters on here in a day.
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A good read, grammar has some errors, but you can read normally. The story goes well, and it's good to keep guessing how your family issue will be resolved.
Gonna be completely honest here, if you like reincarnation and OP MC, go ahead and read it. Grammar is average but there are many careless looking mistakes. Be warned that the MC also has severe brain damage and is pretty stupid most of the time, if you're one to easily get triggered over stupidity, then don't read it unless you want brain damage yourself.
................................... .............................................. ................,............... ..............still waiting
I realy want author to uptade this. i realy Like this novel. it Has good background good characters. but i dont know od he countinue to write.
Pretty good. While she needs to be developed more I like the mc. I'd like to see some more from loraine. Looking forward to the mc getting more confident and creative with her choices and actions.
It is amazing, the story is really inspiringly intricate and incredibly intriguing, one of the few features that i find myself interestingly interested in how the story shall progress, particularly in her career and character........i really do find this story to be one of the best on here! Definitely earned a recommendation from me
Hey, IgorRSAW here, I had problems with my old account, so I'm here to repost this novel to continue the story here, I'm sorry for what happened. I also continued my other novels, I ask for your cooperation. New link: https://***.webnovel.com/book/17003471006244305
This novel continues to be published here, on the Scribblehub website: https://***.scribblehub.com/series/67872/i-reincarnated-as-a-little-girl/ The author decided to abandon this site.
This stories delicious................................. ...............................................................................chomp
Really amazing i have found a number of amazing series and author's on this app Igor you are definitely one of those author's hope to read more of this series its amazing !.
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Overall this is an entertaining story of a guy being reincarnated as a girl. The author still has a lot of room for improvement but is doing great!
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Writing messy, at least at start. Mc is idiot, when he can cast some meteor or other crazy spell he just make faces and knoked out =/ mc power level is all over the place, at one moment he goes to sleep, coz he tired, even without saying to his maid vital info(like damn plot to kill him) then awakens tied and ready to be killed, next moment he can go like week with no need for sleep, then again he tired and need sleep. One moment mc kills some mobs with magic like a boss, next chapter cant do crap against humans =/ and there many points like this, one moment he kill, next moment goes crap like oh its young guard he has all his life ahead, and oh all castle guarded by 15 yo so cant kill anyone or just destroy whole thing. Summary: its bad read
One word... Dumb MC. Other than that, the story is enjoyable as long as you turn off your brain and ignore some plotholes here and there...
Honestly? The MC is a bit mentally retarded. There's also the lack of empathy for her first murder. We're led to believe that the MC is a downtrodden otaku living a day to day existence but when she instantly murders the maid and barely flinches? That is some messed up stuff man. Otaku? nope. That's a psycho mike myers right there. As for the mentally retarded part? Well she has immense magical powers that don't seem to have any limits. Now what's the problem with that you ask? Well there isn't a problem with that, not at all. The problem is that there's a multitude of situations or "Forced Plot" that could easily be solved with her magical powers but "Hurr Durr" I could easily solve my problems with my magic powers right now but uhh.. what's magic? MC's magic powers are conveniently forgotten during the forced plot sequences which is bad. This problem isn't the overpowered magic but the writing itself. It's not all bad though, grammar is good and the story is on the level of the average japanese light novel.
Thank you for your support so far, I hope you continue to follow my work. I have some family problems and my mom is very sick, so if I don't post chapters, I'm sorry. Thanks for the support. MY DISCORD: https://discord.gg/P5JynPh
• I like this Novel pretty much just the Creator's native isn't English so he/she messed up in grammar. • MC is different than in other novels main's that makes her "MC" different but good, she's like a phycho Loli with cautious personality not like certain someone as in "Cautious Hero" XDD. • MC'S background is a complete mess hope Creator do something about it like explaining will be much better in his/her future chapters. • Story isn't developing at all if I may be honest it's like Creator doesn't know what to add next so he/she's only stretching the same story over and over and maintaining chapter stability to daily upload currently. • Overall i hope Creator give some thoughts about this if they saw this any time. That's it, thx for reading my review heh~!!
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a cute story about a guy who is transferred to another world don't worry about the gender bender tag there's no mention of anything sexual related until chapter 50. You don't even learn her age till past 30 thirteen or so. The concepts are brilliant while the story is told in a very simple manner. This story is almost completely innocent.
I don't really like Lolis! But I love the gender-bender! I'm here for that! The author is publishing a lot! Waiting for more chapters! ..........
Fufufufufufufufufufucufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufucufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufuufufufufufufufufufufufufufufuufufufufufufufufuufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufuduf
Sounds very interesting.....according to previews .....hopefully it won't disappoint looking forward to reading it............................
Loving the story cant wait for more keep up the great work just keep working on the English man and you will be a great author in no time I can promise you that!
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This story is very well developed. But there is quite a few issues with grammatical errors. It does not affect the understanding of the story just a little annoying when its a female the writer is talking about but it keeps saying he or his or him. I truly love this story and hope it keeps getting updated fast as I finished all the chapters on here in a day.
ネタバレを明かす A good read, grammar has some errors, but you can read normally. The story goes well, and it's good to keep guessing how your family issue will be resolved.
Gonna be completely honest here, if you like reincarnation and OP MC, go ahead and read it. Grammar is average but there are many careless looking mistakes. Be warned that the MC also has severe brain damage and is pretty stupid most of the time, if you're one to easily get triggered over stupidity, then don't read it unless you want brain damage yourself.