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Hasta ahora me gusta la historia, sigue con el buen trabajo, no dejes e subir capítulos .................................................................................................................................................
the character is good has a backstory that is appropriate for the world and plausible but the story after is nonsense midnight kidnaps a child and sleeps with him not sexually of course but it is out of nowhere he also seems arrogant and idiotic i didn’t even get to where he starts the physical exam ill admit but the quality of the writing is dreadful and the character feels like he be a Marty Stu perfect with a tragic backstory probably have a harem of women lining up for him it just doesn’t stick the character concept is okay but the writing is dreadful also why the hell was he almost 5 foot at 7 years old he also feels like a teenager more than a kid he not reincarnated so you don’t really have an excuse for it
ネタバレを明かす Hasta ahora me gusta la historia, sigue con el buen trabajo, no dejes e subir capítulos .................................................................................................................................................
the character is good has a backstory that is appropriate for the world and plausible but the story after is nonsense midnight kidnaps a child and sleeps with him not sexually of course but it is out of nowhere he also seems arrogant and idiotic i didn’t even get to where he starts the physical exam ill admit but the quality of the writing is dreadful and the character feels like he be a Marty Stu perfect with a tragic backstory probably have a harem of women lining up for him it just doesn’t stick the character concept is okay but the writing is dreadful also why the hell was he almost 5 foot at 7 years old he also feels like a teenager more than a kid he not reincarnated so you don’t really have an excuse for it
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