Reviews of Fractured (BnHA) by akitkatbar - Webnovel

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4very
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I like the idea if what you were going with but sometimes when your writing I feel like you get sidetracked and talk about side characters more than the mc. I also think that you should put more focus into the L.O.V and who they are.

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4very
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I like the idea if what you were going with but sometimes when your writing I feel like you get sidetracked and talk about side characters more than the mc. I also think that you should put more focus into the L.O.V and who they are.

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