Ascending to Supremacy

LV 15

oldthrall

After the first 40chaps this novel gets better and better! 1. Author makes bold changes + interesting original changes to Canon plots in various worlds...Eg arrival much earlier than canon plot to influence things - a lot of original content from Author and MC isnt a side character observer he actively changes events in the plot 2. Humongous harem: MC builds a gigantic harem of best waifus...ultimate wish fulfillment right here - only downside is (im up to 120ish chaps), some girls get forgotten for a long time and MC usually forgets he has a harem when training for long periods...hope this doesn’t continue (will update after i catch up with latest) 3. World building is quite good, MC’s powers etc have been explained in ways to fit in various universes he travels to... 4. MC is OP but takes time to reach that level as different worlds have different systems of power, so not all his powers carry over completely, but he still has a definite advantage. First Arc kinda sucked for the first 30-40chaps but doesn’t continue to suck, author improves rapidly in chaps after that.

3yr 13

LV 10

KuroiSenkoGr

Worst harem fic i have ever read i dont know why the idiots on this site give it 4-5 stars it isnt worth it the only thing worth in this fic is the author's grammar (even thou he has some misspeling issues but way better than other authors on this site)the update scedule and nothign else most chapters are about the mc swinging his arm and destroying the end boss he defeated Yhwach with just his shikai and at the next chapter he put aizen under a genjitsu wtf were are the end game bosses of each world he is traveling now there arent any stakes to make you wonder he is already op from after 2 days in the akademy he defeated yachiru in a duel(even thou she didnt use her shikai or bankai) and the worst thing about this fic is that the mc keeps geting all the girls even girls that are 12 years old (yuzu/karin are in his harem from what i have read so far)he has sex with them once end then on with the next one if any woman doesnt want him or share him he just uses genjitsu to make them more amendable to his ideas ....At the end of the day it is just one power fantasy fulfillment fic nothing else don't waste your time on this one their way way better fics out the( and truth to be told way way way worse fics)

ネタバレを明かす

4yr 68

11 の返信を表示する

LV 1

_Goku_Black_

in 30 years, the strength of less than 1 million in the world of Dragonball. where is becoming strong and getting new forms?it has an OP system but does not use it. He doesn't build his own life but helps others.skipping time and retelling a story where the main character just doesn't do anything for himself. He gets knowledge and powers that are useless and does not apply them. He's a stupid minor character who likes to watch the lives of others rather than live for himself.And the harem he wants. Lol. What does he do for the harem? leaves them unattended?Where is the skill located in multiple bodies with the same consciousness? where are the hints that he is always close to his women that he did not abandon them.......

4yr 32

LV 6

FAP_Master_

Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.

4yr 32

LV 13

Faranade

Couldn't get past the Dragonball arc. It was going good up until the timeskip to 18 years old. Sora (MC) went from being the MC to being the side character to Home and the Z-fighters, he also built a harem of Bulma, Chi-Chi, Mai, etc and we never got any info on that, they just sort of lingered in the background. If you're into something like that then I guess you might enjoy this but overall very boring.

4yr 28

LV 3

Hikik0m0ri

I was unable to complete the DBZ arch due to the enormous stupidity of MC. Being in the DBZ universe with a bunch of cheats and boasting that in a past life he became a master of many martial arts in 50 years, in 30 years he reached only 150,000 strength, it even reaches the point that his future self is dying because of his stupidity and laziness. He collects a harem but does not touch any girl even 50 years later, and instead of spending time with them, he trains Goku (it is not clear why), Goku has a son for a long time, but MC instead of at least losing his virginity, he trinerates son Goku, I wouldn't be surprised if some fat asshole fucks his wives behind his back.

4yr 26

LV 3

ScrambledEgg

You have a good start when you write this fanfic but after you skip too much plot, it became boring. I mean, you make summary of dragonball from bulma meet goku till goku got married in 1 chapter with several time skip. Even after that you still make another 5 or 10 years time skip. You writes a fanfic of a novel, so if you use time skip it becomes summary of the original novel not a fanfic anymore and everyone can write summary. And why MC have to babysitter goku and became sidechara? If he want to get stronger he have to beat strong opponent not to be a bystander. You write and give goku more scene than your own MC. it is MC not sidechara. He even suddenly got a harem. You never mentioned about chichi, how comes she suddenly be one of his harem? If you want make harem at least give some reasonable plot. i hope you can be better, but i'm sorry to stop at ch.20. (Sorry, English not my first language so there are a lot of mistake)

4yr 24

LV 5

ThotHarvester

So far I’ve liked the story, albeit a little rushed. The author starts the story a bit before the legitimate plot begins. As the character is overpowered you’d expect cringe to be a factor towards the writing, thus far it seems to be fine. To my taste, a person who adores isekai’s, this is quite nice. While this does have a harem, hopefully it will only have a few characters in it and isn’t overloaded with girls left and right. Bulma in the story seems extremely adorable.

5yr 23

5 の返信を表示する

LV 6

InHisName

Just another story about a fanboy babysitting his favorite hero. This time it happened to be Goku. Next arc it'll probably be Kurosaki (Bleach). It sure makes for a creative, entertaining, story doesn't it?

3yr 22

LV 4

keke171

If we talk about history, powers and combats it is interesting, rushed, but interesting, the MC becomes op fast and enemies appear more and more powerful that make him train and become more powerful too, the classic formula shounen but applied in the right way and it doesn't make things sick, which is why I read until chapter 100 but ... if we are going to talk about romance and harem, then it is very, very bad, similar to other novels on this site, female characters who fall in love in a paragraph, who fall in love with how "beautiful" the MC is, fall in love with the convenience of author since we never see them interacting with the MC and are already in love with him, since he entered a relationship with bulma I already thought it was strange because it was very fast, and from then on it only gets worse, the girls have no thoughts, no desires , dreams, accept the harem spontaneously as if it were something normal, this harem of onaholes was already problematic but I started to ignore it and continued reading normally, the problem was when he entered the soul society (bleach world), the author I wanted to change the MC's personality and justify with lineages, transforming the MC into something I like to call "master pokewoman" who throws his balls in every hole with a name, you know? while upholding the "i need to catch / f.uck them all" principle, the MC became lascivious and arrogant like random villains from xianxia, wanting to fuck every beautiful woman he sees until they get stupid with ahegao in they face, I thought he had come here to read a fanfic, not a ****, and there are so many girls in the harem that the MC doesn't have time for any, some of them there that I don't even know, most of them I don't even know why they are in the harem in the first place, except for the requests of readers who think with the penis, since this is a story that the reader can easily influence the author through comments. in chapter 75 i made a prediction, and it came true in chapter 100, which was that of his wolf Fenris becoming a wolf girl. its funny and sad to see that prediction happen, bcz it show the way this story is going... Sorry if it sounds offensive, but I really started to believe that the author is a student who has no experience with women and this fanfic is a collection of his wet dreams about sexy female anime characters. this story decayed in the same way as "bored gamer in another world", a very good but wasted potential.

4yr 14

7 の返信を表示する

LV 10

Titus17

Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍 Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍 Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍 Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍

5yr 11

LV 2

Propendol

what can be said about a work of 400+ chapters in which bed scenes are best described? nothing good. most of the events that would be worth describing occur according to the template: "we need to do something > the following sentence already says that the main character has traveled for some time, collected a harem and done things. then one lemon chapter. the next chapter describes how he gets a boost from the air. and so in a circle" a whole bunch of mistakes in the narration of the similarity, he or someone from his entourage learned something / entered a new sphere, etc. and after a few dozen chapters and a certain amount of time they do the same with the same kingdom or skill. getting girls and going to bed pleasures is far-fetched, in most cases it is not justified. the characters are like dolls, all similar to each other. the absence of any acceptable description of the world around the hero and characters. I finished reading hoping that well, maybe in this arch I will be able to see due to what the work has a score of 4.6? but in the end, either the spermataxic students evaluated it that way. or the estimates were screwed up by bots. I have no more ideas explaining such an assessment.

3yr 9

LV 13

AntiWorldSystem

Good novel, the flaw is that you like to make MC act like a cringe person......act like a low key character. .. .. .. Always have to act respect to someone lower than him. .. Its a flaw in your novel. .. .and have so much chinese cultivation bullshit .. .. And rather have many power restriction. ....... Its a pity. .. No offense ..

3yr 9

LV 4

DearCompanion

☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.

ネタバレを明かす

5yr 7

LV 3

RealityGod

Damn! the type I hate the most. Grabbing women left and right without considerations for original couples. I mean at least let the mc's couple alone. Damn you! dickhead.

4yr 6

LV 4

PUERKO_Senpai

el autor es innovador en su forma de crear el personaje, pero demasiado superficial es su diseño de fondo del personaje y del mundo, la forma de escribir del autor es muy simple si lo hiciera más detallado y con lógica este seria de los 5 mejore fanfiction de dragon ball

ネタバレを明かす

4yr 6

LV 6

Sage_HiddenBear

Weird story. Just read the first 4 or 5 chapters. Its creepy and weird as fk where it goes after the seemingly cool beginning. If your into weird **** in a s*xual way then sure by all means. As for me? This story is a 1.5 to 2 out of 5 purely because its dbz.

4yr 6

LV 4

HOS

Its really hard to read the first arc without dropping this but after reading the other reviews, I will read 2nd-3rd arc before deciding whether to drop this or not. But seriously author, you will need to refine the dragonball arc since you will lose a lot of potential readers, also dont just add every girl you find into the harem, they lose their characters if you keep increasing the harem that even you shuffle their name you won't notice the difference. This review is strictly from the first arc so I will probably change this later after reading more. Also English is not my first language so sorry for my crappy english.

3yr 5