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I started this book with a plan to just read 5 chapters in one hour but guess what? I couldn't drop it! It has everything I like in a book! It is realistic fantasy, suspense driven and relatable. I enjoy the way the author describes things and how she takes care to explain some things like wraiths that I as a non fantasy reader don't know about. I love her dialogue, she knows how to communicate. I guess you have nothing to lose by reading this! It's for everyone ❤️♥️❤️♥️
well, this is not the worst book that I have read, but it's right there with the others in the bottom. reader can go from 42 to 140 and miss nothing. this should have been a longer story for how it began, though I like short novels!.
I read all th 41 free chapters... honestly I can't see I will continue if I have to spend money. The screenplay so far has not held my interest.. it seems like 2 FLs to me and may be 2 MLs, but one for sure! ha ha..Trying magic in modern world, having some bad experiences in the past.. the way it's written 🤷
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This book was amazing! I couldn't put it down. It was so much more then a love story between a girl and a boy. The world and the characters are vast and deeper and more complicated then you could ever imagine! Beautifully done! You will not be disappointed!
Hello Author! At first, I was confused by this and that, but when I read further which is not exactly that far, just 4 chapters made me think that it was worth reading. Little to no errors, the descriptions are not too much but it gave us, readers, the vivid clear idea of what you wanted to portray. The characters are cute especially hehe.. Your novel makes me think of k-dramas, actually I'm not a fan of a book with Korean names because I was raised by Chinese translated novels. But this book is a gem, a little polishing which Im still not sure because I haven't read the whole book yet because I do not have any coins and only I only have fastpasses. This book will be permanently added to my library. I do wish and hope I could write like you. Happy Writing!
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A comedy mixed with suspense and terror. The story is fascinating and has twists and turns about you meeting someone your whole life and never really looking at them. Who really knows the people around them?
Very good, very good indeed. Creation of creatures and a new universe. I recommend reading for those who like fiction.[img=update][img=recommend]
Very good, very good indeed. Creation of creatures and a new universe. I recommend reading for those who like fiction.[img=update][img=recommend]
Congratulations to the author, fluid narrative, good English. Innovative. I love girls stories.[img=fp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=update]
A singer and her best fairy friend creating a lot of confusion. Well written, full of twists.[img=recommend][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update]
A beautiful story of friendship and loyalty. Two girls who shared their destiny, helping each other to grow. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
The novel had a good start and has a creative premise and comic moments, and a hot ensemble. And it's tagged as smut, so I'm waiting for some. I'm looking forward to learning what's next, good luck author-san.
The novel had a good start and has a creative premise and comic moments, and a hot ensemble. And it's tagged as smut, so I'm waiting for some. I'm looking forward to learning what's next, good luck author-san.[img=update]
Im currently drooling over your other book but i cant get enough of it and im excited to start this one. You are a very good writer i really believe that you should publish your works 😁👍👍👍💗💗💗😉
Very nice story ..the charscter development is excellent,just like her other book "Mischievous maiden and the sleeping prince" but please update this regularly also. ..please.
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Fight so dirty but you live so sweet come on baby pictures of me late night pan 😒😁🤣😏🤣😏😄🙃😁😏😁😏😁 ydyyzot¥;);”6,”$.).”6.”5.94.@4.94.49:”6,”56”,”$ mv
Very cute story! FL and ML are so attractive too. Making it easy to read . Flow is also very good and I like the way she narrated the story. Definitely recommend.
Amazing story and the plot is amazing Totally would recommend this story Got me hooked and still can’t get enough of it Read a billion time
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This is pretty awesome I can’t find anything to complain about I totally recommend this to anyone who’s bored in quarantine, this is an awesome time killer for me.
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Come here just to check the story and ended up reading 10 chapters at once. It hooked me. It's different from the usual romance, at least, there's none in the first chapters, but I see what she is leading us to> . - I'm going to spare the spoiler, but the novel so far is worth the time.
I started this book with a plan to just read 5 chapters in one hour but guess what? I couldn't drop it! It has everything I like in a book! It is realistic fantasy, suspense driven and relatable. I enjoy the way the author describes things and how she takes care to explain some things like wraiths that I as a non fantasy reader don't know about. I love her dialogue, she knows how to communicate. I guess you have nothing to lose by reading this! It's for everyone ❤️♥️❤️♥️
well, this is not the worst book that I have read, but it's right there with the others in the bottom. reader can go from 42 to 140 and miss nothing. this should have been a longer story for how it began, though I like short novels!.
I read all th 41 free chapters... honestly I can't see I will continue if I have to spend money. The screenplay so far has not held my interest.. it seems like 2 FLs to me and may be 2 MLs, but one for sure! ha ha..Trying magic in modern world, having some bad experiences in the past.. the way it's written 🤷
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This book was amazing! I couldn't put it down. It was so much more then a love story between a girl and a boy. The world and the characters are vast and deeper and more complicated then you could ever imagine! Beautifully done! You will not be disappointed!
Hello Author! At first, I was confused by this and that, but when I read further which is not exactly that far, just 4 chapters made me think that it was worth reading. Little to no errors, the descriptions are not too much but it gave us, readers, the vivid clear idea of what you wanted to portray. The characters are cute especially hehe.. Your novel makes me think of k-dramas, actually I'm not a fan of a book with Korean names because I was raised by Chinese translated novels. But this book is a gem, a little polishing which Im still not sure because I haven't read the whole book yet because I do not have any coins and only I only have fastpasses. This book will be permanently added to my library. I do wish and hope I could write like you. Happy Writing!
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A comedy mixed with suspense and terror. The story is fascinating and has twists and turns about you meeting someone your whole life and never really looking at them. Who really knows the people around them?
Very good, very good indeed. Creation of creatures and a new universe. I recommend reading for those who like fiction.[img=update][img=recommend]
Very good, very good indeed. Creation of creatures and a new universe. I recommend reading for those who like fiction.[img=update][img=recommend]
Congratulations to the author, fluid narrative, good English. Innovative. I love girls stories.[img=fp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=update]
A singer and her best fairy friend creating a lot of confusion. Well written, full of twists.[img=recommend][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update]
A beautiful story of friendship and loyalty. Two girls who shared their destiny, helping each other to grow. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
The novel had a good start and has a creative premise and comic moments, and a hot ensemble. And it's tagged as smut, so I'm waiting for some. I'm looking forward to learning what's next, good luck author-san.
The novel had a good start and has a creative premise and comic moments, and a hot ensemble. And it's tagged as smut, so I'm waiting for some. I'm looking forward to learning what's next, good luck author-san.[img=update]
Im currently drooling over your other book but i cant get enough of it and im excited to start this one. You are a very good writer i really believe that you should publish your works 😁👍👍👍💗💗💗😉
Very nice story ..the charscter development is excellent,just like her other book "Mischievous maiden and the sleeping prince" but please update this regularly also. ..please.
❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
Fight so dirty but you live so sweet come on baby pictures of me late night pan 😒😁🤣😏🤣😏😄🙃😁😏😁😏😁 ydyyzot¥;);”6,”$.).”6.”5.94.@4.94.49:”6,”56”,”$ mv
Very cute story! FL and ML are so attractive too. Making it easy to read . Flow is also very good and I like the way she narrated the story. Definitely recommend.
Amazing story and the plot is amazing Totally would recommend this story Got me hooked and still can’t get enough of it Read a billion time
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This is pretty awesome I can’t find anything to complain about I totally recommend this to anyone who’s bored in quarantine, this is an awesome time killer for me.
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Nyc book guuuudddddddd ***rrriiiittiiinnggggssssss I lovedddddddddddd it Nicely designed Worth to read ........................................................,.,,,,,,,,.......
Come here just to check the story and ended up reading 10 chapters at once. It hooked me. It's different from the usual romance, at least, there's none in the first chapters, but I see what she is leading us to> . - I'm going to spare the spoiler, but the novel so far is worth the time.