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Add more...i am loving this novel little bit...if don't add chapters daily..how will you get author fan or novel loving fan. Update more chapters mister Author 🙂🙂
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I was already following this on fanfiction, but surprised to see it here as well. The world-building is honestly my favorite part of the story, as seeing how the author attempts to blend Duel Monster lore with DxD lore.
Not at all familiar with Yu-Gi-Oh but this is still a good read and the author is doing well with making the characters interesting.😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
What bull**** is this, go make your own f anime if you wanna change everything about the people and they're behavior. f this, nothing is connected with the characters so annoying. Don't recommend .
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Another dxd ****fic that sticks closely to canon plot and the MC gets all chummy with the devil faction Another dxd ****fic that sticks closely to canon plot and the MC gets all chummy with the devil faction
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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It's good the contrast in the personality of the Supreme King and Jaiden is good, the fact that he isn't Fused with Yubel is strange though since she was fused with him in the anime and she became fully woman because of it. It would have been better in my opinion to fuse them like in the anime giving The supreme king the golden right eye and electric blue left eye which is, in my opinion, better
I can't say I've read a more interesting beginning to a fan-fiction that didident anoy,or make me want to quit reading in the first few chapters because of some bull***** or another. You have good a good background and explain things to the readers a simply as possible so they don't get confused with what the plot is about. Won't say anything about stability because mostly all authors normally upload fast at the beginning week or month then take it slower.but at least the chapters are a lot longer so I don't mind waiting afew days for a chap. The charachter is one I haven't seen yet in a dxd fan novels,so I'm happy its something new instead of a normal transmigration or reincarnation. you've given your world some back ground where I can't find any plot holes.(for now at least.)and also incorporated some romance with serefall which most dxd novels don't tend to do and if they do its only for the more extream harem based novels. One last thing before I go,I won't say you have to listen to your readers but sometimes there are things in the comments that can improve a storry but a lot of authors tend to either break and only do what comments say making a story to predictable and boring or ignore the comments completely making things in the story that the majority don't like worse for the first impression of the novel. We anyway keep up the good work and don't give up 🐯(tiger)out.
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great story continue and don't ever stop since those four are heavenly dragons what about the three egyptian gods (obelsik Ra and slifer ) they should be as big and strong as the 2 dragon gods ophis and great red with the beast of apocalypse trehixa or what his name as for him make him turn into exodia much bigger and stronger than them as he is the supreme king his duel monster form should be exodia pretty pls oh my god i can't wait to see
This story is so beautiful, the Power of mc Is a duel Monster or yu gi oh Power , he personality is carefree when it comes to common days and serious when it comes to battles
Add more...i am loving this novel little bit...if don't add chapters daily..how will you get author fan or novel loving fan. Update more chapters mister Author 🙂🙂
Yeah. ... Whatever.. ............. ....... ...... ... ......... .. ........ ...... .. ....... ........ ........... ..... ........... . ...
I was already following this on fanfiction, but surprised to see it here as well. The world-building is honestly my favorite part of the story, as seeing how the author attempts to blend Duel Monster lore with DxD lore.
Not at all familiar with Yu-Gi-Oh but this is still a good read and the author is doing well with making the characters interesting.😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
What bull**** is this, go make your own f anime if you wanna change everything about the people and they're behavior. f this, nothing is connected with the characters so annoying. Don't recommend .
GOD ART HOPE U MASS REALEASE IT.. 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🐝🌱 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🌱🌱 🌱🍯🍯🍯🍯🌱🍯🌱 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🍯🌱 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🍯🌱 🌼🌱 Hi honey! 🌱🌼 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🐝🌱 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🌱🌱 🌱🍯🍯🍯🍯🌱🍯🌱 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🍯🌱 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🍯🌱 🌼🌱 Hi honey! 🌱🌼 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🐝🌱 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🌱🌱 🌱🍯🍯🍯🍯🌱🍯🌱 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🍯🌱 🌱🍯🌱🌱🍯🌱🍯🌱 🌼🌱 Hi honey! 🌱🌼
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Another dxd ****fic that sticks closely to canon plot and the MC gets all chummy with the devil faction Another dxd ****fic that sticks closely to canon plot and the MC gets all chummy with the devil faction
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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It's good the contrast in the personality of the Supreme King and Jaiden is good, the fact that he isn't Fused with Yubel is strange though since she was fused with him in the anime and she became fully woman because of it. It would have been better in my opinion to fuse them like in the anime giving The supreme king the golden right eye and electric blue left eye which is, in my opinion, better
I can't say I've read a more interesting beginning to a fan-fiction that didident anoy,or make me want to quit reading in the first few chapters because of some bull***** or another. You have good a good background and explain things to the readers a simply as possible so they don't get confused with what the plot is about. Won't say anything about stability because mostly all authors normally upload fast at the beginning week or month then take it slower.but at least the chapters are a lot longer so I don't mind waiting afew days for a chap. The charachter is one I haven't seen yet in a dxd fan novels,so I'm happy its something new instead of a normal transmigration or reincarnation. you've given your world some back ground where I can't find any plot holes.(for now at least.)and also incorporated some romance with serefall which most dxd novels don't tend to do and if they do its only for the more extream harem based novels. One last thing before I go,I won't say you have to listen to your readers but sometimes there are things in the comments that can improve a storry but a lot of authors tend to either break and only do what comments say making a story to predictable and boring or ignore the comments completely making things in the story that the majority don't like worse for the first impression of the novel. We anyway keep up the good work and don't give up 🐯(tiger)out.
ネタバレを明かす great story continue and don't ever stop since those four are heavenly dragons what about the three egyptian gods (obelsik Ra and slifer ) they should be as big and strong as the 2 dragon gods ophis and great red with the beast of apocalypse trehixa or what his name as for him make him turn into exodia much bigger and stronger than them as he is the supreme king his duel monster form should be exodia pretty pls oh my god i can't wait to see
This story is so beautiful, the Power of mc Is a duel Monster or yu gi oh Power , he personality is carefree when it comes to common days and serious when it comes to battles
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