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From the start I am someone who loves this type of book where the main character is implementing advanced or different knowledge into a new world. But there are so many stories where this is done awkwardly. Thankfully this gem of a story has avoided that problem. The writing is good even if there are grammar mistakes every so often, but that doesn’t detract from the enjoyment at all. The world building is great too talking about multiple countries and their specialization and characteristics. It does have a feeling of irregular at magic high school but this is mainly only for the first major arc which is a competition between schools. But it only has passing similarities and deviates from that path pretty early on in the competition. If you like less battle stuffed stories and prefer a well built world then you should read this novel.
This is a unique take of the system/gamer genre where instead of a video game it uses an alien device to create the system/gamer interface. I really enjoy the mix of sci-fi and fantasy. The author spends a lot of time and detail explaining how magic works since this story is about a magical engineer the detail makes the story more enjoyable because you feel more connected to the events in the novel. The world building and the wide variety of characters give the novels world a lived in feeling. The main character is interesting I wish that the author would spend as much time fleshing out the MC relationship to his family and friends as the author does on magic theory and world building. I will give the author bonus points for injecting the novel with humor and making the novel a good light read when the novel could have been dense and dry. I recommend this novel to anyone who like fantasy with a sci-fi twist.
if you are looking for a novel that only have few chapters this novel is highly recommend
the story has delayed progress little exciting parts. The story is only exciting for 5 chapters and then for like 20 chapters the story is boring and mundane
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I thoroughly enjoyed my time reading this. I am not up to date on the chapters, I read about 350 chapters and it was good.
Book was done by the time I read it, but I saw comments about update issues. Other than that it was a great story that king of fell off a bit in the last 1/4 of the book.
I Like it. I thought it was a great relationship between fantasy and sci-fi. I would love to read from the girl or girls side. Please and thank you.
Read till chap 91, must say a bit impressed. The writing quality is okay, the world building and characters werent bland, could be relatable. Of course, I prefer a bit comedic but oh well, acceptable so far.
it's a good sci-fi novel, but seems this novel was on hiatus for more than 1 time. the reader in the comments section was dropped tremendously after the 300th something chapter. the ending was also a bit forced, maybe after the first hiatus, the author was hiatus once again before trying to make this novel completed. the story was resembles some novels at first. the plot was in the Academy of magic and then going to space to fight aliens. the world was combination of science and fantasy. its good today for I could read these 483 chapters on single day because of limited free.
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Quality really fell off in the Invasion arc, just not up to par from the preceding arcs. Also characters are written like npcs following a prepogrammed script instead of like actual human beings. everything about the new story feels artificial filler. Not really exciting at all, gonna have to drop this one.
Story writing is bad, Grammar is heart breaking. It just kills the reading momentum. at some point i got so frustrated that i quit this story. character and story development sucks. quitting.
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The story is interesting and has the potential to be even better. from the very first chapter you get the feeling that the author is expecting you to know what's plotting in is mind... I mean there's little to no development on things that matter like the mc working is way into the academy. There are time skips everywhere to the point where you don't know what matters and what's just there as extra like there little to no description on the mc's family to the point where he might as well be an orphan. The author places his focus things that don't matter ( at least that's the feeling I get from reading the story) and you always get the feeling that a lot is missing at the end of each chapter. The story has a lot of potential by it is wasted by not having enough character development.
This is the most info-dumping I’ve ever witnessed in any story I’ve ever read. It’s even worse that it’s all confusing to follow. Amazing potential, but a spectacular failure.
I'm just going to give this five stars because I want to ask a question about the mcs personality. Is he ruthless, cold? Because that would be best. And if he is not that in the beginning does his personality and character develope into a ruthless/ morally gray one? Thanks in advance
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I enjoying the book and all, but it has been awhile for an update, when can we expect the next update, or have you decided to quit writing this one.
Nice concept and story background. The only problem is the update issue. It's been a while and I don't see an update. As for the character design, they are somewhat dull.
I’m not too far into the book but it’s good. I wouldn’t call it one of my favorite stories but it’s a decent book. It has some new concepts and ideas that make the book unique but at the same time, it is a bit illogical in presenting those ideas. I hope it improves soon but it is still a pretty good read this early into the story.
Used to love the story, but it seems like author barely has any intentions of keeping fans to stick around with how sparce updates is. Don't bother using your coins like how i did, you will feel its a waste of money as we wont know whether author will drop the story or not.
Psst! Hey, over here. Nice...ok, I want to tell you that this story is amazing definitely recommend it to you. Hey, are you bored of answering modules, forget about school and read this thing bruh. We need xp everyday so red for xp but nice story.
This book is great because it integrate the science and magic. The story is also interesting because it is not the normal fantasy in which the main character died and reincarnated in the fantasy world and that fantasy world is in the medieval era and kill the demon lord which is now too boring because that plot is now too common however this story is good because it do not follow that kind of plot.
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Amazing mixture of fantasy and sci-fy elements. Characters are realistic and they actually make decisions that make sense. The only little drawback is that there are many chapters focused on side characters fights while you are left waiting for our Main to take action. This is a drawback but it also makes the world feel more real so I don't want for it to change ;l
Very unique character and world building storyline. Not because they include magic with science but because of the way it is combined. The only thing i didn't care for was the split personality/character because it brings logic issues that are just brushed over. I'd rather the main character just accomplished everything without the split.
The storyline pretty good good story to pass the time. Updates are about 1 day but the chapter are well writer for the time taken and seems like the writer keep track and figure where the story going so far no fillers chapter or a way out side there arc
From the start I am someone who loves this type of book where the main character is implementing advanced or different knowledge into a new world. But there are so many stories where this is done awkwardly. Thankfully this gem of a story has avoided that problem. The writing is good even if there are grammar mistakes every so often, but that doesn’t detract from the enjoyment at all. The world building is great too talking about multiple countries and their specialization and characteristics. It does have a feeling of irregular at magic high school but this is mainly only for the first major arc which is a competition between schools. But it only has passing similarities and deviates from that path pretty early on in the competition. If you like less battle stuffed stories and prefer a well built world then you should read this novel.
This is a unique take of the system/gamer genre where instead of a video game it uses an alien device to create the system/gamer interface. I really enjoy the mix of sci-fi and fantasy. The author spends a lot of time and detail explaining how magic works since this story is about a magical engineer the detail makes the story more enjoyable because you feel more connected to the events in the novel. The world building and the wide variety of characters give the novels world a lived in feeling. The main character is interesting I wish that the author would spend as much time fleshing out the MC relationship to his family and friends as the author does on magic theory and world building. I will give the author bonus points for injecting the novel with humor and making the novel a good light read when the novel could have been dense and dry. I recommend this novel to anyone who like fantasy with a sci-fi twist.
if you are looking for a novel that only have few chapters this novel is highly recommend
the story has delayed progress little exciting parts. The story is only exciting for 5 chapters and then for like 20 chapters the story is boring and mundane
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
I thoroughly enjoyed my time reading this. I am not up to date on the chapters, I read about 350 chapters and it was good.
Book was done by the time I read it, but I saw comments about update issues. Other than that it was a great story that king of fell off a bit in the last 1/4 of the book.
I Like it. I thought it was a great relationship between fantasy and sci-fi. I would love to read from the girl or girls side. Please and thank you.
Read till chap 91, must say a bit impressed. The writing quality is okay, the world building and characters werent bland, could be relatable. Of course, I prefer a bit comedic but oh well, acceptable so far.
it's a good sci-fi novel, but seems this novel was on hiatus for more than 1 time. the reader in the comments section was dropped tremendously after the 300th something chapter. the ending was also a bit forced, maybe after the first hiatus, the author was hiatus once again before trying to make this novel completed. the story was resembles some novels at first. the plot was in the Academy of magic and then going to space to fight aliens. the world was combination of science and fantasy. its good today for I could read these 483 chapters on single day because of limited free.
💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
Quality really fell off in the Invasion arc, just not up to par from the preceding arcs. Also characters are written like npcs following a prepogrammed script instead of like actual human beings. everything about the new story feels artificial filler. Not really exciting at all, gonna have to drop this one.
Story writing is bad, Grammar is heart breaking. It just kills the reading momentum. at some point i got so frustrated that i quit this story. character and story development sucks. quitting.
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The story is interesting and has the potential to be even better. from the very first chapter you get the feeling that the author is expecting you to know what's plotting in is mind... I mean there's little to no development on things that matter like the mc working is way into the academy. There are time skips everywhere to the point where you don't know what matters and what's just there as extra like there little to no description on the mc's family to the point where he might as well be an orphan. The author places his focus things that don't matter ( at least that's the feeling I get from reading the story) and you always get the feeling that a lot is missing at the end of each chapter. The story has a lot of potential by it is wasted by not having enough character development.
This is the most info-dumping I’ve ever witnessed in any story I’ve ever read. It’s even worse that it’s all confusing to follow. Amazing potential, but a spectacular failure.
I'm just going to give this five stars because I want to ask a question about the mcs personality. Is he ruthless, cold? Because that would be best. And if he is not that in the beginning does his personality and character develope into a ruthless/ morally gray one? Thanks in advance
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ネタバレを明かす I enjoying the book and all, but it has been awhile for an update, when can we expect the next update, or have you decided to quit writing this one.
Nice concept and story background. The only problem is the update issue. It's been a while and I don't see an update. As for the character design, they are somewhat dull.
I’m not too far into the book but it’s good. I wouldn’t call it one of my favorite stories but it’s a decent book. It has some new concepts and ideas that make the book unique but at the same time, it is a bit illogical in presenting those ideas. I hope it improves soon but it is still a pretty good read this early into the story.
Used to love the story, but it seems like author barely has any intentions of keeping fans to stick around with how sparce updates is. Don't bother using your coins like how i did, you will feel its a waste of money as we wont know whether author will drop the story or not.
Psst! Hey, over here. Nice...ok, I want to tell you that this story is amazing definitely recommend it to you. Hey, are you bored of answering modules, forget about school and read this thing bruh. We need xp everyday so red for xp but nice story.
This book is great because it integrate the science and magic. The story is also interesting because it is not the normal fantasy in which the main character died and reincarnated in the fantasy world and that fantasy world is in the medieval era and kill the demon lord which is now too boring because that plot is now too common however this story is good because it do not follow that kind of plot.
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Amazing mixture of fantasy and sci-fy elements. Characters are realistic and they actually make decisions that make sense. The only little drawback is that there are many chapters focused on side characters fights while you are left waiting for our Main to take action. This is a drawback but it also makes the world feel more real so I don't want for it to change ;l
Very unique character and world building storyline. Not because they include magic with science but because of the way it is combined. The only thing i didn't care for was the split personality/character because it brings logic issues that are just brushed over. I'd rather the main character just accomplished everything without the split.
The storyline pretty good good story to pass the time. Updates are about 1 day but the chapter are well writer for the time taken and seems like the writer keep track and figure where the story going so far no fillers chapter or a way out side there arc