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This is a great spider man fanfic with a unique point of view, as most of the fanfics are just transmigration or reincarnation into Peter parker.
Nice story by the way.. Love it! ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
There are few good Spider-Man FIC's out there so I recommend anyone that wants to read a good one take a look at this one. ***********************************
I like this story a lot! Keep up with the good work. *********************__________&&&&&&&&&********+++---------888888999090000////))))))))) :) 🤣😂😅😆😁😄😃😀😗😙😚😘☺️😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜😝😛😝😛😝😛😝😛😝😛😝🙄🙄🙄🙄🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🤫😳🤫😳🤫😳🤫😳🤫😳🤫😳🤫😳🤫😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴
U cant say in the synopsis that he's a clone and in the first chapter state that he's the real Peter. 🤔🤔🤔 The ratings I gave isn't cause I liked the story, honestly after getting me hooked on the whole clone scenario and dropping it the first chance u get I stopped reading. I gave u that rating cause i dont like hating.
This has promise and I hope you keep on working in the story. 👍👍👍👍👍 ............................................................ .............................................................
Harem?? If no it's okay, if yes that's good (づ￣ ³￣)づ i give you hug if yes.......(no homo) 140114014101419141014101410114101410141014101410141014101410141014101410141014101419141014
Good stuff. At start it was a little confusing but after you get the hang of it, everything comes around. <Need more updates if not dropped already>
This is a great spider man fanfic with a unique point of view, as most of the fanfics are just transmigration or reincarnation into Peter parker.
Nice story by the way.. Love it! ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
There are few good Spider-Man FIC's out there so I recommend anyone that wants to read a good one take a look at this one. ***********************************
I like this story a lot! Keep up with the good work. *********************__________&&&&&&&&&********+++---------888888999090000////))))))))) :) 🤣😂😅😆😁😄😃😀😗😙😚😘☺️😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜🤪😜😝😛😝😛😝😛😝😛😝😛😝🙄🙄🙄🙄🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🤫😳🤫😳🤫😳🤫😳🤫😳🤫😳🤫😳🤫😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴
U cant say in the synopsis that he's a clone and in the first chapter state that he's the real Peter. 🤔🤔🤔 The ratings I gave isn't cause I liked the story, honestly after getting me hooked on the whole clone scenario and dropping it the first chance u get I stopped reading. I gave u that rating cause i dont like hating.
This has promise and I hope you keep on working in the story. 👍👍👍👍👍 ............................................................ .............................................................
Harem?? If no it's okay, if yes that's good (づ￣ ³￣)づ i give you hug if yes.......(no homo) 140114014101419141014101410114101410141014101410141014101410141014101410141014101419141014
Good stuff. At start it was a little confusing but after you get the hang of it, everything comes around. <Need more updates if not dropped already>