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One of the most trash trash, I ever read all my life. I read until now 114 chapters. I like a bit the concept. I’ll gladly make my own story with this structure.
the abilities of the mc are week and yet he is dominating everyone except for garp for the first 30 chapters .
Well start was good but power level is messed up timeline messed up all girls falling for MC for no reason MC giving himself soft NTR a girl fallen in love with MC joins marine for him he is like i have no idea you are in love with me after he goes out for 6 months the girl got in love with other men and bears his child
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The plot is meh, some don't make sence and it's not really a good fanfic. It's an OK fanfic but not good
I didn’t get very far into, it could get better but it is hard to get through the starting chapters, stupid mc, bad spelling mistakes. Overall good idea bad execution
Sin coherencia con el pj creado ni con las circunstancias que propone para la historia, forzando la trama en lugar de desarrollarla.
this Nobel's cliche is too much and the plot holes are just infuriating . the first few chaps were good but then the chinese cliche just starts which is just annoying, a good fanfic just destroyed .
the beginning was uplifting, a slightly dark story about how the hero gradually became stronger... and this story is not about that. the hero is a whiner and a weakling who wants to commit suicide because he is not given the strength. just train like everyone else slowly, since all this is not for the hero, so he will sit and whine, doing nothing. but having received the system, the hero instantly became an arrogant freak, and yes, Chinese clichés.... conclusion: this story is trash
Useless wuxia nonsense. They ruined a beautiful and potentially potent subject. Not worth reading......................................................................................................................
Es una muy buena novela, está fue la primera que logré leer y me inculcó el amor por leer sin necesidad de dibujos así que estoy muy agradecido con el creador y aunque perdí la cuenta de las veces que algo se salió de la ruta en verdad me gustó el giro de la trama y la historia en general.
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It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they put into the fic It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they put into the fic
Buena la historia debería haber puesto harem pero de resto bueno 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👍🤔👍🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👍👍🤔👍👍👍👍🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Well the Power System is absolutely not working the way the author writes it, i mean learning water walking and rasengan without anything else than anime knowledge in a few weeks or so and going from 0 chakra civilian to chunin in around a month or so. Also the Mc fighting against garp when he has absolutely no chance ( yes that could be for experience, but he had a bet to join marines going) and joining the Marines when his system literally makes him stronger the more money he has is just stupid not to mention that becoming a lap dog for the world government is idiotic cause you have to follow orders, you have to protect celestial dragons and their slavery, you don’t get paid well, you might be used as experiment material for the World Gov. and so much more. Mc is just stupid and indecisive.
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This belongs in the great taste poor execution reddit. If they gave this isekai or system to a reasonably competent main charachter it would be 10 times better. Just saying if your main charachter can't figure out soru or shigan after having watched the anime it's just hopeless.
this story has no meaning it's just going on and on MC has no drive nothing it's like a friend who has been drawling on and on and has no mind shut his mouth
a stupid mc and without charisma the story has no romance the mc is stupid with women despite having very powerful abilities he is defeated like an idiot the control with the canon is horrible nothing is understood and the worst joins the sailors
story and événement forced. Bad développement of thé mc. action fast, dumb and wooden. mc overpowered but lose because the author need the mc to lose
😅 This story has many stars... [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
author got most of the facts about one piece and Naruto wrong, and to be honest I did not feel like getting attached to this novel. it was boring and if are thinking about reading this, i would say don't (well if you are in mood to read senseless fanfiction then go ahead)
the story at the beginning was great. the wuxia cliche, becoming a marine, his rank, harem like MC is all ok for me. I've read worse, but as I continue I feel like a kid playing a lego toy, all mess-up you know, the timeline, the strength, his skill, his dense around girls, he was suppose to be one piece fan but feels like he didn't have anyone he love to meet or interested in. all mess up everything. its kind of disappointing
Bad, very bad...I know this stories is not about romance but this is just leaving a bad taste on my mouth...he's cold and doesn't give a fvk to woman, and when finally he choose a woman he jusy leave her in small island almost got raped by so thugs...it's really bad,
Can you make the MC a little smarter and please don't make him a very dense guy but keep it up it's very good story atleast give a girlfriend even if 1 girl
Its very bad. Hero is fu***ing idiot. 0/10............. ..................................................... .................................
good novel . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . .
useless novel... Mc always considers to get powerful jutsu but forgets that there are very useful jutsus among basic jutsus like transformation jutsu,etc..., n gaps personality is portrayed wrong ... beginning concept was interesting... that's it ... what a disappointment 😞 😪
Im asian and im fine with cliches but my man really had too add ching chong bing bong bing chilling wuxia so i had too drop it since its not one piece anymore its wuxia
It is not a bad story considering it is a translation and there is not that much Chinese influences so that is also a plus for me. [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap]
One of the most trash trash, I ever read all my life. I read until now 114 chapters. I like a bit the concept. I’ll gladly make my own story with this structure.
the abilities of the mc are week and yet he is dominating everyone except for garp for the first 30 chapters .
Well start was good but power level is messed up timeline messed up all girls falling for MC for no reason MC giving himself soft NTR a girl fallen in love with MC joins marine for him he is like i have no idea you are in love with me after he goes out for 6 months the girl got in love with other men and bears his child
Xianxia [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The plot is meh, some don't make sence and it's not really a good fanfic. It's an OK fanfic but not good
I didn’t get very far into, it could get better but it is hard to get through the starting chapters, stupid mc, bad spelling mistakes. Overall good idea bad execution
Sin coherencia con el pj creado ni con las circunstancias que propone para la historia, forzando la trama en lugar de desarrollarla.
this Nobel's cliche is too much and the plot holes are just infuriating . the first few chaps were good but then the chinese cliche just starts which is just annoying, a good fanfic just destroyed .
the beginning was uplifting, a slightly dark story about how the hero gradually became stronger... and this story is not about that. the hero is a whiner and a weakling who wants to commit suicide because he is not given the strength. just train like everyone else slowly, since all this is not for the hero, so he will sit and whine, doing nothing. but having received the system, the hero instantly became an arrogant freak, and yes, Chinese clichés.... conclusion: this story is trash
Useless wuxia nonsense. They ruined a beautiful and potentially potent subject. Not worth reading......................................................................................................................
Es una muy buena novela, está fue la primera que logré leer y me inculcó el amor por leer sin necesidad de dibujos así que estoy muy agradecido con el creador y aunque perdí la cuenta de las veces que algo se salió de la ruta en verdad me gustó el giro de la trama y la historia en general.
ネタバレを明かす It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they put into the fic It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they put into the fic
Buena la historia debería haber puesto harem pero de resto bueno 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👍🤔👍🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👍👍🤔👍👍👍👍🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Well the Power System is absolutely not working the way the author writes it, i mean learning water walking and rasengan without anything else than anime knowledge in a few weeks or so and going from 0 chakra civilian to chunin in around a month or so. Also the Mc fighting against garp when he has absolutely no chance ( yes that could be for experience, but he had a bet to join marines going) and joining the Marines when his system literally makes him stronger the more money he has is just stupid not to mention that becoming a lap dog for the world government is idiotic cause you have to follow orders, you have to protect celestial dragons and their slavery, you don’t get paid well, you might be used as experiment material for the World Gov. and so much more. Mc is just stupid and indecisive.
ネタバレを明かす This belongs in the great taste poor execution reddit. If they gave this isekai or system to a reasonably competent main charachter it would be 10 times better. Just saying if your main charachter can't figure out soru or shigan after having watched the anime it's just hopeless.
this story has no meaning it's just going on and on MC has no drive nothing it's like a friend who has been drawling on and on and has no mind shut his mouth
a stupid mc and without charisma the story has no romance the mc is stupid with women despite having very powerful abilities he is defeated like an idiot the control with the canon is horrible nothing is understood and the worst joins the sailors
story and événement forced. Bad développement of thé mc. action fast, dumb and wooden. mc overpowered but lose because the author need the mc to lose
😅 This story has many stars... [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
author got most of the facts about one piece and Naruto wrong, and to be honest I did not feel like getting attached to this novel. it was boring and if are thinking about reading this, i would say don't (well if you are in mood to read senseless fanfiction then go ahead)
the story at the beginning was great. the wuxia cliche, becoming a marine, his rank, harem like MC is all ok for me. I've read worse, but as I continue I feel like a kid playing a lego toy, all mess-up you know, the timeline, the strength, his skill, his dense around girls, he was suppose to be one piece fan but feels like he didn't have anyone he love to meet or interested in. all mess up everything. its kind of disappointing
Bad, very bad...I know this stories is not about romance but this is just leaving a bad taste on my mouth...he's cold and doesn't give a fvk to woman, and when finally he choose a woman he jusy leave her in small island almost got raped by so thugs...it's really bad,
Can you make the MC a little smarter and please don't make him a very dense guy but keep it up it's very good story atleast give a girlfriend even if 1 girl
Its very bad. Hero is fu***ing idiot. 0/10............. ..................................................... .................................
good novel . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . .
useless novel... Mc always considers to get powerful jutsu but forgets that there are very useful jutsus among basic jutsus like transformation jutsu,etc..., n gaps personality is portrayed wrong ... beginning concept was interesting... that's it ... what a disappointment 😞 😪
Im asian and im fine with cliches but my man really had too add ching chong bing bong bing chilling wuxia so i had too drop it since its not one piece anymore its wuxia
It is not a bad story considering it is a translation and there is not that much Chinese influences so that is also a plus for me. [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap]
there is no stability in uploads. but still great content.