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Главный герой переродился курамой одним из самых сильных существ и ноет по этому поводу , в общем сделано ужасно не нужно тратить время на это
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O personagem é meio op e o autor faz o protagonista ter muita influência sobe um deus. Mas a obra é decente, tem boa ortografia e gramática... e é divertida. Divertida. Divertida. Divertida. Divertida.
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It's a really good story it's just that the title man, I thought he would be kurama but didn't.... You should change the title cuz it's kinda confusing and also stop with the kun, chan, thingy cuz it's been making me crazy it literally make me want to sue the one who invented those words of about more than a freaking million........... And also please try to use gramarly I think that's what it was called so yeah use that..... And also stop with the cursing thing cuz in the first chapters he always curse the freaking god.... That's all and good night freaking webnovel...... 😑
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Its very interesting. Its funny moments with the Dharin god make it funny. The mc grows stronger by unlocking gates which we rarely see in the anime. And its interesting that naruto can use tail beast chakra mode with 3 tails since he opened 3 gates
The transition from first person POV to third person POV was pretty nasty in the first chapter. Though it's a minor thing. Average novel but interesting concept. If done spectacularly, we will get to see a refreshing retelling of Naruto through Kurama's point of view.
Overall its a good story, but don't you think that your MC becoming stronger in a very fast way? He just opened the 6th gate in 26 chapter and his cakra already comparable to kage cakra. So the question is, who will able to kill him in next 10 chapter? Your story will be over soon (coz of overly OP MC) if you keep writing your novel in this way.
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Decepcionante Beta MC Estupido MC Complejo de héroe ayuda sin pedir nada a cambio como ayudar a entrenar a naruto y sasuke Esperaba que fuera más serio después de todo supuestamente tiene los recuerdos de kurama yin y de su vida pasada pero el es inmaduro parace un niño de 5 años Esperaba más
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I like the story a lot but you really need to focus on spelling, grammar etc. I would appreciate a bit more details in regards to fighting scenes.
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Average novel. New concept was handled a bit poorly in my opinion though, but some might like it. I personally thought it would have been the Mc in Naruto's body as Kurama or something but it ended up basically being that Kurama in a sense is his Kekkei Genkai while he became Shikamaru's twin. Then he spends first 3 chapters sh*tting on a God over and over. Complaining about being born in the Nara clan because they're lazy. When he seems just as lazy as them, and it gets annoying and repetitive might I add. It's basically the standard op Mc as far as I can see with the friendship between Naruto and Sasuke (which I don't mind). Oh and the over used 8 gates technique but with a twist. The biggest plus for me was that it wasn't harem but it got boring pretty fast. Let me be clear I am not trying to sh*t on the author. The novel was just not to my tastes. If you like it, great. If the author is happy with the book, great. But it's not to my tastes. (oh and the grammar is average or below average for webnovel standards)
Since the author is a goodguy here my honest review From the concept i really like it there is no one in the world what will kurama feel and thats why the author making the MC to become kurama with so much chakra and unlimited potential I hope you don't drop it man See you on the top Thaaankyouu =))
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Please review this novel only if you atleast read more than 10 chapters. Don't review it bad, just because you felt the story plot is different than you thought( I have seen a fellow gave his review as 1 star, just because felt that plot is not of his expectations).I will certainly wll delee those reviews for the growth of my novel. Also if you honestly gave your review, i will take whatever you threw at me and will certainly try to develop on my mistakes. Thanks for reading
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Hope this one is much more exciting than the anime movie of Naruto😁😁😁😁.though the plot might be same....I'm excited to read this story...😊😊😊😊
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Главный герой переродился курамой одним из самых сильных существ и ноет по этому поводу , в общем сделано ужасно не нужно тратить время на это
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Me encanta este fanfic espero que continue y no se caiga como las otras novelas 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
O personagem é meio op e o autor faz o protagonista ter muita influência sobe um deus. Mas a obra é decente, tem boa ortografia e gramática... e é divertida. Divertida. Divertida. Divertida. Divertida.
Change the title. Jstulstlskutsuutjttuststsjstsststsjtjstjtjssoukrsrummdhxmthjxmttxjtxjmxjxjgxjq Xjtjxtjxmttxxjtxtjtjxtmxjxjmjztxjxtjhrxrhxrxhzrhnzhr
It's a really good story it's just that the title man, I thought he would be kurama but didn't.... You should change the title cuz it's kinda confusing and also stop with the kun, chan, thingy cuz it's been making me crazy it literally make me want to sue the one who invented those words of about more than a freaking million........... And also please try to use gramarly I think that's what it was called so yeah use that..... And also stop with the cursing thing cuz in the first chapters he always curse the freaking god.... That's all and good night freaking webnovel...... 😑
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Its very interesting. Its funny moments with the Dharin god make it funny. The mc grows stronger by unlocking gates which we rarely see in the anime. And its interesting that naruto can use tail beast chakra mode with 3 tails since he opened 3 gates
The transition from first person POV to third person POV was pretty nasty in the first chapter. Though it's a minor thing. Average novel but interesting concept. If done spectacularly, we will get to see a refreshing retelling of Naruto through Kurama's point of view.
Overall its a good story, but don't you think that your MC becoming stronger in a very fast way? He just opened the 6th gate in 26 chapter and his cakra already comparable to kage cakra. So the question is, who will able to kill him in next 10 chapter? Your story will be over soon (coz of overly OP MC) if you keep writing your novel in this way.
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Decepcionante Beta MC Estupido MC Complejo de héroe ayuda sin pedir nada a cambio como ayudar a entrenar a naruto y sasuke Esperaba que fuera más serio después de todo supuestamente tiene los recuerdos de kurama yin y de su vida pasada pero el es inmaduro parace un niño de 5 años Esperaba más
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ネタバレを明かす I like the story a lot but you really need to focus on spelling, grammar etc. I would appreciate a bit more details in regards to fighting scenes.
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Average novel. New concept was handled a bit poorly in my opinion though, but some might like it. I personally thought it would have been the Mc in Naruto's body as Kurama or something but it ended up basically being that Kurama in a sense is his Kekkei Genkai while he became Shikamaru's twin. Then he spends first 3 chapters sh*tting on a God over and over. Complaining about being born in the Nara clan because they're lazy. When he seems just as lazy as them, and it gets annoying and repetitive might I add. It's basically the standard op Mc as far as I can see with the friendship between Naruto and Sasuke (which I don't mind). Oh and the over used 8 gates technique but with a twist. The biggest plus for me was that it wasn't harem but it got boring pretty fast. Let me be clear I am not trying to sh*t on the author. The novel was just not to my tastes. If you like it, great. If the author is happy with the book, great. But it's not to my tastes. (oh and the grammar is average or below average for webnovel standards)
Since the author is a goodguy here my honest review From the concept i really like it there is no one in the world what will kurama feel and thats why the author making the MC to become kurama with so much chakra and unlimited potential I hope you don't drop it man See you on the top Thaaankyouu =))
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Please review this novel only if you atleast read more than 10 chapters. Don't review it bad, just because you felt the story plot is different than you thought( I have seen a fellow gave his review as 1 star, just because felt that plot is not of his expectations).I will certainly wll delee those reviews for the growth of my novel. Also if you honestly gave your review, i will take whatever you threw at me and will certainly try to develop on my mistakes. Thanks for reading
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This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooid
Hope this one is much more exciting than the anime movie of Naruto😁😁😁😁.though the plot might be same....I'm excited to read this story...😊😊😊😊
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