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Unfortunate Hero's Retirement Life La vida de retiro de un héroe desafortunado "Debería estar por aquí…" murmuró Heero hasta que encontró una estatua sin rostro. Le ordenó a su familia que tocara la estatua antes de poner su mano sobre ella. Luego imbuyó su Ki a la estatua. Al momento siguiente, la familia desapareció y apareció nuevamente frente a una casa. Las casas familiares llegaron a la vista de Heero. Movió la cabeza y descubrió que nada había cambiado excepto una casa adicional. Mientras recordaba, la puerta se abrió. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Sorry, had to drop this at ch 4. Saying the writing quality as suck is exaggerated, there's not even a word that can describe how awful it was. If author remake this especially with better writing quality, it can go further seeing the synopsis. But for now, NO, NOPE AND NEVER!
Honestly just bad. You shouldn’t make the synopsis about how he was sealed in ice if that event only happens after volume 1. Just feels lik you couldn’t think of a synopsis.
I am sorry that i need to give such a low evaluation. I tried to read it, but my head srarted hurting while reading the first two chapter. I read novels for entertainment and to build a world in my mind while reading these stories. if i want to immerse myself into the story, it needs to have a basic level of grammar and story telling quality. I also read comments about this grammar problem and that it gets better with the chapter as the story develops. But i needed to stop reading, because my head could not take it. If possible could you please rewrite the beginning, so that it reflects the real quality of the world you build. I would really appreciate it and hope your stories get traction and your writing improves by leaps and bounds
La historia es muy buena y llamativa, los personajes son entretenidos. Lo único que podria considerar no tan bueno es el final, tampoco quiere decir que sea malo, solo es un final y punto. Gracias por esta buena historia.
the story is good and interesting but grammar and writing sucks so if you wanna read be ready to lose a few of your brain cells. To be honest I'm very tempted to edit and repost this novel but I don't know how the author will react🤔
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very nice story ...love it!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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well, 5 stars even though I don't like the novel, but that's my own fault. I dislike harem, but missed the tag. first 100 chapters are absolute fabulous, though had to stop by then cos it turns from monogamy to pologamy. nice story with insanely OP MC , action with some slice of life included and romance well written. 5/5 if we exclude harem (and I do in this case, since it is personal preference, and can't judge the book by genre alone)
I didn’t expect that it would be this good. seriously, very nice work. I recommend reading it. Very addictive. i stopped all the other books to finish reading this one.
i only read chapter 1, idk if it ever gets better but the writing quality is a 0.3/10, it's absolutely awful writing, the author needs to hire someone to proofread his novels and fix it, if his English is super poor
After I finished the novel, I can say it was fun. The world's background is good, and the power system is fairly good. The biggest problem with the novel is the stupidity of most characters. Characters with limited intelligence and stupid behavior. The author should work more in terms of writing characters. I think that's all I have.
bro wth did I just read. I thought these cultavation manwhua's had bad translation/editing but holy. I acually really enjoyed the story but come on please get an editor, like please.
built an amazing world with an interesting twist on earth, the main character is so unfortunate but how it all plays out to lay the future for the characters is amazing to read
To be honest I wasn't expecting much from the novel but got hooked line and sinker. it has some grammatical errors here and there and the MC is kind of pushover at the beginning but gotta say it all developed nicely. I wish it was longer but also appreciate that instead of shoving you useless writing to keep it going longer than it should be the author decided against it like most novels do and mess it up when readership drops like a rock and then rush the ending ruining what could have been a great read. but enough of the side critic lol, highly recommend it
The writing quality is definitely top notch and the author definitely did a very good job the story development is thrilling and engaging keep
Nice Story With Great Development feels a bit rushed but o well great story. MC OP Harem present funny and cultivation all rounder🤩😉😉🤐😜
l loved this novel man its a frikin gem... the writing quality was bad sometimes but not dat hard to understand i did read all the chapters insane story thro the final boss thing was kinda sad for me plus i was also hoping author could bring us his master n hismmothers back earlier after all u did made so many afterstory chapters but still i loved the story. If u had an editor look thro ur work first i would have given u 5 star in all of them but its still fine. I wish u could come up with another such a great story. Thanks for the journey mate.
amazing book, absolutely loved it. I've been reading this for a couple months and I just finished it but I love how the story progresses and we get to see how Heero progresses and gets a heartwarming ending
Thought about giving this a read but saw the authors snide comments. That clearly a sigh of how this book is going to be. He cant take critism well and then rant. lol
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Author here. I am here shamelessly to give my own work with 5* :) and explain a bit about the story. Our Mc is sealed for an unknown time, but when he woke up and broke the seal, he realized he was in a foreign land. Later, slowly but surely, our Mc will find out how he end up in this foreign land (Earth). He will slowly uncover the mysteries Earth experienced such as the catastrophe 600 years ago and so on. Please be patient with the slow start :) I hope you enjoy my second work or maybe third? Nevermind, hope you enjoy my story :)
Unfortunate Hero's Retirement Life La vida de retiro de un héroe desafortunado "Debería estar por aquí…" murmuró Heero hasta que encontró una estatua sin rostro. Le ordenó a su familia que tocara la estatua antes de poner su mano sobre ella. Luego imbuyó su Ki a la estatua. Al momento siguiente, la familia desapareció y apareció nuevamente frente a una casa. Las casas familiares llegaron a la vista de Heero. Movió la cabeza y descubrió que nada había cambiado excepto una casa adicional. Mientras recordaba, la puerta se abrió. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Sorry, had to drop this at ch 4. Saying the writing quality as suck is exaggerated, there's not even a word that can describe how awful it was. If author remake this especially with better writing quality, it can go further seeing the synopsis. But for now, NO, NOPE AND NEVER!
Honestly just bad. You shouldn’t make the synopsis about how he was sealed in ice if that event only happens after volume 1. Just feels lik you couldn’t think of a synopsis.
I am sorry that i need to give such a low evaluation. I tried to read it, but my head srarted hurting while reading the first two chapter. I read novels for entertainment and to build a world in my mind while reading these stories. if i want to immerse myself into the story, it needs to have a basic level of grammar and story telling quality. I also read comments about this grammar problem and that it gets better with the chapter as the story develops. But i needed to stop reading, because my head could not take it. If possible could you please rewrite the beginning, so that it reflects the real quality of the world you build. I would really appreciate it and hope your stories get traction and your writing improves by leaps and bounds
La historia es muy buena y llamativa, los personajes son entretenidos. Lo único que podria considerar no tan bueno es el final, tampoco quiere decir que sea malo, solo es un final y punto. Gracias por esta buena historia.
the story is good and interesting but grammar and writing sucks so if you wanna read be ready to lose a few of your brain cells. To be honest I'm very tempted to edit and repost this novel but I don't know how the author will react🤔
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very nice story ...love it!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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well, 5 stars even though I don't like the novel, but that's my own fault. I dislike harem, but missed the tag. first 100 chapters are absolute fabulous, though had to stop by then cos it turns from monogamy to pologamy. nice story with insanely OP MC , action with some slice of life included and romance well written. 5/5 if we exclude harem (and I do in this case, since it is personal preference, and can't judge the book by genre alone)
I didn’t expect that it would be this good. seriously, very nice work. I recommend reading it. Very addictive. i stopped all the other books to finish reading this one.
i only read chapter 1, idk if it ever gets better but the writing quality is a 0.3/10, it's absolutely awful writing, the author needs to hire someone to proofread his novels and fix it, if his English is super poor
After I finished the novel, I can say it was fun. The world's background is good, and the power system is fairly good. The biggest problem with the novel is the stupidity of most characters. Characters with limited intelligence and stupid behavior. The author should work more in terms of writing characters. I think that's all I have.
bro wth did I just read. I thought these cultavation manwhua's had bad translation/editing but holy. I acually really enjoyed the story but come on please get an editor, like please.
built an amazing world with an interesting twist on earth, the main character is so unfortunate but how it all plays out to lay the future for the characters is amazing to read
To be honest I wasn't expecting much from the novel but got hooked line and sinker. it has some grammatical errors here and there and the MC is kind of pushover at the beginning but gotta say it all developed nicely. I wish it was longer but also appreciate that instead of shoving you useless writing to keep it going longer than it should be the author decided against it like most novels do and mess it up when readership drops like a rock and then rush the ending ruining what could have been a great read. but enough of the side critic lol, highly recommend it
The writing quality is definitely top notch and the author definitely did a very good job the story development is thrilling and engaging keep
Nice Story With Great Development feels a bit rushed but o well great story. MC OP Harem present funny and cultivation all rounder🤩😉😉🤐😜
l loved this novel man its a frikin gem... the writing quality was bad sometimes but not dat hard to understand i did read all the chapters insane story thro the final boss thing was kinda sad for me plus i was also hoping author could bring us his master n hismmothers back earlier after all u did made so many afterstory chapters but still i loved the story. If u had an editor look thro ur work first i would have given u 5 star in all of them but its still fine. I wish u could come up with another such a great story. Thanks for the journey mate.
amazing book, absolutely loved it. I've been reading this for a couple months and I just finished it but I love how the story progresses and we get to see how Heero progresses and gets a heartwarming ending
Thought about giving this a read but saw the authors snide comments. That clearly a sigh of how this book is going to be. He cant take critism well and then rant. lol
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Author here. I am here shamelessly to give my own work with 5* :) and explain a bit about the story. Our Mc is sealed for an unknown time, but when he woke up and broke the seal, he realized he was in a foreign land. Later, slowly but surely, our Mc will find out how he end up in this foreign land (Earth). He will slowly uncover the mysteries Earth experienced such as the catastrophe 600 years ago and so on. Please be patient with the slow start :) I hope you enjoy my second work or maybe third? Nevermind, hope you enjoy my story :)