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The story is something unique that I came across till.now.. and the events unfolding are.more.stranger.. are there people like this? For sake of love ready to submit themselves for any kind of experience or rather say torture. However author manages well to keep it holder and make us believe that it's nothing abnormal..
Pleaseeeeeeee update moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I love the story. Can't wait for moreeee. What will happen to the FL. The story really turned me on!!!
I mean at first ithought i would stop reading once i get to read some parts that werent to my liking but i just couldnt stop.. I kept trying to still go to the next page. Until i ended up on the latest chapter. Omg this is so good although there really are some parts that were a bit disturbing for me but i think that is what made me so hooked on this book i wanted to know what would happen in the end ... What would happen if it didnt? You know. It is literally my first time writing a review in webnovel well this was not much of a review but still...😊 I like this book with the side of feeling disturbed/ yet also piqued my interest. Hope the next woud come.
I highly recommend this. It's unique - not to mention hot hot hot *wink*. Some of the chapters are very hot..It takes you in a secret society world...of powerful families.. You'll love this!
for me, the author was so great. All the story that she make was so fantastic.. Im glad i discover her novel.. I plan to read this till end..
Giving it a total high five even though I'm not done reading it... Story too good to be true ..not happens in practical world. We are all humans and have limits. I really love this story though I don't want to experience
Awesome im not into submission and bdsm.. but reading with passion is totally cool ..we need different genre all the time not just fantasy magical reality sweet romance ..but also we need spice to make our lives go and this novels from is one of the most spiciest novel ive had read
Discovered the story today and read 18 chapters.. Even though the story is interesting it lacks in typo & grammar mistakes.. It can be eventually corrected in the future and all the best for your work for the rest of the story dear author. I think you should clearly mention in the synopsis that it is very much unsuitable for kids.
This isn’t a bad story, I think there just need someone to reread it and kinda fix up some things. I get confused sometimes with what’s going on and I have to reread but it isn’t bad! I enjoyed it a bit :))))
Read first three chapters..Very Nice. This is only for ***** readers. Heavy erotic content. Kids stay away plz. It has bdsm, submission topics explained in detail.
An amazing story that flows really well and the plot is really interesting! It's very different from the other stories I've read and has made me eager/excited to read the next chapters ((: Thanks for your hard work author <3
It's a wonderful book.... Good and captivating... Enticing story ...its gives the readers something to look forward... There is a part that really grabbed my attention... I felt like Wow... This is really impressive on the writers part..
Have read till CHapter 43 upto now. Really good, I look forward to the continuation! A prized possession into my library without hesitation..
You need to give out a massive release man because the book is really good ..This novel is really interesting and very well arranged,so please update it faster because it is very lovely to read,i really love how the story is laid out.
What must a woman do to show her worth. Don’t judge a book by it’s cover..this bookworm is evolving very fast. I love the story and it's pace. I am waiting how them story is going to continue and the development of feelings between the main lead. The only thing that bothers me is the author's love for submission and its excessive description in the story.
I really like how straight forward the characters are .... especially the female lead ....I like the male lead too ....he is good enough and the brainy types ...I like the mother character ....but the FL is too naive for her own good ....i loved how the mother character becomes mature later
I am enjoying this so far. Has real promise. The development and grammar is good and the pacing has a nice flow. Already have characters I hate and some shrouded in mystery. Great story!
Thank you so much for sharing more wonderful chapters to read, I enjoyed reading it, very interesting story. Have a wonderful day to be inspired to write more
This book is great and a fun read. Some chapters get real hot. Just like everyone -- only compliments is what I can say about it. From writing quality to character description -- it's good!! I would continue reading it in my free time and was worth recommending. Thumbs up to the author! GOOD JOB!
The book is quite well-written, and I like how the author described the things. It's easy to read and understand the storyline! The plotline is amazing too!
I thought I'll just read the first ten chapters or so but I just couldn't stop myself once I started. Your novel was that good. Appreciative. From the plot, the writing quality to world background all was really nicely set. Yes there were a few glitches but not as much as to hinder the process of reading. The character design, according to my personal opinion, needs a little polishing. Overall it deserves my attention and I'm happily reviewing it while keeping it in my library. Keep it up author.
This is the first fantasy novel I read in Webnovel and it's certainly an eye-opener. At the time of writing, I have read 15 chapters and I'm still wondering what's happening - not in a bad way. I just mean that I'm wondering what the future holds for the girl - the main character. The plot is slowly unfolding. Writing Quality: It's great and any mistakes are negligible to me.
I love the world that you created and the story development is really good too. The story intrigued me into wanting more and you know it is a good novel when that happens! More chapters please..
It's amazing book. I would like to suggest the ***** book readers to give this book a chance. The male lead is dominating and possessive and very loving toward female lead and it's a site to see..
The stability of writing is a bit slow.. just curious as what's going on.. this is a very different storyline and not at all able to guess anything..will she escape? What is wang goign to do or his family.. ? So.many likes her though she considers herself as not a beautiful woman!!
The story is something unique that I came across till.now.. and the events unfolding are.more.stranger.. are there people like this? For sake of love ready to submit themselves for any kind of experience or rather say torture. However author manages well to keep it holder and make us believe that it's nothing abnormal..
Pleaseeeeeeee update moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I love the story. Can't wait for moreeee. What will happen to the FL. The story really turned me on!!!
I mean at first ithought i would stop reading once i get to read some parts that werent to my liking but i just couldnt stop.. I kept trying to still go to the next page. Until i ended up on the latest chapter. Omg this is so good although there really are some parts that were a bit disturbing for me but i think that is what made me so hooked on this book i wanted to know what would happen in the end ... What would happen if it didnt? You know. It is literally my first time writing a review in webnovel well this was not much of a review but still...😊 I like this book with the side of feeling disturbed/ yet also piqued my interest. Hope the next woud come.
I highly recommend this. It's unique - not to mention hot hot hot *wink*. Some of the chapters are very hot..It takes you in a secret society world...of powerful families.. You'll love this!
for me, the author was so great. All the story that she make was so fantastic.. Im glad i discover her novel.. I plan to read this till end..
Giving it a total high five even though I'm not done reading it... Story too good to be true ..not happens in practical world. We are all humans and have limits. I really love this story though I don't want to experience
Awesome im not into submission and bdsm.. but reading with passion is totally cool ..we need different genre all the time not just fantasy magical reality sweet romance ..but also we need spice to make our lives go and this novels from is one of the most spiciest novel ive had read
Discovered the story today and read 18 chapters.. Even though the story is interesting it lacks in typo & grammar mistakes.. It can be eventually corrected in the future and all the best for your work for the rest of the story dear author. I think you should clearly mention in the synopsis that it is very much unsuitable for kids.
This isn’t a bad story, I think there just need someone to reread it and kinda fix up some things. I get confused sometimes with what’s going on and I have to reread but it isn’t bad! I enjoyed it a bit :))))
Read first three chapters..Very Nice. This is only for ***** readers. Heavy erotic content. Kids stay away plz. It has bdsm, submission topics explained in detail.
An amazing story that flows really well and the plot is really interesting! It's very different from the other stories I've read and has made me eager/excited to read the next chapters ((: Thanks for your hard work author <3
It's a wonderful book.... Good and captivating... Enticing story ...its gives the readers something to look forward... There is a part that really grabbed my attention... I felt like Wow... This is really impressive on the writers part..
Have read till CHapter 43 upto now. Really good, I look forward to the continuation! A prized possession into my library without hesitation..
You need to give out a massive release man because the book is really good ..This novel is really interesting and very well arranged,so please update it faster because it is very lovely to read,i really love how the story is laid out.
What must a woman do to show her worth. Don’t judge a book by it’s cover..this bookworm is evolving very fast. I love the story and it's pace. I am waiting how them story is going to continue and the development of feelings between the main lead. The only thing that bothers me is the author's love for submission and its excessive description in the story.
I really like how straight forward the characters are .... especially the female lead ....I like the male lead too ....he is good enough and the brainy types ...I like the mother character ....but the FL is too naive for her own good ....i loved how the mother character becomes mature later
I am enjoying this so far. Has real promise. The development and grammar is good and the pacing has a nice flow. Already have characters I hate and some shrouded in mystery. Great story!
Thank you so much for sharing more wonderful chapters to read, I enjoyed reading it, very interesting story. Have a wonderful day to be inspired to write more
This book is great and a fun read. Some chapters get real hot. Just like everyone -- only compliments is what I can say about it. From writing quality to character description -- it's good!! I would continue reading it in my free time and was worth recommending. Thumbs up to the author! GOOD JOB!
The book is quite well-written, and I like how the author described the things. It's easy to read and understand the storyline! The plotline is amazing too!
I thought I'll just read the first ten chapters or so but I just couldn't stop myself once I started. Your novel was that good. Appreciative. From the plot, the writing quality to world background all was really nicely set. Yes there were a few glitches but not as much as to hinder the process of reading. The character design, according to my personal opinion, needs a little polishing. Overall it deserves my attention and I'm happily reviewing it while keeping it in my library. Keep it up author.
This is the first fantasy novel I read in Webnovel and it's certainly an eye-opener. At the time of writing, I have read 15 chapters and I'm still wondering what's happening - not in a bad way. I just mean that I'm wondering what the future holds for the girl - the main character. The plot is slowly unfolding. Writing Quality: It's great and any mistakes are negligible to me.
I love the world that you created and the story development is really good too. The story intrigued me into wanting more and you know it is a good novel when that happens! More chapters please..
It's amazing book. I would like to suggest the ***** book readers to give this book a chance. The male lead is dominating and possessive and very loving toward female lead and it's a site to see..
The stability of writing is a bit slow.. just curious as what's going on.. this is a very different storyline and not at all able to guess anything..will she escape? What is wang goign to do or his family.. ? So.many likes her though she considers herself as not a beautiful woman!!