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This is a major warning***
This book needs a lot of editing. Once I finish the book, I will start editing. Just a humble request from this author, if the issue is with the grammatical errors please don't remind me, I already know.
****Warning*****
It contains some mature scene.
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There is a saying life gives everyone a second chance.
Everyone wants to know protagonist side of story but ever heard of Antagonist side of story. But the question is...is she really an antagonist.
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he blocked me to his office desk and made me sit on it and he is on top of me.
"I said leave me. what are you trying to do." my heart is thumping so loudly that I could hear it myself. I'm trying to push him but my hands are becoming weak.
Louis holded both of my hands on top of desk. His mouth near my ear I literally could feel his breath " I will never leave you. Mira you have make so possessive so obsessive over you that I can't able to think anything beside you being in my arms ravished and trembling. You are Mine Mira ...... Mine"
God why I'm becoming this weak this time I don't want to do anything with him but this time he is not letting me go........
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My other works
Villainess : Antagonist story (on hold)
Dragon's mate (mating chronicles book 1)
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its a must read, well i love the way this story progressed since i love a rebirth theme story. i love how the male lead was so posessive towards the female lead. they are cute when they get jealous especially the FL's father hahahahahaha (he was being an over protective father towards his baby daughter). anyway it is so much fun to see many handsome quality guy got so attracted by our FL heroine. n lastly I JUST WISH FOR MORE UPDATES FROM OUR DEAREST AUTHOR💓😘
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The story is good. Even if it's somewhat different from my expectations, I still decided that it's even better in this way. I mean that I wanted to beat up the ML at first, but the author finally made me change my mind. I managed to curb such violent tendecies and move towards love and peace, lol. Give it a try. First chapters need some editing, but it's getting better with every chapter. The plot is worthy of reader's love and attention. There're some good twists here and there.
The story is about a second chance to live with some conditions, as the main character goes along she will grow and the people around her seem to grow. She has tasks to complete and as she does she would get perks and once she completa them she gets a wish.
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Dropping it after reading 35 chapters. I tried to read it further but no matter how hard I try I can't... the writing is alright but I don't like the MCs at all. The ml in the first life ignored the fl and fell in love with someone else (thus leading her to become a villain ) but in the next life when the fl tried to keep her distance from him , and by that I mean that she didn't fall at his feet at first sight like in her previous life, he somehow became interested in her and fell in love with her..... so basically what he really wanted was a game of playing hard to get!! And the fl was even more disappointing. Just before comitting suicide she vowed to not fall for him next time but the moment she sees him she forgets all that. I get it that it's hard to forget your love and all that but her attitude still got on my nerves. The feelings between the MCs were not of love but more like infatuation. The only reason that they got together was because the ml saw the fl before meeting his original love interest from his previous life
So far i loved the story.. the grammar and spelling is fine.. it might not be perfect but its good.. kept it up author😊😊😊😊..more updates please.. 🤗🤗🤗🤗
I just want to add a review. a proper, unbiased rating based on my experience. I don't know why webnovel forces people to write reviews which is annoying and a waste of time. But we have nothing to help it anyways.
I like this story. Very much .these is the grt book i ever read. About love romance revenge family love nd proctive nature and mostly true love. I love this book
Overall this story is good. 🥳🥳🥳❤❤❤❤❤❤ Even though there grammer mistakes, i csn still followed thtough. It a well developed plot. Like how the story make turn to the villianess side story with a second chance and hoe the goddess of fate was involved for a short time.
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5 stars for your innovative plot author... Too good... Previous villainess can be the female lead if she gets second chance, and also can be loved by the male lead because it's all about time.. I like your idea of the story being short.. but it's too good... please finish the story...lots of love 🤗❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
The line of the story seem very and is very good but the development of the story in the first chapters is really fast and the description aren't very clear
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Story is very good and I love it but please update at regular intervals plzzz😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 its also the very first story I had started to read in rebirth genera and I really love the story
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The story is lovely and exciting, a good read and a far better page turner in my case... My only problem was how bad the grammar was that it sometimes broke my mind visualization due to me getting bothered as ro how misplaced the words are; but that is just my case. I recommend this book for those who are suckers for a good romance and intrigue, for those who do not mind a number of quite detailed and affecting sex scenes and aren't bothered at all at gramatical errors (which are quite alot in this book, but it is understandable as this is not the authors first language).
Love the story development author . I like the villain . Kinda reminded me from another novel the CEO who hates me . I’m confused this novel only have a little vote . I will give my power stone to this novel author . 🙏🏻🙏🏻😄😄
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All in all its good... And im hooked when i first read it but some of the plots kinda hard to understand but you will know thats it is a great and worth to read...
Have to read this wonderful story,it will light your day with the love..💖...this story will not give your heart a bad feeling but it will make your heart feel in love all the way as long as you in it ( reading).
I really like this story. The only issue that I can think is that at the begins is too fast. The is not a specific reason for the sudden change in behave of the male lead. I read 40 chapter and I like the chimic between the protagonists, but everything is too fast. A second issue is the excessive dominance of the males character for not apparent reason. Anyway the story is cute and I like there is a twist about the original female lead. Overall a good lecture, but need a good editor.
I love second chance stories. Usually it's the person who was wronged who gets reborn and a chance to right the wrongs they suffered and get justice or revenge. This story differs in that it was the villianess who gets the second chance. Liking the story so far. Both leads are likeable and pace of story is good. Looking forward to more!💄💋😗😘😙😚😍❤