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The title should have been "My Slice of Life Adventure on AOT". The story adheres to the cannon that there is only minimal changes. Additionally the MC does not optimize his system even with all the perks and advantages by using it. Its like 5 or 6 chapters only that the system was used by the MC. Was looking forward for the MC to flex a wide variety of skills that he could buy from the system The slice of life genre is good but too use it too much makes the story cringey and looses all the excitemennt
could we get more please not a lot of attack on titan storys this has potential to be great
it's more of a romace genre of AOT. development of the story itself is subpar as author-san focus more on the romantic side of things. kudos for author-san for a quality writing. MC too flawed as he has all this future knowledge but didn't do nothing bout it and he is too yandere.
MC acts like a Chinese cultivation protagonist. Claimed to want to treat Mikasa better than how Eren treated her, but then proceeds to date another female, which then makes the story a 2 girl harem. So yeah, MC gains op powers in AOT, wants to make Mikasas life better, breaks that exact promise by bringing another girl into their relationship, gets into unnecessary problems, couldve saved Eren from going down his Emo phase by saving Erens mother but decides not to (not that I cared). All in all, wasnt for me 🤷♂️
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mc is way too op, so as the typical case with op mc the author needs to make him take retarded/nonsensical decisions so the plot can go on ppl should stop using "systems", no better way to ruin a story
when would be the next update?................................................................................................................
What about the updates? You haven't updated for 4 months and you didn't say anything about dropping or In Hitus. Waited for 4 months how much more. Enjoyed the story and cool MC. Waiting for new chapter, please don't disappoint me.
Good fanfiction Thanks for author to this fanfiction ... .... ... .... ... ... ... .... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... .. .... ..... ..... ..... ..... ......
Pls release more chapters frequently its good the way the mc is not arrogant or conserving his power is a good thing plus the way he tries to keep the canon in good
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O had high hopes for this but sadly it failed me. 😭😭😭😭😭😖😖😖😭😭😖😖😭😖😞😞😩😩😞😖😭😭😞😞😩😩😖😖😭😭😞😞😞😩😩😩😭😭😖😖😞😞😩😩😭😭😖😖😖😭😭😞😞😩😩
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Если бы любовным интересом была только Микаса, я бы поставил нормальную оценку работе, но так как извратам нравится гарем, который по сути переполнил фанфики, оценка будет 1/5.
The title should have been "My Slice of Life Adventure on AOT". The story adheres to the cannon that there is only minimal changes. Additionally the MC does not optimize his system even with all the perks and advantages by using it. Its like 5 or 6 chapters only that the system was used by the MC. Was looking forward for the MC to flex a wide variety of skills that he could buy from the system The slice of life genre is good but too use it too much makes the story cringey and looses all the excitemennt
could we get more please not a lot of attack on titan storys this has potential to be great
it's more of a romace genre of AOT. development of the story itself is subpar as author-san focus more on the romantic side of things. kudos for author-san for a quality writing. MC too flawed as he has all this future knowledge but didn't do nothing bout it and he is too yandere.
MC acts like a Chinese cultivation protagonist. Claimed to want to treat Mikasa better than how Eren treated her, but then proceeds to date another female, which then makes the story a 2 girl harem. So yeah, MC gains op powers in AOT, wants to make Mikasas life better, breaks that exact promise by bringing another girl into their relationship, gets into unnecessary problems, couldve saved Eren from going down his Emo phase by saving Erens mother but decides not to (not that I cared). All in all, wasnt for me 🤷♂️
GoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooöooooooooooooooiooiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiii
mc is way too op, so as the typical case with op mc the author needs to make him take retarded/nonsensical decisions so the plot can go on ppl should stop using "systems", no better way to ruin a story
when would be the next update?................................................................................................................
What about the updates? You haven't updated for 4 months and you didn't say anything about dropping or In Hitus. Waited for 4 months how much more. Enjoyed the story and cool MC. Waiting for new chapter, please don't disappoint me.
Good fanfiction Thanks for author to this fanfiction ... .... ... .... ... ... ... .... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... .. .... ..... ..... ..... ..... ......
Pls release more chapters frequently its good the way the mc is not arrogant or conserving his power is a good thing plus the way he tries to keep the canon in good
Хорошая работа ...........................................................................................................................................................
I need MORRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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O had high hopes for this but sadly it failed me. 😭😭😭😭😭😖😖😖😭😭😖😖😭😖😞😞😩😩😞😖😭😭😞😞😩😩😖😖😭😭😞😞😞😩😩😩😭😭😖😖😞😞😩😩😭😭😖😖😖😭😭😞😞😩😩
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Если бы любовным интересом была только Микаса, я бы поставил нормальную оценку работе, но так как извратам нравится гарем, который по сути переполнил фанфики, оценка будет 1/5.