Reviews of A Dinosaur on Another World by ThatAstralPunk - Webnovel

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August_Weightman

Very good rewrite so far and a different take on the other book so I’m happy with it. Qqqqqqqqqqqqaswassdfdfrdffffgrrgyghjjkjgyiiokjhhjklkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkknjihbmkuyvnkgingujgyhgyhhhgghhhhhhhh

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Async0929

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Logan_18

The story so far is pretty good an exciting to read about what's going to happen in this new world that he is in now but when do you plan on updating a new chapter it'll be a shame if it was dropped

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AZIMONDIAZ

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Aris_Nugraha

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Goodbiscuit666

In my opinion the first version of this was way better. It was actually interesting, whereas this one is just really boring. Even if it wasn't boring I still wouldn't read it because most of the sentences don't make sense. Please go back to the first version.

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GalaxyNekoGoddess

This has potential to be the best.👍🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨, I can't wait for more and to see the development of the mc.

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alesjandritos

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teagueandrew

I'm curious how the story is going to turn out How long are we going to wait?…............……...................................................,....,........,..............................................,.....................................................,.........................

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Elishaba

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Randooom

All your novels are great so far im giving you 5 star but if drop this novel amma rate everything to 1 hope u dont drop this .......................................................................................

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The_Immortal

I love the novel, this will be one of the few novels that I will wait for updates, I hope that you upload more current ones P.S. do not lose your phone (thanks google translator) XD

5yr
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AlmightyNerd

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WolfinsteinLives

Awesome novel really great with everything and great plot writing could be improved but it is still really great with few mistakes. Definitely a must read.😸

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ThatAstralPunk

Imma rate myself five... Im also sometimes shameless... Sometimes... That's all.... Yeah... Why isn't mah Internet working... Why is my notifications full of ping from discord... Why I'm a dumb...

5yr
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Daburus
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My main complaint is the grammar other than that it's a pretty decent story. I also like how this rewrite gives a little background of the world the Mc is reincarnated into. Good work so far author, keep going!

5yr
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TZEN
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Keep up the good work......................................................................................................................

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BoxManRuler

I like this rewrite of the old one........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... By the way shouldn't it be Velociraptor, not Spinosaurus

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So_Aap_Jay

Author should change title to something more eye catching and interesting.............................................................................

5yr
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NaziReader

Well nice novel will support but need more .........................................................................................................................................................................................................

5yr
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TZEN
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Keep up the good work ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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WolfinsteinLives

I am currently marking it as 3 for all, because all of your other novels are really great. So definitely can't wait for this hopefully updated soon looking forward to it.

5yr
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August_Weightman

Very good rewrite so far and a different take on the other book so I’m happy with it. Qqqqqqqqqqqqaswassdfdfrdffffgrrgyghjjkjgyiiokjhhjklkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkknjihbmkuyvnkgingujgyhgyhhhgghhhhhhhh

3yr
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Async0929

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

4yr
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Logan_18

The story so far is pretty good an exciting to read about what's going to happen in this new world that he is in now but when do you plan on updating a new chapter it'll be a shame if it was dropped

4yr
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AZIMONDIAZ

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4yr
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Aris_Nugraha

NEED MOOOORRRREEEEE LA PLEASE DONT DROP THIS NOVEL😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Goodbiscuit666

In my opinion the first version of this was way better. It was actually interesting, whereas this one is just really boring. Even if it wasn't boring I still wouldn't read it because most of the sentences don't make sense. Please go back to the first version.

5yr
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GalaxyNekoGoddess

This has potential to be the best.👍🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨, I can't wait for more and to see the development of the mc.

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alesjandritos

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Delok
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teagueandrew

I'm curious how the story is going to turn out How long are we going to wait?…............……...................................................,....,........,..............................................,.....................................................,.........................

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Elishaba

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Randooom

All your novels are great so far im giving you 5 star but if drop this novel amma rate everything to 1 hope u dont drop this .......................................................................................

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The_Immortal

I love the novel, this will be one of the few novels that I will wait for updates, I hope that you upload more current ones P.S. do not lose your phone (thanks google translator) XD

5yr
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AlmightyNerd

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WolfinsteinLives

Awesome novel really great with everything and great plot writing could be improved but it is still really great with few mistakes. Definitely a must read.😸

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ThatAstralPunk

Imma rate myself five... Im also sometimes shameless... Sometimes... That's all.... Yeah... Why isn't mah Internet working... Why is my notifications full of ping from discord... Why I'm a dumb...

5yr
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Daburus
LV 14 Badge

My main complaint is the grammar other than that it's a pretty decent story. I also like how this rewrite gives a little background of the world the Mc is reincarnated into. Good work so far author, keep going!

5yr
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TZEN
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Keep up the good work......................................................................................................................

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BoxManRuler

I like this rewrite of the old one........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... By the way shouldn't it be Velociraptor, not Spinosaurus

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So_Aap_Jay

Author should change title to something more eye catching and interesting.............................................................................

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NaziReader

Well nice novel will support but need more .........................................................................................................................................................................................................

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TZEN
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Keep up the good work ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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WolfinsteinLives

I am currently marking it as 3 for all, because all of your other novels are really great. So definitely can't wait for this hopefully updated soon looking forward to it.

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