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I'm so very sorry about the late review... I asked you for a review swap last September but something bad happened so I completely forgot to write your reviews as well as update my work(Seriously) Moving on, I only read about 10 chapters, I hope, you dont mind me reading just 10 chapters... Well, the narrative are actually quite detailed resulting for a vivid description of what feeling you have at their world but downside is... You don't let the readers think about what's happening, constantly feeding them with information well... Anyways, overall, the characters are all written with impact and from what I can see, this is already a finished work so the updating should be stars... Best of luck to you, mate
Interesting Book. Well done Author The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . The plot development is awesome , can't wait for the upcoming chapters. And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Impressive approach. Descriptively tailored background set up and historical events with details. Good command over the grammars (except for the typos). Characters sketched out and introduced well interlinking relationships making it clear as a day for the readers. Well thought out concept. Nice work! I'm honestly invested into your work. Good luck! ❤
I went ahead and read 7 chapters, and my opinion is as follows- At first, this seems to be a general education/history/social studies lesson couched in a storyline format. Very informative, well engaged, very descriptive. The lack of dialogue is unique and caught my interest ( at the beginning, lol !) After getting further into the novel, the talented weaving of fact and fiction makes this an immersive and captivating read. I saw in a previous review that you're a published author, and it shows! I quite enjoyed your book so far, and look forward to reading more of it. The realistic aspects of the book make you feel like you're watching the story unfold, while the fantasy captures the imagination. 5 stars!
I love, love, love the fact that the author decided to add our Indian history to this novel. It is always exciting and intriguing to see our culture. And I'm really happy with the fact that the author decided to research and include correct facts rather than winging it. As far as the storyline, I must say that it is unique and interesting. As for the writing, maybe the author should proofread it before uploading as there are quite a few mistakes here and there but nothing too serious. but apart from that, the flow of the story is good and I'm really hooked. I hope the author will update soon. Thank you for your hard work!!!
Vey interesting story, the character and world building development is great, the writing quality is great just have a little typos but other than that it's great. Great novel give it a try you'll love it.
The idea of the story is pretty interesting, although it's not the usual genre I go into. The writing seems well-done no noticable mistakes if any. It's clear the author has done her research on both Russia and India, the description of the culture, terms, and structures being my personal favorite parts of the story so far. Overall a strong 4 stars.
The historical description is well researched, even the weather, or book authors cited with lists. This may be off putting to some considering that most reader want the first three chapters as engaging as possible. But this maybe the author's narrative style, even the use of words, and flow of sentences. But as you go along, the conflict is slowly revealed from among the characters, with lots of dialogue and this may be intentional to keep reader glued. Nice book. Keep it up!
Really nice story and realistic one. The information in this story is amazing. Life related stories are really rare. Need more of this. Keep up the work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice story and the plot is attractive. I have been reading only fantasy, action and other genres since I joined webnovel. This is my first one that is based on real life stories. I really loved it and keep up the work, dear author.
From the first chapter, I can tell this story is excellent! I learn a lot of knowledge just by reading one chapter. I'll come back after this book is finished. So far, so good. excellent work
A unique story with many intriguing elements. The most beautiful thing about this story is that the Author has not gone for the cliches that one would expect. Seeing the well thought out familial elements, and the well done historical integration, was a breath of fresh air. The writing is of high quality, almost with no mistakes, the flow of the story is smooth and it is an immersive experience. The characters were well balanced, and they can easily be imagined. The facts along with the plot brought the outline of the world and created an interesting path for the novel to take. Well done, Author, and all the best.
Just came across this immersive novel. Really interesting concept. As an Indian, I'm really happy to see Indian culture is being depicted. Great job Author. Your characters has soul and world building is great. Really felt bad for Tania... her relatives too, fools really... when her parents are alive they ignored now what's the use to regret... but guess that's life! Your grammar and paragraph flow is good. Will read further chapters. Keep up the great work n continue with ur research! [img=update] [img=recommend]
Kudos to author! It is really interesting story. The fantacy reaching to reality..👏👏 The synopsis itself was intrigued that you feel like reading it once. Your story telling is so beautiful author, you want to read more and more. I love it female lead is really strong in stories, who can take decisions by herself...I really liked your book...👍👍👍Grammar okay I could not find much error.
The story is quite intriguing and the author is very diligent and purposeful in her background information and world building. This is not a cookie cutter cliché story but something very unique to this author. The introduction of indian honorifics was pretty interesting. Some of the facts about indian and russian culture were also fun.
Hi Author, I loved how the characters, their back stories and sights were magnificently described. It perfectly builds up the story. I have read chapter one as an introduction and kept me wanting to know more about Tania, her dreams, her family and the places mentioned in the story as I am fascinated in travelling myself but can't seem to have enough time and budget to do it. Thank you for fuelling my imagination. It's like you're taking me to these places. Plus, this showcase how amazingly observant you are to bring a piece of reality and an over-all homey vibe into this. As a reader, I don't really pay attention to grammar as long as I feel that the story getting into me... But based on how the over-all structure was laid out, it's very good to read. I will soon give another feedback once I finish reading the other chapters. Cheers to you author! All the best. ❤️👍👍
Hello Ma'am...the story, characters and writing are awesome.😊 There is an Indian vibe in the story that struck the chords of my heart.💖💖 Your writing is pretty standard and not casual or written haphazardly. At some parts it is relatable for me and I felt a dezavu.. I have not completed the book yet. But until where I read I am totally hooked... Though I am a novice🤦 at writing... I am an avid reader. I believe that this book should be made available on a platform where the range of audience's age is wide.... So conclusion is that I love the book and hope to read it completely....
I love prologue, explained every character in detail.. The two cultures had blended perfectly, I have not completed reading all the chapters but as far as I read, it was very written and hooke me up it's shows how organized your thoughts about dear author.. all the best
I love how I'm actually learning while reading this story, meaning learning more about India and I really appreciate that. The only problem I really have is at the very beginning of the story I got a whole textbook thrown at my face and tbh I almost dropped the story but I kept reading it because the synopsis and the introduction had me hooked. Keep it up author👍
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I really appreciate the effort the author went into to give accurate information, which definitely shows the amount of dedication that went into the novel! The whole concept of the story is also very interesting and original, so that draws the reader in. However, the writing would sometimes get a little dense with all of the information, and I would recommend interspersing giving background with current actions, thoughts, and dialogue of the characters, as that makes it more engaging. Great work overall!
Learning about the Indian culture from a narrative story is trully fascinating. Since in the first place, world history thoroughly sparks my interest... and somewhat I could relate myself with the MC because of that. The world background is overwhelming and the story is well-written. I don't see that much mistakes. But since it's supposed to be a novel, it would be better not to dump manifold informations about the said memoir and instead, insert them in various chapters as it goes on. It will really thrill readers to binge more. Although, I didn't seem to have any problem of all those since I usually spend amount of my time reading historical related books... which was way hard to understand than any of the works I read like yours. I will read more of this story and put my heart into it. Thanks for the daily usage! I'll support this book no matter what.
I’ve haven’t read whole story, but already I’m pulled in. It’s like history, religion, and fantasy mixed together. The world background is packed full with reality, which I find very intriguing. The pace may be a bit slow for my taste, but if you have to place so much history into a chapter like the author did, I think the author did an excellent job at achieving that. Keep up the good work author !
Informative. It's my first time reading something like this. It's a fresh novel out of most of the novels on this platform. Simple English, and very comprehensible. The only thing I found that needs improvement is your tense changes, there were parts where you used past and present continuous on a single sentence and it kind of threw me off a little bit since I'm an English teacher. In any case, it might've been a typo and I'm not entirely particular with it. I just pointed it out for improvement since I'm also improving in that area of writing. Let's both do our best! All in all, a very good story! I like how you foreshadowed the dream and then built from there. It makes me want to read more so I'll finish this book before reviewing the others. Keep it up, author! Your book is awesome ^ ^
I am not a big fan of grammar, but this book mesmerised me to an extent that I really enjoyed it. The plot and story line is interesting. Keep up the good work author!
I don't think I'm qualified enough to review your book, ma'am. You're a published author while I'm just a student 😅 (Congratulations though!) As everyone else has already told you, Your writing style is really good. The chapters are thorough and well detailed. I'm an Indian so some aspects of the story felt relatable. You haven't missed out in providing the necessary details about the characters either. World background has been expanded well too. For the readers- READ IT. That's all ma'am. Have a good day 🙂
This is a very interesting novel. The kind of which is rare on this platform. This is the kind of narrative that cares about the intrinsic details of the content. Medical terms, geographical terms, and other facts give us the about research that went behind each chapter. The pacing of the story is good, along with the detailed backgrounds of the characters. And the delivery of the dialogues also blends well with the story. I no qualms about the writing quality since I couldn't find any errors. It's a great read and engages the readers. I would advise the author to shorten the paragraphs, to max 4 sentences per para. After 3 or 4 sentences many readers generally switch to the next one. (Just an advice but if you want to stick to your own way, that works too!) The setting of the story is good, and I think that author has done a very good job in presenting the concept of past-life and memories of the past. Very enjoyable work will keep going to find how the story unfolds. Good luck to author
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
I love the story line! The depth and detail really are quite intriguing. I’m new to this whole fiction world but so far I am amazingly surprised at how into the character I am while reading. I am so gonna recommend this to all my friends and family it is so amazing. Good Work.
Sorry readers. I have been offline for quite a while as I was not able to handle late working hours and my writing together. Now, there is no job and I would like to complete this Book by the end of July 2022 at the earliers by posting 1 or 2 chapters in a week.
I'm so very sorry about the late review... I asked you for a review swap last September but something bad happened so I completely forgot to write your reviews as well as update my work(Seriously) Moving on, I only read about 10 chapters, I hope, you dont mind me reading just 10 chapters... Well, the narrative are actually quite detailed resulting for a vivid description of what feeling you have at their world but downside is... You don't let the readers think about what's happening, constantly feeding them with information well... Anyways, overall, the characters are all written with impact and from what I can see, this is already a finished work so the updating should be stars... Best of luck to you, mate
Interesting Book. Well done Author The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . The plot development is awesome , can't wait for the upcoming chapters. And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Impressive approach. Descriptively tailored background set up and historical events with details. Good command over the grammars (except for the typos). Characters sketched out and introduced well interlinking relationships making it clear as a day for the readers. Well thought out concept. Nice work! I'm honestly invested into your work. Good luck! ❤
I went ahead and read 7 chapters, and my opinion is as follows- At first, this seems to be a general education/history/social studies lesson couched in a storyline format. Very informative, well engaged, very descriptive. The lack of dialogue is unique and caught my interest ( at the beginning, lol !) After getting further into the novel, the talented weaving of fact and fiction makes this an immersive and captivating read. I saw in a previous review that you're a published author, and it shows! I quite enjoyed your book so far, and look forward to reading more of it. The realistic aspects of the book make you feel like you're watching the story unfold, while the fantasy captures the imagination. 5 stars!
I love, love, love the fact that the author decided to add our Indian history to this novel. It is always exciting and intriguing to see our culture. And I'm really happy with the fact that the author decided to research and include correct facts rather than winging it. As far as the storyline, I must say that it is unique and interesting. As for the writing, maybe the author should proofread it before uploading as there are quite a few mistakes here and there but nothing too serious. but apart from that, the flow of the story is good and I'm really hooked. I hope the author will update soon. Thank you for your hard work!!!
Vey interesting story, the character and world building development is great, the writing quality is great just have a little typos but other than that it's great. Great novel give it a try you'll love it.
The idea of the story is pretty interesting, although it's not the usual genre I go into. The writing seems well-done no noticable mistakes if any. It's clear the author has done her research on both Russia and India, the description of the culture, terms, and structures being my personal favorite parts of the story so far. Overall a strong 4 stars.
The historical description is well researched, even the weather, or book authors cited with lists. This may be off putting to some considering that most reader want the first three chapters as engaging as possible. But this maybe the author's narrative style, even the use of words, and flow of sentences. But as you go along, the conflict is slowly revealed from among the characters, with lots of dialogue and this may be intentional to keep reader glued. Nice book. Keep it up!
Really nice story and realistic one. The information in this story is amazing. Life related stories are really rare. Need more of this. Keep up the work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice story and the plot is attractive. I have been reading only fantasy, action and other genres since I joined webnovel. This is my first one that is based on real life stories. I really loved it and keep up the work, dear author.
From the first chapter, I can tell this story is excellent! I learn a lot of knowledge just by reading one chapter. I'll come back after this book is finished. So far, so good. excellent work
A unique story with many intriguing elements. The most beautiful thing about this story is that the Author has not gone for the cliches that one would expect. Seeing the well thought out familial elements, and the well done historical integration, was a breath of fresh air. The writing is of high quality, almost with no mistakes, the flow of the story is smooth and it is an immersive experience. The characters were well balanced, and they can easily be imagined. The facts along with the plot brought the outline of the world and created an interesting path for the novel to take. Well done, Author, and all the best.
Just came across this immersive novel. Really interesting concept. As an Indian, I'm really happy to see Indian culture is being depicted. Great job Author. Your characters has soul and world building is great. Really felt bad for Tania... her relatives too, fools really... when her parents are alive they ignored now what's the use to regret... but guess that's life! Your grammar and paragraph flow is good. Will read further chapters. Keep up the great work n continue with ur research! [img=update] [img=recommend]
Kudos to author! It is really interesting story. The fantacy reaching to reality..👏👏 The synopsis itself was intrigued that you feel like reading it once. Your story telling is so beautiful author, you want to read more and more. I love it female lead is really strong in stories, who can take decisions by herself...I really liked your book...👍👍👍Grammar okay I could not find much error.
The story is quite intriguing and the author is very diligent and purposeful in her background information and world building. This is not a cookie cutter cliché story but something very unique to this author. The introduction of indian honorifics was pretty interesting. Some of the facts about indian and russian culture were also fun.
Hi Author, I loved how the characters, their back stories and sights were magnificently described. It perfectly builds up the story. I have read chapter one as an introduction and kept me wanting to know more about Tania, her dreams, her family and the places mentioned in the story as I am fascinated in travelling myself but can't seem to have enough time and budget to do it. Thank you for fuelling my imagination. It's like you're taking me to these places. Plus, this showcase how amazingly observant you are to bring a piece of reality and an over-all homey vibe into this. As a reader, I don't really pay attention to grammar as long as I feel that the story getting into me... But based on how the over-all structure was laid out, it's very good to read. I will soon give another feedback once I finish reading the other chapters. Cheers to you author! All the best. ❤️👍👍
Hello Ma'am...the story, characters and writing are awesome.😊 There is an Indian vibe in the story that struck the chords of my heart.💖💖 Your writing is pretty standard and not casual or written haphazardly. At some parts it is relatable for me and I felt a dezavu.. I have not completed the book yet. But until where I read I am totally hooked... Though I am a novice🤦 at writing... I am an avid reader. I believe that this book should be made available on a platform where the range of audience's age is wide.... So conclusion is that I love the book and hope to read it completely....
I love prologue, explained every character in detail.. The two cultures had blended perfectly, I have not completed reading all the chapters but as far as I read, it was very written and hooke me up it's shows how organized your thoughts about dear author.. all the best
I love how I'm actually learning while reading this story, meaning learning more about India and I really appreciate that. The only problem I really have is at the very beginning of the story I got a whole textbook thrown at my face and tbh I almost dropped the story but I kept reading it because the synopsis and the introduction had me hooked. Keep it up author👍
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I really appreciate the effort the author went into to give accurate information, which definitely shows the amount of dedication that went into the novel! The whole concept of the story is also very interesting and original, so that draws the reader in. However, the writing would sometimes get a little dense with all of the information, and I would recommend interspersing giving background with current actions, thoughts, and dialogue of the characters, as that makes it more engaging. Great work overall!
Learning about the Indian culture from a narrative story is trully fascinating. Since in the first place, world history thoroughly sparks my interest... and somewhat I could relate myself with the MC because of that. The world background is overwhelming and the story is well-written. I don't see that much mistakes. But since it's supposed to be a novel, it would be better not to dump manifold informations about the said memoir and instead, insert them in various chapters as it goes on. It will really thrill readers to binge more. Although, I didn't seem to have any problem of all those since I usually spend amount of my time reading historical related books... which was way hard to understand than any of the works I read like yours. I will read more of this story and put my heart into it. Thanks for the daily usage! I'll support this book no matter what.
I’ve haven’t read whole story, but already I’m pulled in. It’s like history, religion, and fantasy mixed together. The world background is packed full with reality, which I find very intriguing. The pace may be a bit slow for my taste, but if you have to place so much history into a chapter like the author did, I think the author did an excellent job at achieving that. Keep up the good work author !
Informative. It's my first time reading something like this. It's a fresh novel out of most of the novels on this platform. Simple English, and very comprehensible. The only thing I found that needs improvement is your tense changes, there were parts where you used past and present continuous on a single sentence and it kind of threw me off a little bit since I'm an English teacher. In any case, it might've been a typo and I'm not entirely particular with it. I just pointed it out for improvement since I'm also improving in that area of writing. Let's both do our best! All in all, a very good story! I like how you foreshadowed the dream and then built from there. It makes me want to read more so I'll finish this book before reviewing the others. Keep it up, author! Your book is awesome ^ ^
I am not a big fan of grammar, but this book mesmerised me to an extent that I really enjoyed it. The plot and story line is interesting. Keep up the good work author!
I don't think I'm qualified enough to review your book, ma'am. You're a published author while I'm just a student 😅 (Congratulations though!) As everyone else has already told you, Your writing style is really good. The chapters are thorough and well detailed. I'm an Indian so some aspects of the story felt relatable. You haven't missed out in providing the necessary details about the characters either. World background has been expanded well too. For the readers- READ IT. That's all ma'am. Have a good day 🙂
This is a very interesting novel. The kind of which is rare on this platform. This is the kind of narrative that cares about the intrinsic details of the content. Medical terms, geographical terms, and other facts give us the about research that went behind each chapter. The pacing of the story is good, along with the detailed backgrounds of the characters. And the delivery of the dialogues also blends well with the story. I no qualms about the writing quality since I couldn't find any errors. It's a great read and engages the readers. I would advise the author to shorten the paragraphs, to max 4 sentences per para. After 3 or 4 sentences many readers generally switch to the next one. (Just an advice but if you want to stick to your own way, that works too!) The setting of the story is good, and I think that author has done a very good job in presenting the concept of past-life and memories of the past. Very enjoyable work will keep going to find how the story unfolds. Good luck to author
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
I love the story line! The depth and detail really are quite intriguing. I’m new to this whole fiction world but so far I am amazingly surprised at how into the character I am while reading. I am so gonna recommend this to all my friends and family it is so amazing. Good Work.
Sorry readers. I have been offline for quite a while as I was not able to handle late working hours and my writing together. Now, there is no job and I would like to complete this Book by the end of July 2022 at the earliers by posting 1 or 2 chapters in a week.