章 2: Chapter 1
I was freaking out As I walked through time and space It was evil literally evil
"Don't open your eyes don't open your eyes" I repeated as I ran forward with my eyes forward instinctively moving to the left as white lightning struck the right. For those of you who are afraid of heights or lightning storms the feeling is similar to that, as I looked the sound finally stopped of thunder finally stopped and Kira's voice boomed inside my head
[destination reached welcome to the Naruto world...the forest of death]
I open my eyes and sighed
"That was quite the horrifying experience" I muttered
I started to glance around the Naruto world huh? cool
I saw a water puddle glanced at my reflection and almost screamed I had to take a deep breath
Kira I said my voice dangerously calm
[Yes host?] she sounded like she was fighting back a laugh
[Why am I 8 years old I couldof sworn I was 19]
Due to the world overflowing with chakra it must of reacted with your body causing you to look younger but if I must say you look very cute] she teased
I blushed "shut up" I grumbled causing her to laugh
"well I guess I should start My ki training Now." I said as mental image of gohan teaching videl flashed through my head.
I sat down in meditative position closed my eyes and started to search for my ki it took me a while but in a couple of hours I managed to find it. wind started to pick up as a white aura Surrounded me before it vanished. Alright,. I muttered Now the real training Begans Now
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Ten years, I trained My ass off for ten years The system keeping tabs on my growth
I managed to imitate some attacks from other anime and cartoon shows
like the shrouken from street fighter or fire punch from pokemon
I mastered most of the dragon ball attacks I memorized as a kid from heart I even made my own version of the kiao ken but I only Mastered the level up to five. You know I hated training because I always ended up sore, but When you have the system it makes it look a lot easier.
Kira compared me to the system to be as strong as goku when he fought captain ginyu I grinned in pride all that training paid off of course I had to buy weghts to help with my training.
I was now five feet six and wearing goku's turtle hermit gi with a ninja katana from dragon ball z My muscles were as hard as marble, a solid 8 pack Now I was ready to walk towards Kanoha
"Kira? can I buy a map?" [As you wish~ Jake-Sama~] I sighed in annoyance as a map of the elemental nations appeared in my hands
yep my name is Jake.. Jake Saunders
I kept trying to tell the system to call me by my name but she either calls me master jake or jake sama its pretty annoying, Sometimes I feel like she does that on purpose.
2 minutes of ki enhanced run I managed I stopped as I got close to the gate 'So this is kanoha... Interesting'
"Stop who are you and what business do you have with kanoha? "one of the t gaurds spoke as he narrowed his eyes
"I would like to speak with the hokage" I said with no emotion
"What possibly do you think we would allow you in this village" his partner what was his name? ko something.
I have something. that is beneficial for kanoha. "I replied back
and what is that gaurd 2 asked me narrowing his eyes
"That is a matter only to be discussed with the hokage."
the to looked at each other Guard 1 gave signified a nod. "Very well"
but if you try anything- he was interrupted when a surge of demonic energy a huge Nine tailed fox demon appeared
"Shit its the kyuubi"they mutteredasthey got up
My eyes widen 'so its that time period' I thought silently
"Sure stay here the- they blinked in surprised when they saw me fly in the air using My varient of kioken
'Minato kushina, naruto hang on I'm coming'
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