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I have to say that I was confused while reading early chapters, because I have to adjust with the genre. This is not some classic romance between the rich people that always tangled in business matter and revenge. Later on, I learned about self healing while reading it. Also self acceptance and self realization. I love the story, and love the pace, it's perfect.
The main character is a complex mix of strength and weaknesses that make her very endearing. She isn’t a saint and doesn’r pretend she is. She also isn’t a helpless little bystander either. There are some fantasy elements thrown in for a nice twist. All the characters are very vivid and like-able. The pacing of the story is excellent and compelling. The romance between the fl and ml is believable and heart warming. It’s the story I can’t wait for updates for.
this story is so good chu! is very very funny chu ! I really like it chu! churu chu churu chu churu chu !!
Another awesome story of Bajj that you'll never regret in adding in your library.
I am greatly impressed by this novel..... I don't feel like putting down until I finished .... that's y am rating it 5 star everything is perfect ..... totally refreshing ...feel like reality ....just go for it.....
I‘m on chapter 161 and I need to get something off my chest. To start, I do enjoy the storyline. I’ve read system stories and rebirth stories, but I love how this one isn’t a rewind in time rebirth; she has to face the consequences of her actions and she doesn’t know the “future”. I like the story so far. On to my main criticism; words mean things. Throwing a thesaurus at a sentence doesn’t help. The words utter, mutter, spat, perch, granting, and alas have all been misused SO many times it drives me insane. All of these words seem like stand ins for basic words like sit, of course, say and but at first glance. Unfortunately, they aren’t easy swaps. Feelings are attached, and when the feeling of the context doesn’t match, it disrupts the reading flow and just screams thesaurus. There’s nothing wrong with using basic words like say. If you feel like it’s too repetitive, consider not clarifying who is speaking. Or just use said! I really hope that the word choice gets better. I understand if English isn’t author’s first language, I just really feel like saying the basic words would have been just fine. There was no need to use fancy words to keep the text interesting; the story line is interesting enough! Regardless, thank you author :)
I love churu. and Tora. and Morris. Ethan too. There's crazy(literally) uncles and cousins and Mafia who do their best to bring the lovely characters down. There's a crazy girl who thinks every other girl is seducing her love interests. Her name is ..Stella du i think. Gosh! She should be named 'seduce du' cuz she just loves that word and every conversation with her ends with someone being accused of seducing some xyz person😅😂. I love the story behind the system a lot💖 Storyline is as engaging as I expected. Definitely recommend for people who love a sunshine ml and a cold on the outside, warm on the inside fl.
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This story was very enjoyable, entertaining and has such a great cast of characters! The idea is fresh and different. I loved every part of it! The FL and ML habe a lot of depth of character and are compelling in everything they do. I cannot wait for more!❤️ I will continue reading the back catalog of this author. This book will not disappoint🥰🥰
I love it, so in loveeee with this book, keep up the good work author!!! Hope to see moree works in the future👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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The Dumpling and all the Chu make it un-readable. It so annoying idk why someone would do that. Its weird, doesnt mean anything, and so repetitive like half the word are Chu stuff......... disapointed
really great novel couldn't put it down. Fl went through a lot and still overcame her troubles. It's a must read for anybody who like a s fl who doesn't give up
This story has too much trusts issues between friends, lovers, & family that’s what I conclude when I read it. Did I finish the story? Actually….it started to disappointed me when the chapter reaches 30+ chapters away from ending or when the FL & ML argued for a petty reason due to FL immaturity. The story suddenly turned 180 degree that I felt it was too rush or something. I would just think that the characters are not perfect because in real life there is no perfect even you are rich. haha FL - is spoiled that’s why her character is like that, if she wants something she’ll try to get it no matter what. she has strong & weaknesses not the typical FL that cold hearted, revenge type of person. ML - he was potrayed as a player that sleeps around but when you read his story he actually only slept with one person his first ex gf then after he just hang around with different girls but not slept around this is one of the things that the author didnt clarify earlier or something Ex bf - typical CEO cold hearted, secretly in love that will protect you while you don’t know but doesn’t trust the FL that lead for them to break up. I won’t say more but just read it. haha i like it that i don’t.
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W a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a h h h h h h h. Worth reading. 💕💕💕.
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it's a good novel....but the only thing that i dislike here is ml for being a playboy and for sleeping with countles woman...it's still good if both ml and fl has chastity sorry am not good in english :>
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iam speechless, this story is PERFECT, AMAZING, EVERYONE MUST READ THIS!!!! HOW ARE YOU SO TALENTED AUTHOR 😭😍 its so refreshing, unique, lovely, funny, I have a lot to say but it's hard to say... each chapter is important, never boring. the plot, the development, the character is 💯💯💯 i love lexi, i love ethan, i love churu, even i love morris, and everyone except the bad guy aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa team lexi ethan forever ,they deserve each other, i need more of their story, its not enough 😭😭😭😭😭 i need side story of mochu 😭😭😭😭😭
No matter how many books i read, I will always come back to this book again and re-read it over and over again, how can you make such a beatiful story😭 i really miss my ethan and lexi now😭 i wish u will give us bonus chapter again🙏🏻😩😭
Sorry spoiler kinda not really Can someone tell me where Morris finds out Ethan likes Lexi?? I forgot!!! 😭😭 i need to know what chapter!! Plz!!
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I love the story. The Writing Quality is good, The story was developed nicely, it had a very unique characters, and everything flows nicely.
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I have completed 180 chapters but I am very conflicted with this novel. There are parts which I absolutely loved and also there are some which makes me unable to continue anymore. This novel unlike other novels doesn't give second chance where the lead is reborn at a time before the things go downhill and correct everything. Here, the FL had to deal with the consequences and redeem herself. It also shows the progress and the struggle to move on from heart-break. I really appreciate the author for showing that it is not easy to get rid of your feelings like a switch which unfortunately a lot other novel potrays. I really liked when the FL starts self-reflecting and tries to forgive others as well as herself. But regarding the ML or the progress of the couple disappointed me. First of all ML's entry felt a little forced to me due to the task assigned my the system and it's constant interference. There was no mystery regarding ML's feeling as the system kept informing the FL and it felt like no matter what she has to fell in love with him. Also the time frame in which the feelings progressed from friendship to love and FL starting to accept him was too short. Till here I was still able to accept as other novels of similar genre also depicts system catalysts the ML and FL union. I was also happy that here the 'playboy-turns-good guy' is shown as ML and not just as a secondary character. But as the story progresses I started doubting whether he was suitable for FL. My reasons for it was that the story reveals that ex was doing everything to protect the FL. Still I was fine with the ex not getting the girl even though he loved her bcuz he pushed her to suicide instead of trusting her and explain to her the reason he can't be together. My issue is actually with ML. Apart from honesty and open communication ( unlike ex) I couldn't find anything good about him. In case of ex it's shown that even though he loved the FL he took wrong decisions but at the same time he was ready to bear the consequences of his decisions. When he found out that she is moving on with someone else he didn't tries force her to get back but rather wants her to be happy. I found him stupid but not a jerk and he also paid huge price for it by losing the FL. But in case of ML, till now I could not find depth to his character or any struggle. He is as rich as ex though it is hinting that there are family issues with ML but ex also have issues as well, so nothing new. Secondly, when ML wanted a carefree life he just left the family business and enjoyed a casanova life and when he wanted to get back he started claiming his rights. I also didn't find him a good friend as he was not aware what his friend (ex) was going through. He was shown as friend to FL but he didn't do anything exceptional before he became a suitor as the FL already had churu as a support and the system was forcing the relationship. I didn't find him completely true to FL lead as well. There was no arc showing his change of dynamic with his friend bcuz of the FL. After knowing the struggle of FL lead he was angry at his friend (ex) but that anger didn't last long. If the anger was reduced bcuz of knowing his friends's(ex) story then it can be justified but here this was not revealed yet and he still went back to normal. I felt ML got everything easily as compared to other characters. Also there was no great character-development for him till now. Its the first story where I wanted a redemption arc for ex and for him to end up with the FL. Bcuz they were childhood sweetheart and none of them actually cheated on each other. They were forced by circumstances and they did whatever they felt would be right at that point. I personally don't like any pairing where the guy is allowed to have multiple relationship but the girl is kept pure/innocent which is the case with ML.
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This story is refreshing. You know what i mean. I literaly is in love with ml. There is no rape, tyrant, egoistical characteristic in ml and that is gem my dear. This is worth my time and ss. I just read it yesterday and i just cant stop until today and here i am have reach the latest chapter and grinning like an idiot and a bit dissapoint because i want more. So to the new reader or someone reading this, i wanna say that you are in the right path. Author, thank you for your time and effort. I really really love plus adore this book 💓
I have to say that I was confused while reading early chapters, because I have to adjust with the genre. This is not some classic romance between the rich people that always tangled in business matter and revenge. Later on, I learned about self healing while reading it. Also self acceptance and self realization. I love the story, and love the pace, it's perfect.
The main character is a complex mix of strength and weaknesses that make her very endearing. She isn’t a saint and doesn’r pretend she is. She also isn’t a helpless little bystander either. There are some fantasy elements thrown in for a nice twist. All the characters are very vivid and like-able. The pacing of the story is excellent and compelling. The romance between the fl and ml is believable and heart warming. It’s the story I can’t wait for updates for.
this story is so good chu! is very very funny chu ! I really like it chu! churu chu churu chu churu chu !!
Another awesome story of Bajj that you'll never regret in adding in your library.
I am greatly impressed by this novel..... I don't feel like putting down until I finished .... that's y am rating it 5 star everything is perfect ..... totally refreshing ...feel like reality ....just go for it.....
I‘m on chapter 161 and I need to get something off my chest. To start, I do enjoy the storyline. I’ve read system stories and rebirth stories, but I love how this one isn’t a rewind in time rebirth; she has to face the consequences of her actions and she doesn’t know the “future”. I like the story so far. On to my main criticism; words mean things. Throwing a thesaurus at a sentence doesn’t help. The words utter, mutter, spat, perch, granting, and alas have all been misused SO many times it drives me insane. All of these words seem like stand ins for basic words like sit, of course, say and but at first glance. Unfortunately, they aren’t easy swaps. Feelings are attached, and when the feeling of the context doesn’t match, it disrupts the reading flow and just screams thesaurus. There’s nothing wrong with using basic words like say. If you feel like it’s too repetitive, consider not clarifying who is speaking. Or just use said! I really hope that the word choice gets better. I understand if English isn’t author’s first language, I just really feel like saying the basic words would have been just fine. There was no need to use fancy words to keep the text interesting; the story line is interesting enough! Regardless, thank you author :)
I love churu. and Tora. and Morris. Ethan too. There's crazy(literally) uncles and cousins and Mafia who do their best to bring the lovely characters down. There's a crazy girl who thinks every other girl is seducing her love interests. Her name is ..Stella du i think. Gosh! She should be named 'seduce du' cuz she just loves that word and every conversation with her ends with someone being accused of seducing some xyz person😅😂. I love the story behind the system a lot💖 Storyline is as engaging as I expected. Definitely recommend for people who love a sunshine ml and a cold on the outside, warm on the inside fl.
ネタバレを明かす I was ignoring this novel for quite some time i don't know why. I've read few chapters so far so good . Now i am liking this novel.[img=update]
This story was very enjoyable, entertaining and has such a great cast of characters! The idea is fresh and different. I loved every part of it! The FL and ML habe a lot of depth of character and are compelling in everything they do. I cannot wait for more!❤️ I will continue reading the back catalog of this author. This book will not disappoint🥰🥰
I love it, so in loveeee with this book, keep up the good work author!!! Hope to see moree works in the future👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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The Dumpling and all the Chu make it un-readable. It so annoying idk why someone would do that. Its weird, doesnt mean anything, and so repetitive like half the word are Chu stuff......... disapointed
really great novel couldn't put it down. Fl went through a lot and still overcame her troubles. It's a must read for anybody who like a s fl who doesn't give up
This story has too much trusts issues between friends, lovers, & family that’s what I conclude when I read it. Did I finish the story? Actually….it started to disappointed me when the chapter reaches 30+ chapters away from ending or when the FL & ML argued for a petty reason due to FL immaturity. The story suddenly turned 180 degree that I felt it was too rush or something. I would just think that the characters are not perfect because in real life there is no perfect even you are rich. haha FL - is spoiled that’s why her character is like that, if she wants something she’ll try to get it no matter what. she has strong & weaknesses not the typical FL that cold hearted, revenge type of person. ML - he was potrayed as a player that sleeps around but when you read his story he actually only slept with one person his first ex gf then after he just hang around with different girls but not slept around this is one of the things that the author didnt clarify earlier or something Ex bf - typical CEO cold hearted, secretly in love that will protect you while you don’t know but doesn’t trust the FL that lead for them to break up. I won’t say more but just read it. haha i like it that i don’t.
ネタバレを明かす W a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a h h h h h h h. Worth reading. 💕💕💕.
ネタバレを明かす it's a good novel....but the only thing that i dislike here is ml for being a playboy and for sleeping with countles woman...it's still good if both ml and fl has chastity sorry am not good in english :>
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iam speechless, this story is PERFECT, AMAZING, EVERYONE MUST READ THIS!!!! HOW ARE YOU SO TALENTED AUTHOR 😭😍 its so refreshing, unique, lovely, funny, I have a lot to say but it's hard to say... each chapter is important, never boring. the plot, the development, the character is 💯💯💯 i love lexi, i love ethan, i love churu, even i love morris, and everyone except the bad guy aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa team lexi ethan forever ,they deserve each other, i need more of their story, its not enough 😭😭😭😭😭 i need side story of mochu 😭😭😭😭😭
No matter how many books i read, I will always come back to this book again and re-read it over and over again, how can you make such a beatiful story😭 i really miss my ethan and lexi now😭 i wish u will give us bonus chapter again🙏🏻😩😭
Sorry spoiler kinda not really Can someone tell me where Morris finds out Ethan likes Lexi?? I forgot!!! 😭😭 i need to know what chapter!! Plz!!
ネタバレを明かす I love the story. The Writing Quality is good, The story was developed nicely, it had a very unique characters, and everything flows nicely.
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I have completed 180 chapters but I am very conflicted with this novel. There are parts which I absolutely loved and also there are some which makes me unable to continue anymore. This novel unlike other novels doesn't give second chance where the lead is reborn at a time before the things go downhill and correct everything. Here, the FL had to deal with the consequences and redeem herself. It also shows the progress and the struggle to move on from heart-break. I really appreciate the author for showing that it is not easy to get rid of your feelings like a switch which unfortunately a lot other novel potrays. I really liked when the FL starts self-reflecting and tries to forgive others as well as herself. But regarding the ML or the progress of the couple disappointed me. First of all ML's entry felt a little forced to me due to the task assigned my the system and it's constant interference. There was no mystery regarding ML's feeling as the system kept informing the FL and it felt like no matter what she has to fell in love with him. Also the time frame in which the feelings progressed from friendship to love and FL starting to accept him was too short. Till here I was still able to accept as other novels of similar genre also depicts system catalysts the ML and FL union. I was also happy that here the 'playboy-turns-good guy' is shown as ML and not just as a secondary character. But as the story progresses I started doubting whether he was suitable for FL. My reasons for it was that the story reveals that ex was doing everything to protect the FL. Still I was fine with the ex not getting the girl even though he loved her bcuz he pushed her to suicide instead of trusting her and explain to her the reason he can't be together. My issue is actually with ML. Apart from honesty and open communication ( unlike ex) I couldn't find anything good about him. In case of ex it's shown that even though he loved the FL he took wrong decisions but at the same time he was ready to bear the consequences of his decisions. When he found out that she is moving on with someone else he didn't tries force her to get back but rather wants her to be happy. I found him stupid but not a jerk and he also paid huge price for it by losing the FL. But in case of ML, till now I could not find depth to his character or any struggle. He is as rich as ex though it is hinting that there are family issues with ML but ex also have issues as well, so nothing new. Secondly, when ML wanted a carefree life he just left the family business and enjoyed a casanova life and when he wanted to get back he started claiming his rights. I also didn't find him a good friend as he was not aware what his friend (ex) was going through. He was shown as friend to FL but he didn't do anything exceptional before he became a suitor as the FL already had churu as a support and the system was forcing the relationship. I didn't find him completely true to FL lead as well. There was no arc showing his change of dynamic with his friend bcuz of the FL. After knowing the struggle of FL lead he was angry at his friend (ex) but that anger didn't last long. If the anger was reduced bcuz of knowing his friends's(ex) story then it can be justified but here this was not revealed yet and he still went back to normal. I felt ML got everything easily as compared to other characters. Also there was no great character-development for him till now. Its the first story where I wanted a redemption arc for ex and for him to end up with the FL. Bcuz they were childhood sweetheart and none of them actually cheated on each other. They were forced by circumstances and they did whatever they felt would be right at that point. I personally don't like any pairing where the guy is allowed to have multiple relationship but the girl is kept pure/innocent which is the case with ML.
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This story is refreshing. You know what i mean. I literaly is in love with ml. There is no rape, tyrant, egoistical characteristic in ml and that is gem my dear. This is worth my time and ss. I just read it yesterday and i just cant stop until today and here i am have reach the latest chapter and grinning like an idiot and a bit dissapoint because i want more. So to the new reader or someone reading this, i wanna say that you are in the right path. Author, thank you for your time and effort. I really really love plus adore this book 💓