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Good book so far, really clever and original. The author uses systems that I haven’t seen other authors use before. Sorry I need to waste space now.
The story seems interesting. I will definitely give it a go. And this story is kinda unique from other stories that I've read till now. So I am looking forward to it.
I have to admit .... Just from the sypnosis I can tell that this will be a favorite coz i really love novels that have that focus attention on the female lead, especially when she is a badass action lover
Author,your never is damn interesting, i couldread it day, The title if the novel especially fits the story itself,it is indeed creative . Keep up the good work
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I not know much about school, where i study, we call them gangster, i story development is good😀😀😀😀 so i am reading you book and add in my library
interesting story; I urge people to check it out! The character, though a bit OP, is interesting in the setting she is in, thus it works fine. I'm excited to see where this will go.
I love Lian. Called her Queen would be an understatement. She's a goddamn Empress with her minions. Damn that girl is on fire and I wanna know if any guy can actually match that level of sass. Actually, give our girl a girlfriend instead. Queen deserves another Queen. Keep up the good work!
A well written book, characters and grammar are done well. And the story is full of potential, got hooked on the first chapter, its funny and i like the conversation between grandpa and MC. If you're wondering why i didn't rate this 5 star, it because of the update, and i hope the author will do something about it.
I love stories about a strong and independent female lead, makes girls know they don't need men. Great work, your story is interesting and funny.
I enjoyed reading this book, it was something I would not have normaly read but I found myself having a good time reading every last word of it. I hope to read more of this amazing novel in the future and to find out what happens next and the story devoplent is going at a amazing pace, I enjoy the desion and feel of the people and the writing quality is top noth
As a writer myself highly experienced in reading novels that have female mc with her lovingly grandfather or family. I find this story interesting nonetheless because of its reality essence and the status of their family which makes more exciting to binge read. Overall, GREAT WRITING STYLE, no grammar lapses and good word construction. Cool that author is making every chapter worthwhile. Looking forward to this one. :)
Dear author I really liked your story the few chapters I had go through are good. I liked the story development. This very interesting. And I like the high school novel. Keep up the good work.
I love this novel. The synopsis didn't attract me at first because I thought this story might be cliche. This is almost the first novel where I had no doubts about giving 5 stars. In fact, I already read all the chapters. Sure, the author might've taken a break from chapter 15 to chapter 16. But... I will support him/her nonetheless. I really enjoy this book. It's very exciting and the author is able to immerse the readers. I got a few laughs out of it. Even if you don't update frequently, I don't care. I'll still be waiting :)
Hey you! Yes, I mean you that you're approaching this novel! If you're a looking for a good school drama/slice of life this you've find it. Follow the adventure of a spectacular girl attending an elite school with all the dramas that this thongs carries behind! Definitely a worth read
☁🎈🎈☁🎈🎈☁ 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 ☁🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈☁ ☁☁🎈🎈🎈☁☁ ☁☁☁🎈☁☁☁ So much fun , exiting and different... ☁🎈🎈☁🎈🎈☁ 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 ☁🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈☁ ☁☁🎈🎈🎈☁☁ ☁☁☁🎈☁☁☁
I actually just started this Novel but I am already impressed from the start I like this assasin family and the princess that wants to fly out of familys protection stories i can already see the trouble which would definetly come across when she would enter the "normal school world" Cauz she is an assasin i actually see her hanging in a tree saying hi😂😂😂 well i will read the rest later i hope you will review both of my novels here too Uncrowned Queen..... and You are N[h]ot please add it to your favs and gift it with spirit stones if u like it
i really like this novel !!! it is extremely interesting with the way the plot and story have been set out! the characters are also unique especially our all-powerful protagonist lmaooo !! grammar is really good and the plot isn't cliche which i like.. and who knows maybe there are more plot twists to come >0< hehe the only problem i have is that the protagonist has everything going for her favor (though thats very satisfying) i just wanted to mention it as some people may prefer for the protagonist to go from weak to strong etc, anyways this is a defo read and i recommend it very much for those who want fresh plots !
Hey dear author... Just added this novel to my library and already on the latest chapter.... Please requesting to update faster.... And love our FL... Great job... And please update faster
This book is so funny and comical at times. Love the ideas behind it and having someone so perfect yet their background is too strong. In most books the MC doesn't have a strong background, and then they have to work harder. It's interesting to see that it has the same effect on the character.
Very good story. I like the concept you got going. I liked it so much I even added it to my library. My only issue is the lack of daily updates. Keep up the good work!
The first chapter and already intrigue. Shows the world of clans, those who rule from the shadows of the powerful of this world. It is interesting. Usually they do not know anything about them. The king gets the whole deal, but all the hatred also falls on his head. Whereas he is the “face of the company”, and those who manage it remain in the dark. I had such thoughts after reading the first chapter. Go ahead! The school itself is not taught in it, it makes the necessary contacts. And elite schools are kluyulk venomous snakes. But who will pass this test, he is likely to be able to settle well in the social world. Provided, of course, but will not step on the "tail of the tiger." Which can quite be found in such a school. But this is rather offtopic. Thinking out loud. I wonder why people like to use schools in their novels as some kind of military bases, shelters of secret organizations, and gates to the other world. A bit like a click. Oh, there is a ranking system! Red pants and yellow! Chetlan cool, patsaki rest! Those who follow the rules imposed by the strong, initially lost. The rules for the strong to break them. As follows from the cliche about schools. See if the author succeeds in avoiding this? There are hidden quests, the school itself is like a game? It is interesting! Wow, that's a factional fight? This is the fourth chapter. It can be seen, the story will be rich in all kinds of bases, cunning moves, the manifestation of emotions, extremely entertaining. Thanks to the author for such a curious piece.
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So far so goood! At first I wasn’t sure if this story was up my alley, but I figured I would give it a try. I’m glad I did! I’m really enjoying the story line, and I can’t wait to find all she is capable of doing! Her first two little followers seem so cute too!
Cool. I mean, yeah, ok. It's a good concept, decent execution, but, I dunno, it just seems to typical. I feel like it's just another romance comedy novel with the same overall plot of a Mary Sue being a Mary Sue. Also, I think the first chapter is a bit iffy. The protagonist is built up to be a literal Mary Sue, with an incredibly strict grandparent. But what I read of it was a literal orphaned Mary Sue with a pretty lenient grandpa, and basically no character apart from "she got gud". I also think that her family could be elaborated on a bit more. Sure, it's a clan of SUPAH SEKRET OP NINJAS OMAIGAWD SO COOL, but the death of her parents were glossed over. Like "I'm sorry, they're dead. Welcome to the Make-A-Wish foundation, motherfcker". But then again, I'm just an edgelord. For what it's worth, it's a pretty good novel. If you do like comedic romances, sure, this'll make you pretty happy. It does what it wants to do reasonably well, and in the end, it's basically just meant to be fun. It probably won't pull out a sledgehammer and bash your feels out of existence, it won't pull out flask to collect your tears, but it might just make you smile. So all in all, pretty decent, typical story of a Mary Sue that you're not meant to think too much about. *tips fedora*
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The plot is interesting. It started on a good note and I hope that this story will go smoothly. Looking forward to the next chapters. The best of luck to the author. 😊👍
The plot is great and very interesting. I love the story and the female lead The writing quality is good and if there are grammatical errors, it doesn't bother me a lot. All the best author, full score from me...
I read through chapter 10 as of writing this review. The writing quality is good and if there are grammatical errors, it doesn't bother me a lot. The story is still starting yet it has a good start but avoid having info dumps. As for the character design and world background, I like how it's made. All I could say is this story is like a breathe of fresh air for me 'cause it's different from what I've been reading this days. I'll keep it in my library and wait for the updates. Good luck author!
The story is so interesting and I already love to read until the latest chapter. It is recommended to read and I hope for more chapters ❤️😊📖
Good book so far, really clever and original. The author uses systems that I haven’t seen other authors use before. Sorry I need to waste space now.
The story seems interesting. I will definitely give it a go. And this story is kinda unique from other stories that I've read till now. So I am looking forward to it.
I have to admit .... Just from the sypnosis I can tell that this will be a favorite coz i really love novels that have that focus attention on the female lead, especially when she is a badass action lover
Author,your never is damn interesting, i couldread it day, The title if the novel especially fits the story itself,it is indeed creative . Keep up the good work
ネタバレを明かす I not know much about school, where i study, we call them gangster, i story development is good😀😀😀😀 so i am reading you book and add in my library
interesting story; I urge people to check it out! The character, though a bit OP, is interesting in the setting she is in, thus it works fine. I'm excited to see where this will go.
I love Lian. Called her Queen would be an understatement. She's a goddamn Empress with her minions. Damn that girl is on fire and I wanna know if any guy can actually match that level of sass. Actually, give our girl a girlfriend instead. Queen deserves another Queen. Keep up the good work!
A well written book, characters and grammar are done well. And the story is full of potential, got hooked on the first chapter, its funny and i like the conversation between grandpa and MC. If you're wondering why i didn't rate this 5 star, it because of the update, and i hope the author will do something about it.
I love stories about a strong and independent female lead, makes girls know they don't need men. Great work, your story is interesting and funny.
I enjoyed reading this book, it was something I would not have normaly read but I found myself having a good time reading every last word of it. I hope to read more of this amazing novel in the future and to find out what happens next and the story devoplent is going at a amazing pace, I enjoy the desion and feel of the people and the writing quality is top noth
As a writer myself highly experienced in reading novels that have female mc with her lovingly grandfather or family. I find this story interesting nonetheless because of its reality essence and the status of their family which makes more exciting to binge read. Overall, GREAT WRITING STYLE, no grammar lapses and good word construction. Cool that author is making every chapter worthwhile. Looking forward to this one. :)
Dear author I really liked your story the few chapters I had go through are good. I liked the story development. This very interesting. And I like the high school novel. Keep up the good work.
I love this novel. The synopsis didn't attract me at first because I thought this story might be cliche. This is almost the first novel where I had no doubts about giving 5 stars. In fact, I already read all the chapters. Sure, the author might've taken a break from chapter 15 to chapter 16. But... I will support him/her nonetheless. I really enjoy this book. It's very exciting and the author is able to immerse the readers. I got a few laughs out of it. Even if you don't update frequently, I don't care. I'll still be waiting :)
Hey you! Yes, I mean you that you're approaching this novel! If you're a looking for a good school drama/slice of life this you've find it. Follow the adventure of a spectacular girl attending an elite school with all the dramas that this thongs carries behind! Definitely a worth read
☁🎈🎈☁🎈🎈☁ 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 ☁🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈☁ ☁☁🎈🎈🎈☁☁ ☁☁☁🎈☁☁☁ So much fun , exiting and different... ☁🎈🎈☁🎈🎈☁ 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 ☁🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈☁ ☁☁🎈🎈🎈☁☁ ☁☁☁🎈☁☁☁
I actually just started this Novel but I am already impressed from the start I like this assasin family and the princess that wants to fly out of familys protection stories i can already see the trouble which would definetly come across when she would enter the "normal school world" Cauz she is an assasin i actually see her hanging in a tree saying hi😂😂😂 well i will read the rest later i hope you will review both of my novels here too Uncrowned Queen..... and You are N[h]ot please add it to your favs and gift it with spirit stones if u like it
i really like this novel !!! it is extremely interesting with the way the plot and story have been set out! the characters are also unique especially our all-powerful protagonist lmaooo !! grammar is really good and the plot isn't cliche which i like.. and who knows maybe there are more plot twists to come >0< hehe the only problem i have is that the protagonist has everything going for her favor (though thats very satisfying) i just wanted to mention it as some people may prefer for the protagonist to go from weak to strong etc, anyways this is a defo read and i recommend it very much for those who want fresh plots !
Hey dear author... Just added this novel to my library and already on the latest chapter.... Please requesting to update faster.... And love our FL... Great job... And please update faster
This book is so funny and comical at times. Love the ideas behind it and having someone so perfect yet their background is too strong. In most books the MC doesn't have a strong background, and then they have to work harder. It's interesting to see that it has the same effect on the character.
Very good story. I like the concept you got going. I liked it so much I even added it to my library. My only issue is the lack of daily updates. Keep up the good work!
The first chapter and already intrigue. Shows the world of clans, those who rule from the shadows of the powerful of this world. It is interesting. Usually they do not know anything about them. The king gets the whole deal, but all the hatred also falls on his head. Whereas he is the “face of the company”, and those who manage it remain in the dark. I had such thoughts after reading the first chapter. Go ahead! The school itself is not taught in it, it makes the necessary contacts. And elite schools are kluyulk venomous snakes. But who will pass this test, he is likely to be able to settle well in the social world. Provided, of course, but will not step on the "tail of the tiger." Which can quite be found in such a school. But this is rather offtopic. Thinking out loud. I wonder why people like to use schools in their novels as some kind of military bases, shelters of secret organizations, and gates to the other world. A bit like a click. Oh, there is a ranking system! Red pants and yellow! Chetlan cool, patsaki rest! Those who follow the rules imposed by the strong, initially lost. The rules for the strong to break them. As follows from the cliche about schools. See if the author succeeds in avoiding this? There are hidden quests, the school itself is like a game? It is interesting! Wow, that's a factional fight? This is the fourth chapter. It can be seen, the story will be rich in all kinds of bases, cunning moves, the manifestation of emotions, extremely entertaining. Thanks to the author for such a curious piece.
ネタバレを明かす So far so goood! At first I wasn’t sure if this story was up my alley, but I figured I would give it a try. I’m glad I did! I’m really enjoying the story line, and I can’t wait to find all she is capable of doing! Her first two little followers seem so cute too!
Cool. I mean, yeah, ok. It's a good concept, decent execution, but, I dunno, it just seems to typical. I feel like it's just another romance comedy novel with the same overall plot of a Mary Sue being a Mary Sue. Also, I think the first chapter is a bit iffy. The protagonist is built up to be a literal Mary Sue, with an incredibly strict grandparent. But what I read of it was a literal orphaned Mary Sue with a pretty lenient grandpa, and basically no character apart from "she got gud". I also think that her family could be elaborated on a bit more. Sure, it's a clan of SUPAH SEKRET OP NINJAS OMAIGAWD SO COOL, but the death of her parents were glossed over. Like "I'm sorry, they're dead. Welcome to the Make-A-Wish foundation, motherfcker". But then again, I'm just an edgelord. For what it's worth, it's a pretty good novel. If you do like comedic romances, sure, this'll make you pretty happy. It does what it wants to do reasonably well, and in the end, it's basically just meant to be fun. It probably won't pull out a sledgehammer and bash your feels out of existence, it won't pull out flask to collect your tears, but it might just make you smile. So all in all, pretty decent, typical story of a Mary Sue that you're not meant to think too much about. *tips fedora*
ネタバレを明かす The plot is interesting. It started on a good note and I hope that this story will go smoothly. Looking forward to the next chapters. The best of luck to the author. 😊👍
The plot is great and very interesting. I love the story and the female lead The writing quality is good and if there are grammatical errors, it doesn't bother me a lot. All the best author, full score from me...
I read through chapter 10 as of writing this review. The writing quality is good and if there are grammatical errors, it doesn't bother me a lot. The story is still starting yet it has a good start but avoid having info dumps. As for the character design and world background, I like how it's made. All I could say is this story is like a breathe of fresh air for me 'cause it's different from what I've been reading this days. I'll keep it in my library and wait for the updates. Good luck author!
The story is so interesting and I already love to read until the latest chapter. It is recommended to read and I hope for more chapters ❤️😊📖