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The Ladies Gang Puppet Leader (18+) (Warning: Explicit sexual content)
4.44 (169 レビュー結果)
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My name is Caiden Black. I am a 17-year-old ordinary guy you can find anywhere in the world. My life’s ambition is to propose to my childhood friend; Lily Storm. I was all prepared, but my destiny decided to fuck me over and through a series of extreme unfavorable events, which include raping Lily, I am now surrounded by a bunch of women and being forced to become the head of their ladies crime organization…
Someone save me…
Note: This story takes place in Arasia, a planet almost exactly the same as Earth. Only the geography and a few little things are different.
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Tags: R-18, Adult, Mature, Criminal world, harem, different world, Huge Breast, extremely beautiful women, Rape, weak to strong MC, Smut etc
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WARNING BETA MC!!!! - MC still retarded ✔️ - MC still no backbone ✔️ - Author still giving ****ty excuses for a BETA MC. ✔️ ^like it's weak to strong guys lil does he know he has been weak/retarded/useless/spineless for more then a year Gets blackmailed more than fmc in hentai But don't take my word for it. Just look at the commends on chapters..... And if that is not enough this is what other characters think of him "She just sees you as a pathetic idiot who would do anything if she just points her gun at you. She even called you a coward with who would never stand up for himself," <-- Thats the MC The only thing your story accomplished is make the readers FRUSTRATED it took WAY to long to change the mc I'm sure you lost most of your readers. Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐
I remember this premises from japanese novel somewhere - R***d his first love - Getting entangled with a criminal organisation ( the difference is the other one is a pure prostitution business while this one is a massive criminal organisation ) But this has a promising storyline if played correctly. I just hope that there will be no magic shenanigans whatsoever for this one Looking forward for the MC character development as the other novel had a such a dark "broken" MC but that's what made it such a good read
Overall nice novel, the story is interesting if you keep on reading it, on first the story will not take you in but when you keep on reading it the story is good the writing keeps on improving as the story progress just keep up the good work and don't drop it.
I just wanna say ...it is interesting trust me .... but only thing I hate is the writer is not updating frequently I hope he do .... huh... (°¤° ) otherwise whole plot is nice and good .. I also donated my" poWER STOne " so I hope you consider my request
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The story is good enough to get me to read all there is and it is somewhat entertaining, but holy sh*it is the MC not likable!! He is a thinker, rarely talks unless he is barking at someone for doing something he doesnt like and when he tries to act out a plan he ALWAYS messes it up! So far two gangs are extorting him with nudes of him and his girlfriend to get then to do things to her family or something lame. Mc says he will protect lily but he never lifts a finger because he cant and even when he can, he wont. I wouldnt be surprised if somewhere down the line FL Lily gets gang-ra*ped by many multiple guys because she is told to for the sake of her boyfriend. It is actually infuriating to read so i am dropping, however at least try it before you drop.
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This Majesty gives All Big Five Stars for this Novel!!!!! Anyone have problem with it????? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Just here to support author, good story and love the world building. At Least the way he gets into girls pants is believable, not like other novel where girl instantly falls for the MC. To people who think MC is a coward, what do expect from a normal high school student who was suddenly kidnapped and either choose between death and work for them. At least the way he reacts is in the realm of common sense.
Wow he gets to do to his gf, her sister and mother. Wow he is going to living in pleasure of heaven where utmost pleasure lies. I wish it will release at list 2 chapter a week. And finally mc is going to man up.
I love this book so far. I picked it up a few days ago and it was the first in read. It has a good story and the characters are put in situations tgat make the book interesting to read. I am excited to see updates to this book because i can fully say that the author put alot of time and effort into writing it.
The author is a mad sadist, because only such people would think of doing such a thing to an innocent sweet girl like Lily!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The premise is similar to Pure Love X Insult Complex, except not as dark. There is no NTR (netorare: where the girl is stolen from the MC), so that's a BIG plus. The MC is pretty average, except for his D, and he genuinely loves the girl, who reciprocates. He gets involved with a criminal organization by chance, but it seems he's developing more guts as he goes along. There are some frustrating parts because the MC has to deal with other character's BS, but the story hasn't progressed too far yet. I eagerly await his revenge! If you want other sources to read, check out the authors WordPress page or MachineSlicedBread, which I originally read it. Very well written!
Veeeryyyyy gooood, começei hoje e a obra já me conquistou, ta de parabéns ai, cara tuas obra são sempre boas é impressionante seu talento pra escrita.
De hecho, estoy leyendo esta novela, en la página principal, si Machine Slice Breadz, pero aunque venía aquí y lo calificaba. Como lo disfruto bastante, muy bonito. Claro que tiene sexo y todo, pero está enfocado en el sexo por lo que puedo ver. Y, afortunadamente, MC no es un pervertido, un cerebro que solo piensa con su basura y deja su cerebro apagado, todo el tiempo. Ver más
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Interesting . Anticipating the next chapter . Though a bit frustrated at chapter releases. Keep up the good work author. Gooooooooooooood work and hoping u continue writing this story unlike a lot of people on webnovel. Actually this is one of the best books I've read on webnovel . I love the plot
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I like the background setting. An organization became his harem.vvvvvvvvvvvvvbvvvvvvvbbbvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv BBC BBC BBC CVCC CVCC CVCC BBC BBC BBC BBC BBC
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