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A good read! I found a lot of misspelling, grammatical errors, and punctuations; give a proofread and it will be more pleasing. :) I envy your way of writing action scenes, it left me on the edge as I read. The characters are vivid and feels like they are alive. It was a good dive! When will be the next chapter? I want to read it as soon as possible. Anyways, do check mine "Bright Claw: Emergence" #94 and drop a review. If you liked it then drop a support!! :D
Hello, I am still working on chapter 10 at the moment. Planning to make at least 3 chapters before I release, maybe. Anyway, thank you for 11.2k views hope you like this fanfiction. Thanks!
A good read! I found a lot of misspelling, grammatical errors, and punctuations; give a proofread and it will be more pleasing. :) I envy your way of writing action scenes, it left me on the edge as I read. The characters are vivid and feels like they are alive. It was a good dive! When will be the next chapter? I want to read it as soon as possible. Anyways, do check mine "Bright Claw: Emergence" #94 and drop a review. If you liked it then drop a support!! :D
Hello, I am still working on chapter 10 at the moment. Planning to make at least 3 chapters before I release, maybe. Anyway, thank you for 11.2k views hope you like this fanfiction. Thanks!