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Survivor of Creation Trial

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作者: Bored_Sage

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boundless land dyed by bloood, and you can see flattened mountain and bottomless pit everywhere.

innumerable corpse scattered in this place. this is supreme being body.

and in distance place where the corps piled like small mountain, average yet crahming young man sit there while smoking.

"with this, the trial is over. and i can go home"

[Ding! Scanning host candidate. Candidate have compatibility with system. Binding..]

"...."

[Binding completed. Welcome to Creation System]

"Fuck!! I still end up with this plague"

[Congratulation host for obtaining the winner seat of Creation Trial]

[Host will be awarded with 'Creator Seat candidate']

[Creation era finished, host will be transported back to Earth]



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Disclaimer : several characters, names (games and characters) and item's name is not my original.

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Where do I start? How about the broken English? I laughed when I read this. Not because the story is funny, but because the mistakes are funny. I understand someone is not fluent in English. That's fine. But surely, this is the quality of google translation. It's so bad. When I read this, it reminded me of a manhua I read in the past. It was called The Gamer. I don't know if author based his novel on that or not. Yea the updates are fine, the story could be interesting, if not for the generic stuff inside. Overused op stuff, and so on. Feels like copy-past of something else. Brainless characters... Yea. Nothing else to add.

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