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Part of a review swap and at time of reading, only 11 chapters are available. Overall, I like the story and its development. Author is really good in captivating the audience with its realistic setting and heartfelt interactions. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language, thus I can't even note the grammatical errors (if any). In short, the quality is top-notch. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development: It's good. The build-up is just at the right pace (imo) and the Author captivates your interest from the start. Character Design & World Background: The descriptions, the settings ... all just wow. Strong, well-written and Author manages to flesh them out nicely. A good novel with lots of potential. Added to library. All the best Author!
it is a great story it really pulls you in, in the first chapters and then goes on with the story. i don't have anything bad to say adn nothing to correct since english isn't my first language. overall it is a great book so far.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email avarohm_review@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Part of a review swap and at time of reading, only 11 chapters are available. Overall, I like the story and its development. Author is really good in captivating the audience with its realistic setting and heartfelt interactions. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language, thus I can't even note the grammatical errors (if any). In short, the quality is top-notch. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development: It's good. The build-up is just at the right pace (imo) and the Author captivates your interest from the start. Character Design & World Background: The descriptions, the settings ... all just wow. Strong, well-written and Author manages to flesh them out nicely. A good novel with lots of potential. Added to library. All the best Author!
it is a great story it really pulls you in, in the first chapters and then goes on with the story. i don't have anything bad to say adn nothing to correct since english isn't my first language. overall it is a great book so far.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email avarohm_review@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!