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"Killed by a truck...agh~", Aaron sighed. He wasn't sure exactly what happened or how he was killed by the legendary Truck-kun. The last memory he had on Earth was that of walking his dog at the park when suddenly without warning two bright lights flew at him, after that...Darkness.
"To think that Truck-kun doesn't even need to be on the streets, I just wanted to walk my dog...agh~"
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Host:Aaron Heart
Location: Stellar Void Continent
Age:14
Level: 1
Strength: 100lbs
Speed: 20 Mph
Observation Haki: Lvl 0
Armament Haki: Lvl 0
Conquerors Haki: [Locked]
Abilities: Ito-Ito no Mi, Hie-Hie no Mi
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P.S Expect batch release, 2-3 chapters every 2-3 days for now until I can set a release schedule.
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Five chapter for everything this is so good. SO FUCKIN* GOOD. Kepp up the good work man all of my power stone will going to you from now on.
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I really like this story, other than some errors an editor can fix I really like how fluid the story is. Keep it up mr.writer! Don’t sway your story because of some random comment. As long as the story pleases you, people of similar interests will love it as well, you can’t make everyone happy. Though you probably will make a lot of people happy, especially with such a straightforward mc. There are so many stories with a mc blind to romance around him or doesn’t pursue it. I like the way you have things, going forward, keep up the good work.
Good story, I like it until now. I hope that you don't drop it and continue until the end. I see no problem with the story and the new world but I still wanna say that we don't need an idiot MC who teaches everybody about his styles. Also, you can use grammarly to correct some little faults in the writing. I also use it to write my story. These faults don't appear too much but they still have a little impact. Continue the good work. Happy to be the one to review the story.
This is a fun read as it have some kind of plot to it which is better then those other original who make their mc so ridiculous. It’s good to have change once in a wile overall good read. Ps ignore those that rated 1 stars. Give this novel a try it’s an interesting read.
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Ok first thing his two devil fruit powers suck and with them you could have chosen to give kaze kaze no mi And the goro goro no mi or a gravity fruit or something not an icy string human even with a system hes still a garbage character and his flaw is he cant cultivate that seems stupid as hell since no one is master of a devil fruit they must cultivate the powers over time as well so yeah this is my opinion and it doesnt reflect the story as a whole but it could be better
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卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1 : Stellar Void
- 1 Oh my God! 5 years ago
- 2 Surprises 5 years ago
- 3 Black Mountain 5 years ago
- 4 Qi Beast 5 years ago
- 5 Contact! 5 years ago
- 6 Red Band Adventurers! 5 years ago
- 7 Bloodline 5 years ago
- 8 Trouble 5 years ago
- 9 Puppet Show 5 years ago
- 10 Viridian City 5 years ago
- 11 Martial Stage 5 years ago
- 12 Six Styles 5 years ago
- 13 Past and Present 5 years ago
- 14 Miara Emerald 5 years ago
- 15 Sky's Path! 5 years ago
- 16 If you Want 5 years ago
- 17 The Plan 5 years ago
- 18 Calvin Dalton 5 years ago
- 19 Be confident 5 years ago
- 20 Amazing Martial Skills 5 years ago
- 21 Pure Lotus Physique 5 years ago
- 22 Emerald City 5 years ago
- 23 Control 5 years ago
- 24 Ice 5 years ago
- 25 Sophia 5 years ago
- 26 Huh?!?! 5 years ago
- 27 Rumor 5 years ago
I truly love this novel. Interesting plot, interesting MC, interesting powers, just generally interesting. The only reason I didn't give 5 stars is because there isn't an official update rate yet.