Todoroki Shoto's adventure in different anime worlds

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Ashwatthama

Author you don't have brain. Chakra is not something available in any world. You should give a proper explanation for that. Getting 3v wish ask for 3 wish more When god started having their brain dead. Senju bloodline is too underrated Uchiha is not that op As mangekyo have blindness problem For ultimate need a brother eye For rinnegan need sage of six path son reincarnation So sharingan op , my foot. I born , see mother. Father And just overreacted Man he was an ***** right before Or a child of 5 or 10. Or actually author you have problems of disorder. Angel is happy to be sealed Is she machochist. Man even god can't be spared in your dog **** story. So I got angry , very very angry. OK ,. First thought for mother a and even written by authors Oh , booooobbbbbsss. Chick , don't you have A family or parents. I think you don't Or u r those failures Who live all their life in just A room. Bye lovely otaku machochist mother ****er boy.

LV 2

Vaishnavi_Boda

Really is great! Just started reading it, but it seems good so far. Plus the translations are grammatically accurate most of the time which gives it more attention in the publication industry. Sure hope to read more!

LV 4

Juronoss

At first, I was pretty hyped by the synopsis and even by the character before his reincarnation. But after that, I simply didn't understand what you wanted to do with the story, it goes in every direction. The characters are not well developed if not weird at some point. Also, a lot of things done by the MC are not explained, not to us but the other characters and they find it completely normal. It's like you wanted to tell a lot of stories at the same time and ended with that, you know it's not because cheese and chocolate are good that it's better mixed. The only reason for me to not put 0 is for your writing quality, at least from what I see there are no grammatical errors, but I'm french so I can't really tell. I also think that you tried to go too fast in writing the story and didn't have time to think about the plot, so don't hesitate to take your time in writing and re-reading even if it's longer the quality will improve. (**: that's only my theory maybe it's not like that at all). I hope my review will help you to improve and write a better story. Good luck

LV 4

princeVegeta

Bro............You're doing a nice job.......Keep it up.................................. ....... . . .. ... . . .. . ... . ...................

LV 4

Amrit_Kumar

Awesome op character. With quite interesting plot the reading is easy as Grammer is good and I hope to see new chapters soon good luck for future author

LV 12

The_Blood_Reaper

This is the best novel on Webnovel I’ve seen so far. It is my favorite. I can’t wait till the next chapter is out. I wish it would update faster so I can read the next chapters.🙏🏼

LV 4

PUERKO_Senpai

the story may seem interesting at first but it will become disgusting, (in addition to beautiful women who become men) many beautiful women in these worlds and there can be no HAREM. The ustor loves yaoi.

LV 15

Caliburns

Grammar is pretty good in this novel, so far so good, give this novel a chance! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 10

Insane_Pumpkin

Weak writing quality, chaotic development of story at later chapters, bad choice of heroine at least for that MC i have nothing to momo thou, characters literaly lack character like there was none showed as original character features in mc and oc's, No world background what's over just what author think is cool thrown together withour any explanations or world laws...

LV 4

Aura_RoseHeart

Pls update... T-T Cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry

LV 5

goldzi

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ZENITH

MASS RELEASE MASSS RELEASEEE!! PLZ PLZ PLZ AMAZING FAN FICTION I HOPE U DONT DROP THIS NOVEL JUST KEEP IT GOING I LIKE THIS NOVEL WORTH MY POWER STONES

LV 5

TheMothMan

It seems promising so I'll drop a 5 star review to support the author **. A mass release will be good. Just saying Now i need to fill in 140 characters soo dfddddddddffffffdfffffffzfhsfudjsgjsgjstjetjetjetjatuatjegjdhkrky

LV 1

MM7

Nice try.......................very good................................want to see more and more............................................................................best wishes

LV 1

RX78

There's potential, I just don't like the first person point of view and I doubt others would prefer it over third person. However, the writing quality is definitely good. I just don't like the first five chapters because it is honestly a waste of time and could've been skipped or merged into one chapter as every other novel used the same premise of the MC dying because of X reason. We came for the BNHA not the set up, but after chapter 5 the good content comes

LV 5

DarkDawning

For the sake of having more reviews cheers author _________________________________________(_______(__________________________________________________________

LV 6

DonHit

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LV 6

EmbarrassedEdge

This is some good fan-fiction ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................