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OMG! I read it to the last chapter , it feels so good to see the happy and interesting ending .I don't want it to end 😞😞😞😞😭😭😭😭👍
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You are a fool bro your best novel out of all of the others what a waste of a awsome op mc and good story i just hope it was worth it i really dont why you drop this work of art i read the other novels and in my opinion was kinda sucky not to mention the mc was way weaker, lamer , and more incompetent compared to theo i really hope one day you can bring this awsome novel back in action
Olá! Espero que estejam tendo um belo dia. Aqui vai meu comentário sobre esta obra: Atualmente estou no capítulo 337 e estou bastante satisfeito com a história. Ela tem um bom desenvolvimento. O protagonista não é clichê como vemos em muitas outras histórias, nem ingênuo. Acho ele muito impressionante; se ele precisa fazer algo, ele faz. Até agora, o romance também é muito bom, mesmo que se desenvolva lentamente. É fofo até. até a próxima!
it was a good read. For those that like over powered characters without them being a typical idiot.Warning wasn't fleshed out to the end but still has a decent closing chapter.
It is a fun read that is for mature audiences while also don't have to take seriously.
to be honest the writing style sucks everything that has to do with another entity or something in the system is emphasized so much and first bunch of chapters theo is basically by himself but you still put theo: which is stupid cause he's the only one who's talked so far besides the bunny dream
not sure if it's a spoiler tbh its about it ending an the possibility of a future rewrite. I just finished an honestly I loved it an low key I'm sad it ended but I decided I'm gonna read all the novels you have done dude your awesome I do hope that you come back to rewrite it an see how it changes whether it becomes longer or shorter know that I will be happily reading the rewrite if you do it if not I'm happy I found this novel.
So I have been reading this story for a while. I think I started reading when it was at around maybe 400 or so chapters might be more don't quote me on that. To that point though I ended up reading up to 592 and the reason for it is that I person think the author done a good enough job describing the characters. I have a very good imagination to say the least so the whole time I was reading it was playing out like an anime in my mind and I thoroughly enjoyed it I stopped when I got upto 592 cause the chapter uploaded seemed to slow down quite a bit so I was a little sad but, I could understand that obviously the author does have a life as well but I'll be staying an reading up till the very end so I want to thank the author an keep up the awesome work I appreciate your effort and hard work. It's been a story where I'm able to escape reality and enjoy myself.
it was the first novel that brought me to webnovel and I thoroughly enjoyed it till the end
Mc is typical naive type just like all those japanese mc and all his harem members crying over simple things is getting frustrating
It's one of the best stories that I have read if not best. It has good background, plots, good characters not like brain-dead characters and smart and op MC. Overall it's good story and I like it and encourage author to write others stories with better endings.
look dude, it's a really good novel, but why doesn't the character get stronger when he wants, what do they do, who gets stronger at the latest, they play my game, and then there is the tournament arc, very unnecessary 50 There is a tournament that is unnecessary throughout the 60 episodes (may be more) and I've lost the concept of time, how long has it been since I reincarnated? It happened and the character is 1 year old fln (as a body) very unnecessary dialogues, repetitive conversations (for example, the pollution removal pill or something, the same dialogues while being pedigree) but I can't deny the subject, I can feel good feelings, but it gets boring after a while.
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This is one of my favourite books. I really hope the author continues on with this novel.
l really liked the story I just hope that more chapter's are released soon as it's been too long
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I'm in love with the main char I love the characters of this world So different and so many interesting characters that catch your attention on the shelf they appear
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OMG! I read it to the last chapter , it feels so good to see the happy and interesting ending .I don't want it to end 😞😞😞😞😭😭😭😭👍
putting the ability names in <> causes problems when viewing in a web browser. it makes all of them invisible
You are a fool bro your best novel out of all of the others what a waste of a awsome op mc and good story i just hope it was worth it i really dont why you drop this work of art i read the other novels and in my opinion was kinda sucky not to mention the mc was way weaker, lamer , and more incompetent compared to theo i really hope one day you can bring this awsome novel back in action
Olá! Espero que estejam tendo um belo dia. Aqui vai meu comentário sobre esta obra: Atualmente estou no capítulo 337 e estou bastante satisfeito com a história. Ela tem um bom desenvolvimento. O protagonista não é clichê como vemos em muitas outras histórias, nem ingênuo. Acho ele muito impressionante; se ele precisa fazer algo, ele faz. Até agora, o romance também é muito bom, mesmo que se desenvolva lentamente. É fofo até. até a próxima!
it was a good read. For those that like over powered characters without them being a typical idiot.Warning wasn't fleshed out to the end but still has a decent closing chapter.
It is a fun read that is for mature audiences while also don't have to take seriously.
to be honest the writing style sucks everything that has to do with another entity or something in the system is emphasized so much and first bunch of chapters theo is basically by himself but you still put theo: which is stupid cause he's the only one who's talked so far besides the bunny dream
not sure if it's a spoiler tbh its about it ending an the possibility of a future rewrite. I just finished an honestly I loved it an low key I'm sad it ended but I decided I'm gonna read all the novels you have done dude your awesome I do hope that you come back to rewrite it an see how it changes whether it becomes longer or shorter know that I will be happily reading the rewrite if you do it if not I'm happy I found this novel.
So I have been reading this story for a while. I think I started reading when it was at around maybe 400 or so chapters might be more don't quote me on that. To that point though I ended up reading up to 592 and the reason for it is that I person think the author done a good enough job describing the characters. I have a very good imagination to say the least so the whole time I was reading it was playing out like an anime in my mind and I thoroughly enjoyed it I stopped when I got upto 592 cause the chapter uploaded seemed to slow down quite a bit so I was a little sad but, I could understand that obviously the author does have a life as well but I'll be staying an reading up till the very end so I want to thank the author an keep up the awesome work I appreciate your effort and hard work. It's been a story where I'm able to escape reality and enjoy myself.
it was the first novel that brought me to webnovel and I thoroughly enjoyed it till the end
Mc is typical naive type just like all those japanese mc and all his harem members crying over simple things is getting frustrating
It's one of the best stories that I have read if not best. It has good background, plots, good characters not like brain-dead characters and smart and op MC. Overall it's good story and I like it and encourage author to write others stories with better endings.
look dude, it's a really good novel, but why doesn't the character get stronger when he wants, what do they do, who gets stronger at the latest, they play my game, and then there is the tournament arc, very unnecessary 50 There is a tournament that is unnecessary throughout the 60 episodes (may be more) and I've lost the concept of time, how long has it been since I reincarnated? It happened and the character is 1 year old fln (as a body) very unnecessary dialogues, repetitive conversations (for example, the pollution removal pill or something, the same dialogues while being pedigree) but I can't deny the subject, I can feel good feelings, but it gets boring after a while.
ネタバレを明かす This is one of my favourite books. I really hope the author continues on with this novel.
l really liked the story I just hope that more chapter's are released soon as it's been too long
Well have finished reading it just waiting for new updates if there is 613333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
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I'm in love with the main char I love the characters of this world So different and so many interesting characters that catch your attention on the shelf they appear
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