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Aweome story. Keep up the excellent work, bro (or sis?). English is great, characters are compelling. Jin Long is such an amazing father figure. The protagonist has a lot of potential too, and I can't wait to see him finally break out on his own. Not sure what's the bit about his mother, that part was confusing because he claims that he didn't see her get killed by the mercenaries, so...okay? But we all know he's gonna destroy them. Maybe.
I like the plot very much and I think that you are an amazing writer. I see some misspelligs here and there but I suppose it's inevitable since you are probably writing on a computer. Is English your native language? How old are you?? Is this your first work???
Hmph.!! this is still as good as ever I just reread it and now I wnat moree !!!!!! authour where are youuuu??!? 😭😭🤧 i for one will alwyas be here waiting for your amazing comeback mr authour!!<3<3
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This is so good. Like the mc (though a bit "immature" now if yk what I mean) is still really strong. I like that and all, but how is he supposed to find someone strlnger to like have a fight or feud or whatever with? If he's the strongest, whom will he fight? I mean I already kinda have a guess 'cause it's gotta be the "real" father that went *poof* and disappeared, but will he be strong enough to rival lur mc??? And if he is, then will our cute lil mc be able to finish him off at the end (since he'll still win even if the dad is crazy strong as well, riiight)??? anyways overall good story. I like it, so please syart updating again. It says it's been oike 10 mths so please please pleaes dtart updating agaaaain!!!.! i mean I know that it's difficult times now and all that ,but still plzzzz. Oh and stay safe and healthy!!<3
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The story is good but I hate the fact that he easily trusts people even after his "non-biological" father jin long told him not to. He trusted his uncle jin niao, now he wants to kill him. His father specifically said not to tell anyone of his power and that after he uses the orb he will forget everything but the next chapter he remembers it all and tells his uncle, the hell is that???? Apart from that, it's all good but his trust ability and promise keeping is poor!
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I'm overflowing with happiness right now😭 Finally she updating again been waiting so long like yeesssss fianlyyyyy!!!! 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
This just keeps on getting better and better and Im so happy that the authour has finally begin to update again after such long time like omg I have been waiting for so long for this and now I'm like super happy that my fav novel is updating again like yeah so happy[>~<]~~<3
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I enjoy the writing style and the power of the MC I also like that the author shows the need for family and friendship I will gladly support this book going foward
This Jin Long is such a good father figure! But we need a mother 2. Little MC's real mother is dead so give him another one author! I can't wait to see what happens! I support You!👍🏼
So sad the good people are dying! Hopefully they will resurrect or smthn. How many chapters will there be? Hope the will be super many! I like this a lot!
Aaaaaahhhh I can't wait to see what will happened to Tian Xinn and Xioa Huoyan! When is next chapter gonna be released?? Is there any more chapter on other site or app???
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I actually like this. It's good and it's a free. It's so damn annoying when you have to pay real money to read like five chapters or something. I know there are ways to read other than paying but still. If I don't pay I can only ready like 3 chaps a day. So yea Imma stick with this heh^^ Besides I love the plot. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Will Tian Mei die?? Will Xioa Huyan start a massacre??? Will Jin Niao die???? Aaargh! I need to know!!!😣 Can't wait to read the coming cha**!!!! When will you release next chap??????[>~<]~<3
ネタバレを明かす It keeps on getting better and better with every chapter. I like it a lot and I honestly think this is the best I've ever read (but I wish there were more chapters to enjoy tho). Thank you for writing such an amazing.... story? Eh book? Novel? *confused* Well keep up the goody work!!!!^^
I love the new chapters!! I look forward to the chapter tomorrow!! I really love this! Can't wait until the next chapter. I'm really love it!
It's just so amazing! I luv that the lil boy is so strong n that he so mature n all but I kinda want him to be a lil bit more badass ya know! That would be rly niceee!=)
im new to this life style and i dont think my review change any thing enery one read it know this is the a great story for me its the best okokokokokokokokok
It's different compared to anything else that I have ever read and that's what makes me want to read more and more! It just keep on getting more and more interesting. Especially that little mc!! Can't wait until he grows up and rule the world or whatever.
Love it how overpowering that little brat is lol. it's hard to find something good to read but i'm really happy that i managed to find this novel- or book-thing. Five stars from me. You deserve it.
Love when Xiao Huoyan killed Xiong She but let Xiong Hu live to deliver his message! Imagine Xiong Hu's parents when he deliver the message and then just die on spot like shiiiiiit!!😍😍👌👌
ネタバレを明かす Thank you for being so considerate of your readers and always replying to your readers comments and reviews! It's so nice of you that you released 3 chapters on the same day just because you missed twice before. Many others would just be like *nah, I was busy* but you actually thought of your readers and compensated!
Still enjoying the book thank you very much, please update soon since I want to see more fascinating things you'll write. This is epic indeed eagerly waiting for the new updates
Aweome story. Keep up the excellent work, bro (or sis?). English is great, characters are compelling. Jin Long is such an amazing father figure. The protagonist has a lot of potential too, and I can't wait to see him finally break out on his own. Not sure what's the bit about his mother, that part was confusing because he claims that he didn't see her get killed by the mercenaries, so...okay? But we all know he's gonna destroy them. Maybe.
I like the plot very much and I think that you are an amazing writer. I see some misspelligs here and there but I suppose it's inevitable since you are probably writing on a computer. Is English your native language? How old are you?? Is this your first work???
Hmph.!! this is still as good as ever I just reread it and now I wnat moree !!!!!! authour where are youuuu??!? 😭😭🤧 i for one will alwyas be here waiting for your amazing comeback mr authour!!<3<3
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
This is so good. Like the mc (though a bit "immature" now if yk what I mean) is still really strong. I like that and all, but how is he supposed to find someone strlnger to like have a fight or feud or whatever with? If he's the strongest, whom will he fight? I mean I already kinda have a guess 'cause it's gotta be the "real" father that went *poof* and disappeared, but will he be strong enough to rival lur mc??? And if he is, then will our cute lil mc be able to finish him off at the end (since he'll still win even if the dad is crazy strong as well, riiight)??? anyways overall good story. I like it, so please syart updating again. It says it's been oike 10 mths so please please pleaes dtart updating agaaaain!!!.! i mean I know that it's difficult times now and all that ,but still plzzzz. Oh and stay safe and healthy!!<3
ネタバレを明かす The story is good but I hate the fact that he easily trusts people even after his "non-biological" father jin long told him not to. He trusted his uncle jin niao, now he wants to kill him. His father specifically said not to tell anyone of his power and that after he uses the orb he will forget everything but the next chapter he remembers it all and tells his uncle, the hell is that???? Apart from that, it's all good but his trust ability and promise keeping is poor!
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I'm overflowing with happiness right now😭 Finally she updating again been waiting so long like yeesssss fianlyyyyy!!!! 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
This just keeps on getting better and better and Im so happy that the authour has finally begin to update again after such long time like omg I have been waiting for so long for this and now I'm like super happy that my fav novel is updating again like yeah so happy[>~<]~~<3
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I enjoy the writing style and the power of the MC I also like that the author shows the need for family and friendship I will gladly support this book going foward
This Jin Long is such a good father figure! But we need a mother 2. Little MC's real mother is dead so give him another one author! I can't wait to see what happens! I support You!👍🏼
So sad the good people are dying! Hopefully they will resurrect or smthn. How many chapters will there be? Hope the will be super many! I like this a lot!
Aaaaaahhhh I can't wait to see what will happened to Tian Xinn and Xioa Huoyan! When is next chapter gonna be released?? Is there any more chapter on other site or app???
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I actually like this. It's good and it's a free. It's so damn annoying when you have to pay real money to read like five chapters or something. I know there are ways to read other than paying but still. If I don't pay I can only ready like 3 chaps a day. So yea Imma stick with this heh^^ Besides I love the plot. Can't wait to see what happens next!
This so good i can not describe wiht words so here i do describe my feelings wiht emojis instead::: 😂😂😂😢😢😢😭😭😭👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿😍😍😍😆😆😆💎💎💎💖💖💖
Will Tian Mei die?? Will Xioa Huyan start a massacre??? Will Jin Niao die???? Aaargh! I need to know!!!😣 Can't wait to read the coming cha**!!!! When will you release next chap??????[>~<]~<3
ネタバレを明かす It keeps on getting better and better with every chapter. I like it a lot and I honestly think this is the best I've ever read (but I wish there were more chapters to enjoy tho). Thank you for writing such an amazing.... story? Eh book? Novel? *confused* Well keep up the goody work!!!!^^
I love the new chapters!! I look forward to the chapter tomorrow!! I really love this! Can't wait until the next chapter. I'm really love it!
It's just so amazing! I luv that the lil boy is so strong n that he so mature n all but I kinda want him to be a lil bit more badass ya know! That would be rly niceee!=)
im new to this life style and i dont think my review change any thing enery one read it know this is the a great story for me its the best okokokokokokokokok
It's different compared to anything else that I have ever read and that's what makes me want to read more and more! It just keep on getting more and more interesting. Especially that little mc!! Can't wait until he grows up and rule the world or whatever.
Love it how overpowering that little brat is lol. it's hard to find something good to read but i'm really happy that i managed to find this novel- or book-thing. Five stars from me. You deserve it.
Love when Xiao Huoyan killed Xiong She but let Xiong Hu live to deliver his message! Imagine Xiong Hu's parents when he deliver the message and then just die on spot like shiiiiiit!!😍😍👌👌
ネタバレを明かす Thank you for being so considerate of your readers and always replying to your readers comments and reviews! It's so nice of you that you released 3 chapters on the same day just because you missed twice before. Many others would just be like *nah, I was busy* but you actually thought of your readers and compensated!
Still enjoying the book thank you very much, please update soon since I want to see more fascinating things you'll write. This is epic indeed eagerly waiting for the new updates