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レビューを書くI'd rather read mtl. The author didn't explain anything Whos the old man? How did mc become strong? He recruited the backstabber (bigmom) while mc is just a lil brat compared to a Yonko so idk if the mc have a loose screw or not The author never explain about the background like which part of the kingdom did the mc lived with the orphanage and many more i cant be bother to type them all Its not like the author writing skills is horrible like those chinese translation its just his execution is so horrible and the way he writes it Its a waste of time
a fanfic without context and too many time skip. don't waste your time i read this because of the how high the views were but it's a waste of time.
this had potential but it was ruined very quickly I dont mind am evil mc as long as he is being evil for evils sake I hate a unessasry evil mc doing evil because he can for pointless unjust reasons is just trash teir to the max ans should be banned
Is there still no update?... Please don't drop this novel... This novel was one of the best fan fiction I've read Mm mm Mm mm mm Kkkmmm Kkkn Hahahdvsbsjsjnsjdhbss
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Really one of the ****ear fan fic on the site and if you disagree then go and get a check up I am really concerned for young Hbohglkhb kybiygihgiyf
I really did like this story. I liked it a lot haha... Shame that you dropped it. I found it really interesting. There were somethings I didn't like, but the good outweighed the bad in my opinion. I think for a fanfiction it was done really well.
ネタバレを明かすI am giving this book one star because it's a harem, it doesn't matter how good you try to make a story if it is a harem it's trash, it's like adding toppings to ****
The MC without any devil fruit pissed off two yonkos and escape but then he gets multiple devil fruits and becomes way to evil but not a good evil... it’s like the author is forcing it way to much and after he got the devil fruits he became sooooooooo weak it’s pathetic. Waste of time don’t read
The storyline is awesome. There is finally an MC that doesn’t want to join Luffys crew, or take his crew. MC is ruthless and the story has pretty good humour.
Lo mejor de lo mejor es la mega Boston y por supuesto la novela es una de las mejores que he leído en esta plataforma.gsyawgsusgs sus ah friday hay ido Dick Jesús todo ví digo Dick mc
ネタバレを明かすThis book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
Not very good not very bad. Characters are a bit annoying to get use to. The MC doesn't act his mental age most of the time and takes away the whole SI feel.
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It is has a good story and chapter are great to read.expexpeexp. You will not regret it unless you are one piece fan....but sadly the updating is slow
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ネタバレを明かすThe best One Piece Fan Fic I read so far (only 4), my real only complaint is that the MCs become way too powerful quickly, already haki and devil fruit... (>\/\&///\/\&&)+)&)&)&/)&)&&//)&//)///)&/))))^&&&&
The writing quality is good. But the story development is very weird no explanation in my aspect things. Time skips in wrongs times. Anyway I had to drop. Hope for the best Aurthor don’t get disappointed I just my personal opinion. Thank you.
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I'd rather read mtl. The author didn't explain anything Whos the old man? How did mc become strong? He recruited the backstabber (bigmom) while mc is just a lil brat compared to a Yonko so idk if the mc have a loose screw or not The author never explain about the background like which part of the kingdom did the mc lived with the orphanage and many more i cant be bother to type them all Its not like the author writing skills is horrible like those chinese translation its just his execution is so horrible and the way he writes it Its a waste of time
a fanfic without context and too many time skip. don't waste your time i read this because of the how high the views were but it's a waste of time.
this had potential but it was ruined very quickly I dont mind am evil mc as long as he is being evil for evils sake I hate a unessasry evil mc doing evil because he can for pointless unjust reasons is just trash teir to the max ans should be banned
Is there still no update?... Please don't drop this novel... This novel was one of the best fan fiction I've read Mm mm Mm mm mm Kkkmmm Kkkn Hahahdvsbsjsjnsjdhbss
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Really one of the ****ear fan fic on the site and if you disagree then go and get a check up I am really concerned for young Hbohglkhb kybiygihgiyf
I really did like this story. I liked it a lot haha... Shame that you dropped it. I found it really interesting. There were somethings I didn't like, but the good outweighed the bad in my opinion. I think for a fanfiction it was done really well.
ネタバレを明かすI am giving this book one star because it's a harem, it doesn't matter how good you try to make a story if it is a harem it's trash, it's like adding toppings to ****
The MC without any devil fruit pissed off two yonkos and escape but then he gets multiple devil fruits and becomes way to evil but not a good evil... it’s like the author is forcing it way to much and after he got the devil fruits he became sooooooooo weak it’s pathetic. Waste of time don’t read
The storyline is awesome. There is finally an MC that doesn’t want to join Luffys crew, or take his crew. MC is ruthless and the story has pretty good humour.
Lo mejor de lo mejor es la mega Boston y por supuesto la novela es una de las mejores que he leído en esta plataforma.gsyawgsusgs sus ah friday hay ido Dick Jesús todo ví digo Dick mc
ネタバレを明かすThis book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
Not very good not very bad. Characters are a bit annoying to get use to. The MC doesn't act his mental age most of the time and takes away the whole SI feel.
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It is has a good story and chapter are great to read.expexpeexp. You will not regret it unless you are one piece fan....but sadly the updating is slow
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ネタバレを明かすThe best One Piece Fan Fic I read so far (only 4), my real only complaint is that the MCs become way too powerful quickly, already haki and devil fruit... (>\/\&///\/\&&)+)&)&)&/)&)&&//)&//)///)&/))))^&&&&
The writing quality is good. But the story development is very weird no explanation in my aspect things. Time skips in wrongs times. Anyway I had to drop. Hope for the best Aurthor don’t get disappointed I just my personal opinion. Thank you.
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