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HolyDK
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Rovontheus

I'd rather read mtl. The author didn't explain anything Whos the old man? How did mc become strong? He recruited the backstabber (bigmom) while mc is just a lil brat compared to a Yonko so idk if the mc have a loose screw or not The author never explain about the background like which part of the kingdom did the mc lived with the orphanage and many more i cant be bother to type them all Its not like the author writing skills is horrible like those chinese translation its just his execution is so horrible and the way he writes it Its a waste of time

2yr
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Mr_neko

a fanfic without context and too many time skip. don't waste your time i read this because of the how high the views were but it's a waste of time.

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The_King_Potato

this had potential but it was ruined very quickly I dont mind am evil mc as long as he is being evil for evils sake I hate a unessasry evil mc doing evil because he can for pointless unjust reasons is just trash teir to the max ans should be banned

3yr
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Shino_Franz

Is there still no update?... Please don't drop this novel... This novel was one of the best fan fiction I've read Mm mm Mm mm mm Kkkmmm Kkkn Hahahdvsbsjsjnsjdhbss

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Ienor04

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MrYamcha

Best one piece fanfic wish it lasted longer.

4yr
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RavenClock

Really one of the ****ear fan fic on the site and if you disagree then go and get a check up I am really concerned for young Hbohglkhb kybiygihgiyf

4yr
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RainyLiquid2020

I really did like this story. I liked it a lot haha... Shame that you dropped it. I found it really interesting. There were somethings I didn't like, but the good outweighed the bad in my opinion. I think for a fanfiction it was done really well.

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Cookiecutter56

I am giving this book one star because it's a harem, it doesn't matter how good you try to make a story if it is a harem it's trash, it's like adding toppings to ****

4yr
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Om_Patel_4281

So we all agree that this story has been dropped.

4yr
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DarthVegito

The MC without any devil fruit pissed off two yonkos and escape but then he gets multiple devil fruits and becomes way to evil but not a good evil... it’s like the author is forcing it way to much and after he got the devil fruits he became sooooooooo weak it’s pathetic. Waste of time don’t read

4yr
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GrimsReaper

The storyline is awesome. There is finally an MC that doesn’t want to join Luffys crew, or take his crew. MC is ruthless and the story has pretty good humour.

4yr
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En_busca_de_harem

Lo mejor de lo mejor es la mega Boston y por supuesto la novela es una de las mejores que he leído en esta plataforma.gsyawgsusgs sus ah friday hay ido Dick Jesús todo ví digo Dick mc

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Steven_Beck_5008

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖

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DG2
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Not very good not very bad. Characters are a bit annoying to get use to. The MC doesn't act his mental age most of the time and takes away the whole SI feel.

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99prcntBibliophile

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BLACKSKYCONAN

It is has a good story and chapter are great to read.expexpeexp. You will not regret it unless you are one piece fan....but sadly the updating is slow

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Kiira97

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Titus17
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AnonymousX

Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel!

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Eslyna

The best One Piece Fan Fic I read so far (only 4), my real only complaint is that the MCs become way too powerful quickly, already haki and devil fruit... (>\/\&///\/\&&)+)&)&)&/)&)&&//)&//)///)&/))))^&&&&

5yr
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Vinay85
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The writing quality is good. But the story development is very weird no explanation in my aspect things. Time skips in wrongs times. Anyway I had to drop. Hope for the best Aurthor don’t get disappointed I just my personal opinion. Thank you.

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michael7022

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kenkaneki123

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5yr
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zen_garden

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NewManagement

It had potential but for an op Mc he was so full of himself that it made him week. For someone who knows the story(Mc). He is an idiot and at times just doesn’t really dumb stuff. But looks like it has been dropped so I wouldn’t waste your time here

5yr
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HolyDK
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Rovontheus

I'd rather read mtl. The author didn't explain anything Whos the old man? How did mc become strong? He recruited the backstabber (bigmom) while mc is just a lil brat compared to a Yonko so idk if the mc have a loose screw or not The author never explain about the background like which part of the kingdom did the mc lived with the orphanage and many more i cant be bother to type them all Its not like the author writing skills is horrible like those chinese translation its just his execution is so horrible and the way he writes it Its a waste of time

2yr
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Mr_neko

a fanfic without context and too many time skip. don't waste your time i read this because of the how high the views were but it's a waste of time.

2yr
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The_King_Potato

this had potential but it was ruined very quickly I dont mind am evil mc as long as he is being evil for evils sake I hate a unessasry evil mc doing evil because he can for pointless unjust reasons is just trash teir to the max ans should be banned

3yr
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Shino_Franz

Is there still no update?... Please don't drop this novel... This novel was one of the best fan fiction I've read Mm mm Mm mm mm Kkkmmm Kkkn Hahahdvsbsjsjnsjdhbss

3yr
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Ienor04

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3yr
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MrYamcha

Best one piece fanfic wish it lasted longer.

4yr
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RavenClock

Really one of the ****ear fan fic on the site and if you disagree then go and get a check up I am really concerned for young Hbohglkhb kybiygihgiyf

4yr
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RainyLiquid2020

I really did like this story. I liked it a lot haha... Shame that you dropped it. I found it really interesting. There were somethings I didn't like, but the good outweighed the bad in my opinion. I think for a fanfiction it was done really well.

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Cookiecutter56

I am giving this book one star because it's a harem, it doesn't matter how good you try to make a story if it is a harem it's trash, it's like adding toppings to ****

4yr
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Om_Patel_4281

So we all agree that this story has been dropped.

4yr
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DarthVegito

The MC without any devil fruit pissed off two yonkos and escape but then he gets multiple devil fruits and becomes way to evil but not a good evil... it’s like the author is forcing it way to much and after he got the devil fruits he became sooooooooo weak it’s pathetic. Waste of time don’t read

4yr
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GrimsReaper

The storyline is awesome. There is finally an MC that doesn’t want to join Luffys crew, or take his crew. MC is ruthless and the story has pretty good humour.

4yr
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En_busca_de_harem

Lo mejor de lo mejor es la mega Boston y por supuesto la novela es una de las mejores que he leído en esta plataforma.gsyawgsusgs sus ah friday hay ido Dick Jesús todo ví digo Dick mc

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4yr
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Steven_Beck_5008

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖

4yr
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DG2
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Not very good not very bad. Characters are a bit annoying to get use to. The MC doesn't act his mental age most of the time and takes away the whole SI feel.

5yr
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99prcntBibliophile

More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please More please

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BLACKSKYCONAN

It is has a good story and chapter are great to read.expexpeexp. You will not regret it unless you are one piece fan....but sadly the updating is slow

5yr
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Kiira97

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Rouge_Prince1738

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Titus17
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Titus17
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Titus17
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AnonymousX

Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel!

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Eslyna

The best One Piece Fan Fic I read so far (only 4), my real only complaint is that the MCs become way too powerful quickly, already haki and devil fruit... (>\/\&///\/\&&)+)&)&)&/)&)&&//)&//)///)&/))))^&&&&

5yr
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Vinay85
LV 14 Badge

The writing quality is good. But the story development is very weird no explanation in my aspect things. Time skips in wrongs times. Anyway I had to drop. Hope for the best Aurthor don’t get disappointed I just my personal opinion. Thank you.

5yr
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michael7022

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kenkaneki123

more more more more more more more more more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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zen_garden

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NewManagement

It had potential but for an op Mc he was so full of himself that it made him week. For someone who knows the story(Mc). He is an idiot and at times just doesn’t really dumb stuff. But looks like it has been dropped so I wouldn’t waste your time here

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