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章 15: I will learn Jiu-Jitsu?

Following the girl inside I see a large room with the floor completely made of mats.

Inside I see a man standing with a black kimono with some sponsor images. On his back there are 20 people seated, several men and some women.

When the man stands watching us arrive, he waves to the girl and she approaches him to explain what is happening. When he understands that I wanna see how the class is, he opens a smile and approaches me.

"Hello! I am Professor Eduardo. May I know your name? "He asks me with a smile that surprises me.

'I thought a fighting teacher would be more aggressive. 'I think as I respond with a smile. "Hello! I call myself Zhanye. "

"Okay, our class is about to start, I see you don't have a kimono right? Do you wanna use one of ours? "He says.

"It would be perfect." I say as I walk over to the girl again to wear the kimono.

When I see the kimono I get a white band to tie at the waist.

Arriving in the room I see that everyone is standing, looking at their waists it seems that most are also white band like me.

Seeing me, the teacher beckons to me as I arrive and stay with the others.

"Well, in today's class I'm gonna teach you Forward Roll. First, for a perfect bearing you should always place your chin down, in a position that touches your chest, "he says as he lowers his chin.

"Second, you rest your head on the ground and after the turn you hit the ground to cushion the impact. Why cushion the teacher impact? Not to press either your back or your heart to fall. "He says as he bends down and makes a Forward Roll.

So the class is moving forward, mostly with more basic techniques, since the vast majority of us here have never learned Jiu-Jitsu.

At the end of class I see many students panting for so many exercises but for me it's like walking in the park. One thing I started to wonder was that the five female students began to look at me strangely after I made some bearings, but I ignored them.

At the end of the class I decided to check my status to see my progress. 'Status' I thought.

-Zhanye Black

CHARM: 56/100

AGI: 67/100 (65/100)

STR: 53/100 (51/100)

INT: 75/100

LUCKY: ??

Cooking: 75/100

God's Arena: 68/100

Exercises: 49/100

Voice: 41/100

Driving: 45/100

Piano: 59/100

Heal: 05/100

Jiu-Jitsu: 00/100 -> 12/100

Points to distribute: 0

Proficiency and Distribute: 30.

Looking at my Jiu-Jitsu proficiency I was surprised. It seems like when you are learning from a professional, proficiency goes up faster. It's just like it happened when I learned piano with my grandfather.

When I'm about to take off my kimono I see the teacher approaching me.

"Hey boy, how did you like it?" He smiles.

"To be honest, I was very surprised. I figured it would be pretty much an MMA ring with a lot of people fighting, but it's a lot better than Imaignei hahaha. "I laugh as I scratch the back of my neck.

"Haha, everyone thinks so. I noticed that you learn very fast, while I had to explain to others 5 or 6 times, you only heard once and already learned. Have you ever trained in a martial style before? "He asks.

"None. Actually this is my first time training something, "I say.

"Now you surprised me kid, you wanna join us? I'm sure you will become a great teacher if you train hard. You have a lot of potential. " He says as he puts his hand on my shoulder.

"I enjoyed the lessons, I'm gonna make my application at the reception to come to the next classes," I say.

"How nice! But next time, come with a kimono. This kimono got really big on you and your body ended up distracting the female students hahaha, "he says as he patted my shoulder.

'Now I understood why they kept looking at me like I was a piece of meat. 'I say as I swallow a little saliva.

After taking a shower and changing clothes I go to the reception and make my registration. The classes will be Sunday, Tuesday and Thursday. When I look at the time I see that it takes five minutes for Jenny to leave work.

Arriving in front of the shop she works, I see her leaving while looking for someone.

When I wave at her, she opens a smile and walks toward me.

"So, what are we gonna do?" She asks curiously.

"Hmm, how about we go get an ice cream?" I say as I see an ice cream parlor on the other side of the street.

"Of course, I know the best ice cream there." She says as we walk in that direction.

Arriving there she orders two oreo ice cream with dulce de leche. Sitting down to eat I really am surprised at the taste. "It's very good!" I say as I stick a spoon into my mouth.

"I told you!" She says as she eats a spoonful as well. "You know, if I'd known you were gonna that party a month ago, I'd have asked for time off too. My friends called me, but I didn't wanna go. "She says as she takes theice cream.

"I would be glad to meet you there, I went with a friend of mine. There he introduced me to his friends. They were really fun, I even went up on stage to sing like you might have seen in some video on the internet. "I say laughing as I lick the side of the glass so I don't spill ice cream.

"Yeah, I definitely saw you coming up on stage and rapping as you encouraged the audience to sing that song. You have no idea how surprised I was to see that you are the singer of those songs, really. And I was even more surprised when I saw that you were wearing a outfit that I chose to record Photographs and the other one to sing her on stage. "She says excitedly.

"Yes haha, it can be said that my Photographs costumes were entirely chosen by you my personal stylist." I say as I blink.

She gets a little red and responds "Personal stylist? You're gonna have to get a lot more famous so you can hire me, my dear. "She says as she points the spoon at me and I start to laugh.

"Yeah, but without knowing you were the stylist for another song," I say as I point to the bags.

"A song? Which? Do you sing to me? "She says excitedly.

Seeing her so excited there's no way I can say no. So I start singing 'In My Blood', which I sang in the hospital for her today.

When I finish the song I see that she has red eyes.

"What is it?" I ask as I take out a handkerchief and approach to wipe away her tears.

Seeing me so close she gets scared but lets me dry her tears after saying "Idiot." Very softly and open a small smile on her face.

"This song of yours ... It reminded me of the times I wanted to quit my job. My family doesn't have much money and I always wanted a buck to go out with my friends and have fun but my parents didn't have. So I always worked hard to keep this job. Even with all the humiliation I've ever had, after hearing that song I felt it was worth it. "She says as she opens a big smile and holds my hand close to her face.

Seeing that I hold the handkerchief with my little finger and caress his cheek as I approach his face. When I'm right up close I hold your face and kiss your forehead. "I think we should go, right?" I say as I agree to his stupor.

"Yes, come on!" She says with a smile.

"I really don't wanna date anyone for now, but I don't mind keeping some girls out of engagement." I think as I pay the bill and look at the beautiful blonde girl waiting outside.


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