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I wasn't 100% on board at the start of it, but I kept going and I'm glad I did. I wasn't sure about the style but he changed it later on and the story is very much worth it! Despite some errors in the beginning, this work is expertly crafted. The world building is spectacular and every chapter has a sense of wonder to it. Every sentence is valuable this way because it opens up so many possibilities. Honestly I'd recommend this to anyone. These are the types of stories wn needs more of.
Best story I've read so far It gets better the deeper you go more readable when the names before each sentence is dropped later on. The plot is very good and the characters are better than most stories on wn. Just continue on past the beginning chapters and see if you like it. The most recent chapters are some of the best
loving it so far cant wait for pt 2 of ledgers journey, its hard to pick a fave MC when all of them are fun to read about. i think im inlove with freya. such a funny character. i would be her summoner any day of the week
When I first read their conversation and the Angel's reason, I unconsciously facepalmed. I hope you can physically feel it as you read this. But as I continue reading this made me giggle like a child. Imagine a 20 year old grown man rolling in his bed and giggling. I'll go back and read the rest. Cheers P.S. Thank you for the laughs, Mr./Ms. Author.
liking it so far keep going! interested to see more amelia chapters i got to say the characters are great and the story captivating this point. it is a good mix of serious and funny
It's great so far. I'm really enjoying the premise about the "Fatal Chapters" and having MCs killed off. All of the main characters are good and the author seems to be having a lot of fun. The chapters that are comedy are ACTUALLY FUNNY, and the chapters that are supposed to be dark aren't edgy or trying to be cool. It's all done very very well. I could see this being a show one day if it continues at this quality but I just need more chapters to really form opinions on the MCs and the plot still very early in but I like where it's all going Recommended to fans of these tags.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I wasn't 100% on board at the start of it, but I kept going and I'm glad I did. I wasn't sure about the style but he changed it later on and the story is very much worth it! Despite some errors in the beginning, this work is expertly crafted. The world building is spectacular and every chapter has a sense of wonder to it. Every sentence is valuable this way because it opens up so many possibilities. Honestly I'd recommend this to anyone. These are the types of stories wn needs more of.
Best story I've read so far It gets better the deeper you go more readable when the names before each sentence is dropped later on. The plot is very good and the characters are better than most stories on wn. Just continue on past the beginning chapters and see if you like it. The most recent chapters are some of the best
loving it so far cant wait for pt 2 of ledgers journey, its hard to pick a fave MC when all of them are fun to read about. i think im inlove with freya. such a funny character. i would be her summoner any day of the week
When I first read their conversation and the Angel's reason, I unconsciously facepalmed. I hope you can physically feel it as you read this. But as I continue reading this made me giggle like a child. Imagine a 20 year old grown man rolling in his bed and giggling. I'll go back and read the rest. Cheers P.S. Thank you for the laughs, Mr./Ms. Author.
liking it so far keep going! interested to see more amelia chapters i got to say the characters are great and the story captivating this point. it is a good mix of serious and funny
It's great so far. I'm really enjoying the premise about the "Fatal Chapters" and having MCs killed off. All of the main characters are good and the author seems to be having a lot of fun. The chapters that are comedy are ACTUALLY FUNNY, and the chapters that are supposed to be dark aren't edgy or trying to be cool. It's all done very very well. I could see this being a show one day if it continues at this quality but I just need more chapters to really form opinions on the MCs and the plot still very early in but I like where it's all going Recommended to fans of these tags.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.