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Long Live System

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作者: Tonyorobsky

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A guy died and took over the body of Yue Yang in Long Live Summon.
And he got a gamer cheat on top of that.

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WolfLord

So far so good I hope you can avoid the pitfalls of the original MC and removed from the absolute arrogance and a little bit more focus on the summons as opposed to the martial arts I thought it was strange that the original series it was more like the summons were put into the backgrounds rather than the mean hi was always surprised that it was called long live summons

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Shadow_king_393

Let me correct one thing for try to put the sword spirit back because it's not with yue yang it's in his bloodline so try to put it back it'll be easier making him strong

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Delem
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Dear author, I wait for the continuation of the story.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

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Delem
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I look forward to the continuation of the story, hopefully you can continue the story. Thank you and please continue the story Spirit 🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍🙏👍👍👍🙏👍👍🙏👍🙏👍🙏👍👍🙏👍👍🙏🙏👍🙏🙏👍👍👍🙏

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Urek_Mazino_7841

Don't dropped please😌👍👍👍 Udfkglblghxkglhkxlhjdlh Udfkglblghxkglhkxlhjdlh UdfkglblghxkglhkxlhjdlhUdfkglblghxkglhkxlhjdlhUdfkglblghxkglhkxlhjdlhUdfkglblghxkglhkxlhjdlh

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4bidienkingdom

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musti48

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manas1234u

amazing story.....though i dont know about this game or manga but it sound interesting....so main lead is reincarnated or should i say trasmigarated into an ***** body....and he got gaming ability...he is imroving way too fast but its realy good..

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Nox_Ater

As someone who is also trying to be a writer I know the struggle of a part time writers as there are other things to do in real life. But also as a greedy reader I want MOAR quickly. XD Atleast please post 1 ch per week :') Personally I thought LLS original is a bit rushed at ending as there are still things to exploit and I want you to continue them... Thanks for the novel BTW

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EmbarrassedEdge

It's good, you should read it..... .... .... .... ...... ...... ...... ..... ....... ...... ...... ....... ....... ........ ..... ...... ...... .....

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Spencer_Music

I really wish you would consider continuing this fan fiction. There are not many good LLS fan fictions and I really enjoyed this one.

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Escultor

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Escultor

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Spencer_Music

I absolutely love both long live summons and the gamer individually. Having both of them mixed together is absolutely amazing. I truly hope that the author keeps up the good work.

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King_Lich

Waiting for more chapters please update soon. Yue yang in the original let yue Bing and yue yu get away. However now thanks to I can fulfill this fantasy of mine😁

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Steven1998

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hight999fantasy

update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update

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Kiips
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Really love the original story so I'm always happy when there is someone who take Long Live Summon to make their fanfic. This story is interesting enough to follow. I just wish that the MC do not let an occasion to take an Harem membre no matter age or backgroud, if he his true man in a fantasy backgroud and the girl(s) is/are beautiful, cute or both he should take here for himself! There still no disapointment in this aspect but better give a warning than be sorry.

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