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denthoughts

Thank you for checking out this story. Though I have novels that I am working on, plus school, plus other things, rest assured I will not drop this one. If there are any issues with the update, do not worry I will return!

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fire_finder

Some grammatical and syntax issues, and in some places hard to understand, but overall a great book. If it was finished, that would be awesome but she hasn’t uploaded in almost a year, so don’t expect anything, enjoy it for what it is, and be prepared to not know the ending. The beginning was a little too slow, almost 80ish chapters devoted to like, one day in the book, which is excessive. It picks up as far as time frame as it goes on. It’s hard to know who the “main” character is as it gets side tracked by another two characters stories, that, while essential to the plot, vie for the position of lead. Physical descriptions could use a little work, with things like color, size, texture and just appearance over all. For an armature writer, she’s pretty good, and for her well edited chapters, great. Tbh, if she worked on some of the stuff above mentioned, she could get this published by a real book company- the story is great so far. I’d love to see how it ends, so I hope she finishes it soon. With an ending, and better editing, 9/10. The way it stands now, 7/10. Either way, better than half the stuff in here. Good job author. ✌️

4yr
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joug
LV 11 Badge

96 chapters in and the "opening scene" is still going. The characters are stubborn, stupid and unable to make desicions which makes this one unbearably longwinded. World build and political decision making are there and promising but the characters inability to do anything ruins the whole thing. It is not as bad as bold and the beautiful but I cant help making comparison while reading. Until chap 96, there doesnt seem to be even 1 wise, thought through, normal, stubborn, beneficial, smart, firm or even accidental decision made by a character that would take the storytelling forward...

4yr
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Yunduk
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please update as soon as possible and keep up the good work. ❤

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zayyan_Bello

Author u should really update dis novel it's my favorite nd I feel so heartbroken DAT there r no constant updates I know it's hard but pls nd keep up the good work

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Aniya_Johnson

Main character is a bit hard to understand and comes off as a mean person. But as the story progresses she becomes a funny face slapper who relies on her golden thigh mate. I like the development of the romance between Meili and Cheng.

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AmberOfLightW

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😁😁🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😥😣😣😣😣😣😣🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐😐😐😐😐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐😟😟😟😟🙁🙁🙁🙁☹☹☹☹

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0318andrea

So far so good. I've only read a little so far. Albeit it's a little slow in the beginning but I believe that the storyline will pick up later on.

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Julie_Brown_5453

Plot is great, lots of twist and turns. Memorable well flushed out characters. I love the complexity of their interactions. Only issue is the introduction of the Intergalactic Ships Crew from the scenes on the planet, it kind of feels like you're reading 2 different books.

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AmberOfLightW

Interesting story 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😄🤗😄🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💁‍♂️💚💚💚💚💚💚

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Yaqueline

Me encanta esta historia, espero actualices pronto, la estamos esperando con muchas ansias de más cada dia.... xD 🙏✨💖💖💖🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃

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Julie_Brown_5453

This Book is an Absolute Jem and a must read for anyone who enjoys slice of life romantic comedies. The plot twist and turns are action packed and the funny reactions between all the Bold and Colorful Characters will keep you on the edge of your seat rolling with laughter. You definitely can't go wrong picking up this great read!

4yr
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RkArnold

I have really enjoyed the character and plot development. I'm sad to know that this book is not going to be finished. I hope sincerely that decision was not based on the comment whiners who cant seem to follow complicated plots. I hope the writing and translation gets picked back up in the near future and I will continue to vote for this novel bc it is unique in story and character. In a world of trans migration and cultivation stories a story about shape shifting dragons and hot space mages is a riot!

4yr
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Daoist088911

I'm always looking for the new chapter I even check 4 times a day if on on a reading binge rush. As a author who just got started writing I am always scared to put my work out then I look to the ones who have and wish that I someday will be like them being able to keep people hooked and asking for more. Congratulations you are one of those authors.

4yr
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Daoist680973

This is a nice read hopefully a large amount of chapters will be released I hate having to wait it’s been a while since the last chapter please.

4yr
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Jamine_Robinson

fun and entertaining story very interesting so far so good but I do wish the chapters were a little longer but still a good read so if you looking for action look no farther

4yr
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Katrice_Robinson

Exciting thrilling drama filled book with lots of funny moments and action and romance you would enjoy it just give it a try but the chapters are kind of short

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Katrice_Robinson

Very interesting and exciting story to read strong female characters and really funny moments but I will say that the chapters updates is pretty short but otherwise still a pretty good read

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demented1

I am still reading that goes to show that you, Writer, have captivated my short attention span mind. I am glad that read this book. Please continue with the updates.

4yr
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demented1

This is a great story, well written and it is a page turner. I am hooked to the story which is very interesting and intriguing. Thank you very much writer.

4yr
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sweettia

What happens when you get a strong minded female and a prideful yet doting dragon mate? Sparks, literally! It has been an adventure from the first moment LONG cheng opens his eyes and is led on a chase by his mate. So far, our female lead is weakening but she she still stays strong.

4yr
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Foxy55
LV 11 Badge

Can't wait to see how the story turns out it's great so far. 😊 I would like to see more of the love story parts play out a little more because right now it's a lot of complications happening which seems like it's lasting for a long time but I think that's just because the chapters are only so long

4yr
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Javaria_Hanan

She's a great one in our writing industry. An ability to engage the reader with her interesting characters and mischievous events. Unexpected surprises are a part of her writing style with some major climaxes. In general, she's awsome.

4yr
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Capaula3

Love it so far its amusing and leaves u wondering what's next! ................. ..................................... .............................. .................

4yr
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littleemerald

The first couple chapters are very well written and really draw you in. But there are a couple of other chapters I felt like I was missing something important. Like it jumped from one thing to the next where it should have transitioned. So sometimes it's hard to understand what's going on. There also seem to be more spelling mistakes and incorrect word usage. The idea of this story is fascinating. I understand the author is doing a lot. I'm also not sure if it's translated from another language into English or not. I also really like how it switched from the female lead point of view to the crew. It made me want to keep reading to see how the crew and our dragon taming FL tied together. Which is where I'm at now in the story. It was done very nicely. Aside from some minor grammar issues. Keep up the good work author. I hope it gets much better. And if you are still reading through this long review, I thank you for the story. 😄

4yr
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resendizshattuck

I like the story and I can follow but I think we need a little more background story or information. This is a race of space traveling people in a dragon-type civilization planet. So I need a little more background to understand certain thing. Like the mating ritual is talked about but they don’t explain what it entails.

4yr
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Noodle_lover123

Verrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy interesting! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

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resendizshattuck

Hoping this is story is great will update review later. I liked the synopsis so I hope this is a good story. Haven’t read anything else from this author so looking forward to it.

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Kristina_Lane

Riviting storyline!!!! Almost impossible to put down!!!! In some of the chapter comment seems people have an issue with the updating, but I see it as it takes a lot to build a world with words!!!! And brilliance takes time. When you rush an author you can't expect their best works!!!! I applaud the auther for making this story line reallycome to life.

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mazy_williams

Pretty good book so far cant wait to see how it plays out between them!!!!!!💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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SecureTheUnway

Love the MC she is tough and the ML pov on how much he wants her. Also, the side characters are great too alongside the space setting. Great potential this story.

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denthoughts

Thank you for checking out this story. Though I have novels that I am working on, plus school, plus other things, rest assured I will not drop this one. If there are any issues with the update, do not worry I will return!

5yr
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fire_finder

Some grammatical and syntax issues, and in some places hard to understand, but overall a great book. If it was finished, that would be awesome but she hasn’t uploaded in almost a year, so don’t expect anything, enjoy it for what it is, and be prepared to not know the ending. The beginning was a little too slow, almost 80ish chapters devoted to like, one day in the book, which is excessive. It picks up as far as time frame as it goes on. It’s hard to know who the “main” character is as it gets side tracked by another two characters stories, that, while essential to the plot, vie for the position of lead. Physical descriptions could use a little work, with things like color, size, texture and just appearance over all. For an armature writer, she’s pretty good, and for her well edited chapters, great. Tbh, if she worked on some of the stuff above mentioned, she could get this published by a real book company- the story is great so far. I’d love to see how it ends, so I hope she finishes it soon. With an ending, and better editing, 9/10. The way it stands now, 7/10. Either way, better than half the stuff in here. Good job author. ✌️

4yr
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joug
LV 11 Badge

96 chapters in and the "opening scene" is still going. The characters are stubborn, stupid and unable to make desicions which makes this one unbearably longwinded. World build and political decision making are there and promising but the characters inability to do anything ruins the whole thing. It is not as bad as bold and the beautiful but I cant help making comparison while reading. Until chap 96, there doesnt seem to be even 1 wise, thought through, normal, stubborn, beneficial, smart, firm or even accidental decision made by a character that would take the storytelling forward...

4yr
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Yunduk
LV 15 Badge

please update as soon as possible and keep up the good work. ❤

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zayyan_Bello

Author u should really update dis novel it's my favorite nd I feel so heartbroken DAT there r no constant updates I know it's hard but pls nd keep up the good work

4yr
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Aniya_Johnson

Main character is a bit hard to understand and comes off as a mean person. But as the story progresses she becomes a funny face slapper who relies on her golden thigh mate. I like the development of the romance between Meili and Cheng.

4yr
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AmberOfLightW

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😁😁🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😥😣😣😣😣😣😣🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐😐😐😐😐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐😟😟😟😟🙁🙁🙁🙁☹☹☹☹

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0318andrea

So far so good. I've only read a little so far. Albeit it's a little slow in the beginning but I believe that the storyline will pick up later on.

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Julie_Brown_5453

Plot is great, lots of twist and turns. Memorable well flushed out characters. I love the complexity of their interactions. Only issue is the introduction of the Intergalactic Ships Crew from the scenes on the planet, it kind of feels like you're reading 2 different books.

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AmberOfLightW

Interesting story 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😄🤗😄🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💁‍♂️💚💚💚💚💚💚

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Yaqueline

Me encanta esta historia, espero actualices pronto, la estamos esperando con muchas ansias de más cada dia.... xD 🙏✨💖💖💖🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃

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Julie_Brown_5453

This Book is an Absolute Jem and a must read for anyone who enjoys slice of life romantic comedies. The plot twist and turns are action packed and the funny reactions between all the Bold and Colorful Characters will keep you on the edge of your seat rolling with laughter. You definitely can't go wrong picking up this great read!

4yr
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RkArnold

I have really enjoyed the character and plot development. I'm sad to know that this book is not going to be finished. I hope sincerely that decision was not based on the comment whiners who cant seem to follow complicated plots. I hope the writing and translation gets picked back up in the near future and I will continue to vote for this novel bc it is unique in story and character. In a world of trans migration and cultivation stories a story about shape shifting dragons and hot space mages is a riot!

4yr
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Daoist088911

I'm always looking for the new chapter I even check 4 times a day if on on a reading binge rush. As a author who just got started writing I am always scared to put my work out then I look to the ones who have and wish that I someday will be like them being able to keep people hooked and asking for more. Congratulations you are one of those authors.

4yr
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Daoist680973

This is a nice read hopefully a large amount of chapters will be released I hate having to wait it’s been a while since the last chapter please.

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Jamine_Robinson

fun and entertaining story very interesting so far so good but I do wish the chapters were a little longer but still a good read so if you looking for action look no farther

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Katrice_Robinson

Exciting thrilling drama filled book with lots of funny moments and action and romance you would enjoy it just give it a try but the chapters are kind of short

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Katrice_Robinson

Very interesting and exciting story to read strong female characters and really funny moments but I will say that the chapters updates is pretty short but otherwise still a pretty good read

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demented1

I am still reading that goes to show that you, Writer, have captivated my short attention span mind. I am glad that read this book. Please continue with the updates.

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demented1

This is a great story, well written and it is a page turner. I am hooked to the story which is very interesting and intriguing. Thank you very much writer.

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sweettia

What happens when you get a strong minded female and a prideful yet doting dragon mate? Sparks, literally! It has been an adventure from the first moment LONG cheng opens his eyes and is led on a chase by his mate. So far, our female lead is weakening but she she still stays strong.

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Foxy55
LV 11 Badge

Can't wait to see how the story turns out it's great so far. 😊 I would like to see more of the love story parts play out a little more because right now it's a lot of complications happening which seems like it's lasting for a long time but I think that's just because the chapters are only so long

4yr
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Javaria_Hanan

She's a great one in our writing industry. An ability to engage the reader with her interesting characters and mischievous events. Unexpected surprises are a part of her writing style with some major climaxes. In general, she's awsome.

4yr
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Capaula3

Love it so far its amusing and leaves u wondering what's next! ................. ..................................... .............................. .................

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littleemerald

The first couple chapters are very well written and really draw you in. But there are a couple of other chapters I felt like I was missing something important. Like it jumped from one thing to the next where it should have transitioned. So sometimes it's hard to understand what's going on. There also seem to be more spelling mistakes and incorrect word usage. The idea of this story is fascinating. I understand the author is doing a lot. I'm also not sure if it's translated from another language into English or not. I also really like how it switched from the female lead point of view to the crew. It made me want to keep reading to see how the crew and our dragon taming FL tied together. Which is where I'm at now in the story. It was done very nicely. Aside from some minor grammar issues. Keep up the good work author. I hope it gets much better. And if you are still reading through this long review, I thank you for the story. 😄

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resendizshattuck

I like the story and I can follow but I think we need a little more background story or information. This is a race of space traveling people in a dragon-type civilization planet. So I need a little more background to understand certain thing. Like the mating ritual is talked about but they don’t explain what it entails.

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Noodle_lover123

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resendizshattuck

Hoping this is story is great will update review later. I liked the synopsis so I hope this is a good story. Haven’t read anything else from this author so looking forward to it.

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Kristina_Lane

Riviting storyline!!!! Almost impossible to put down!!!! In some of the chapter comment seems people have an issue with the updating, but I see it as it takes a lot to build a world with words!!!! And brilliance takes time. When you rush an author you can't expect their best works!!!! I applaud the auther for making this story line reallycome to life.

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mazy_williams

Pretty good book so far cant wait to see how it plays out between them!!!!!!💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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SecureTheUnway

Love the MC she is tough and the ML pov on how much he wants her. Also, the side characters are great too alongside the space setting. Great potential this story.

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