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WAIT ?! THE THREE OF US ?

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作者: Toya_kinomoto

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Me: well what the title says. three friends transmigrated to a game that they didn't want to.
Lyra: yeah, we didn't
Jennie: sorry
Millie: ok enough. Be ready
Jennie/ Lyra/ me: yes madam
Millie: ... you too
me: tehhee

Me: sorry for the grammar, English it's not my mother tongue. i hope to learn more while i am writing
Also i don't own the cover

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1.Writing quality: Easy to read thanks to clear seperated paragraphs, it's always mentioned who speaks and not many grammar mistakes (You'll most likely find more in my review than in the story) 2.Stability of Updating: 6 chapters in 2 months is not bad at all, iff we have to wait 3 months for every 6 chapters then it's still more regular than most, also they never made any hollow promises so for me a 4. 3.Story development: So far very intriguing, a transmigration with 3 mc's and quit a plot twist for them, read more for the plot twist, I certainly enjoyed it~ 4.Character design: 3 unique mc's with no overused cliche, so yeah 5 points for unique and realistic characters. 5.World background: Since there are currently only 6 chapters, there was no in detail explanation for everything. But everything important for us as readers, that we need to know where the story is going, was explained including the mc's situation. So the final mark is: A 4.8,you should stalk this story :3

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