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This LN is a trope. It's stupidly funny. The gender bender part is great. Gawddd... Are you s tand up comedian irl? -- -- - - - - - - - - - -
So.. I'll have to say, that after 37 chaptersI felt extremely bored and even skipped more than half of some chapters. This story really hooked me in the beginning but then it started going downhill, I'll not spoiler it but there was a bonding scene that had me almost crying. The characters are all somewhat interesting, but the author just keeps introducing them too fast making you wonder each time 'So this is the guy that knows the MC and is somehow stronger?' Which just kills interest in the past characters, I really like the relation between a certain young master and the MC but nowadays? I feel extremely irritated by how many chapters focusing only on the young master, not on his strange relation with the MC, but only his relation with plain boring side characters. If the author could rewrite everything I would be extremely happy, but I know that is almost impossible, so if you like naruto, kiba, hinata, shino, a lot of cultivators and a whole bunch of jokes(some good, most bad) then this novel is for you! Ps: FORCED GENDER BEND!!! MC IS FEMALE!!
This story is good. Interactions are much better then most of the stories people have made on this site. The gender bend caught me off guard when I read it, however, whether its male or female it does not mean anything as long as the story is entertaining. I hope to see you finish this story from start to end. =)
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Seemed like a decent story til admiral Ackbar's famous line became relevant. In other words, gen bent trash. Well written trash, but still gender bent and therefore trash.
Had potential but that gender reveal screwed up. Droped this one. You should probable add female protagonist as a tag so that people don't get misleaded into thinking that the protagonist is anything other than a girl.
Your idea seem interesting.... i interested in reading this....... i also have idea similar to this... i mean reincarnate into tailed beast...... unfortunately i still cant write it.... so its good to read it....
well slow paced but a good read ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's another Naruto fanfic but this one involves wuxia elements and a combination of naruto world details. Well, it is fun to read. WQ is well readable. SU seems ok but I still need more. SD is great a strong MC who is not interested in the political essence of Naruto just focus on getting stronger and interacting with the characters. CD development of the MC is great it really fit the story and its funny especially the interaction with the 5 tails. WB its a naruto world so no need to explain anything.
Y si no es la María por Y si no es la María por qué me dicen si queda bien el siguiente enlace y no me ha llegado el momento no se puede hacer en el carro está a la espera del envío del producto de la empresa que me lo que me lo que se me ha él no se ha enviado a la en la tarde a las que no se ha lo de los que se le ha dado la voz del pueblo
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Very enjoyable. Love the interactions between the characters. Better grammar than 90% of the stuff on this website. It's very funny, and I would at least give it a try.
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pulse help me I don't know how to send gifts to fanfiction novel pls help me oh and I really like your story except the part were akamaru turns into a girl the other parts are interesting but that part almost ruined the story for me
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I AM Brazilian . Estou copiando outra crítica. Mais que mostra meus sentimentos do mesmo jeito. A nice fan-fiction with an amazing merge of differents genre. The writing quality is excellent, the reactions are well made. And the plot is pretty interesting. It contains some exotic ideas, well appreciated by me and some people out there as it give the novel a sense of novelty and freshness from the chliché types that exist here in qidian. Keep the nice work author, I placed my chips all on you for this 😸 Waking Up With Five-Tails
Great novel I love it '-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-' '-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'
Entertaining: yes Funny: yes Mc seems sorta *****: yes Tailed beast is tsundere: yes Mc is confused and its really funny: yes The 140 charecter thing is annoying as fck: yes Im gonna keep going: yes
A nice fan-fiction with an amazing merge of differents genre. The writing quality is excellent, the reactions are well made. And the plot is pretty interesting. It contains some exotic ideas, well appreciated by me and some people out there as it give the novel a sense of novelty and freshness from the chliché types that exist here in qidian. Keep the nice work author, I placed my chips all on you for this 😸
Este es un muy buen fic. Es muy interesante y vale la pena leerlo. This is a very good FIC. It is very interesting and it is worth reading it.
This LN is a trope. It's stupidly funny. The gender bender part is great. Gawddd... Are you s tand up comedian irl? -- -- - - - - - - - - - -
So.. I'll have to say, that after 37 chaptersI felt extremely bored and even skipped more than half of some chapters. This story really hooked me in the beginning but then it started going downhill, I'll not spoiler it but there was a bonding scene that had me almost crying. The characters are all somewhat interesting, but the author just keeps introducing them too fast making you wonder each time 'So this is the guy that knows the MC and is somehow stronger?' Which just kills interest in the past characters, I really like the relation between a certain young master and the MC but nowadays? I feel extremely irritated by how many chapters focusing only on the young master, not on his strange relation with the MC, but only his relation with plain boring side characters. If the author could rewrite everything I would be extremely happy, but I know that is almost impossible, so if you like naruto, kiba, hinata, shino, a lot of cultivators and a whole bunch of jokes(some good, most bad) then this novel is for you! Ps: FORCED GENDER BEND!!! MC IS FEMALE!!
This story is good. Interactions are much better then most of the stories people have made on this site. The gender bend caught me off guard when I read it, however, whether its male or female it does not mean anything as long as the story is entertaining. I hope to see you finish this story from start to end. =)
Hahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahhahahahahhahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhaahhahahaahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahhahahahahhahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhaahhahahaahahh
Seemed like a decent story til admiral Ackbar's famous line became relevant. In other words, gen bent trash. Well written trash, but still gender bent and therefore trash.
Had potential but that gender reveal screwed up. Droped this one. You should probable add female protagonist as a tag so that people don't get misleaded into thinking that the protagonist is anything other than a girl.
Your idea seem interesting.... i interested in reading this....... i also have idea similar to this... i mean reincarnate into tailed beast...... unfortunately i still cant write it.... so its good to read it....
well slow paced but a good read ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's another Naruto fanfic but this one involves wuxia elements and a combination of naruto world details. Well, it is fun to read. WQ is well readable. SU seems ok but I still need more. SD is great a strong MC who is not interested in the political essence of Naruto just focus on getting stronger and interacting with the characters. CD development of the MC is great it really fit the story and its funny especially the interaction with the 5 tails. WB its a naruto world so no need to explain anything.
Y si no es la María por Y si no es la María por qué me dicen si queda bien el siguiente enlace y no me ha llegado el momento no se puede hacer en el carro está a la espera del envío del producto de la empresa que me lo que me lo que se me ha él no se ha enviado a la en la tarde a las que no se ha lo de los que se le ha dado la voz del pueblo
ネタバレを明かす Very enjoyable. Love the interactions between the characters. Better grammar than 90% of the stuff on this website. It's very funny, and I would at least give it a try.
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pulse help me I don't know how to send gifts to fanfiction novel pls help me oh and I really like your story except the part were akamaru turns into a girl the other parts are interesting but that part almost ruined the story for me
ネタバレを明かす I AM Brazilian . Estou copiando outra crítica. Mais que mostra meus sentimentos do mesmo jeito. A nice fan-fiction with an amazing merge of differents genre. The writing quality is excellent, the reactions are well made. And the plot is pretty interesting. It contains some exotic ideas, well appreciated by me and some people out there as it give the novel a sense of novelty and freshness from the chliché types that exist here in qidian. Keep the nice work author, I placed my chips all on you for this 😸 Waking Up With Five-Tails
Great novel I love it '-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-' '-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'
Entertaining: yes Funny: yes Mc seems sorta *****: yes Tailed beast is tsundere: yes Mc is confused and its really funny: yes The 140 charecter thing is annoying as fck: yes Im gonna keep going: yes
A nice fan-fiction with an amazing merge of differents genre. The writing quality is excellent, the reactions are well made. And the plot is pretty interesting. It contains some exotic ideas, well appreciated by me and some people out there as it give the novel a sense of novelty and freshness from the chliché types that exist here in qidian. Keep the nice work author, I placed my chips all on you for this 😸
Este es un muy buen fic. Es muy interesante y vale la pena leerlo. This is a very good FIC. It is very interesting and it is worth reading it.