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Adam is killed in a parking lot and is sent to a world called ‘Owenheim’. He must fight for his own life and rebel against the corrupt system the gods had put in place during the Primal War.
He shall rebel against the kingdoms in the first volume,
Save the empire in the second,
And I’ll add more as I can.
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Chapter 16: CH16 Fire Law and Traitor 5 years ago 卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1 : The Corruption of Kingdoms
- 1 CH1 My Life Began Abruptly 5 years ago
- 2 CH2 Everything’s Coming up Pendell Part 1 5 years ago
- 3 CH3 Everything’s Coming up Pendell Part 2 5 years ago
- 4 CH4 ‘Oh Micah!’ 5 years ago
- 5 CH5 I Hope Your Okay With Jail Time Dad 5 years ago
- 6 CH6 Luck Points? 5 years ago
- 7 CH7 ‘I Will Never Forgive You...’ 5 years ago
- 8 CH8 Mission Complete! 5 years ago
- 9 CH9 Moondrop Wolf 5 years ago
- 10 CH10 From a Duke to Slave 5 years ago
- 11 CH11 Lyner, Bandit of The Dark Fang 5 years ago
- 12 CH12 Temporal is Loud!! 5 years ago
- 13 CH13 Unklair Wulphir, Infernal Werewolf 5 years ago
- 14 CH14 ‘Child, Do You Have A Burning Will’ 5 years ago
- 15 CH15 Is Unklair Dead This Time? 5 years ago
- 16 CH16 Fire Law and Traitor 5 years ago
I like the way it’s starting and I think that if you could add a few more chapeters and more depth it could be a good read. I like the moment he stutters when the big man asks if he is Adam but you might want to tone down on how much he stutters. Also in the end when the system or Neowalt tells him that it’s his life you could add a little more in there to help the flow of time that I feel is missing.
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