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Re-writing "Reborn as Harry Potter" as I feel it will flow better this way. I'll leave both novels up for comparison reasons and let me know what you guys think in how the story flows.
An 18 years old boy has just finished reading what he found as the most annoying series of books ever: the Harry Potter Series. There were two reasons for his annoyance with the series.
One: our MC was also named Harry Potter and he was greatly teased by it.
Two: the main characters in the books were seriously underdeveloped.
"I mean come on, an average guy defeats the most powerful evil wizard alive? Who are you kidding?"
P.S. I do not own Harry Potter. This is purely fan-fiction.
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I only got one chapter as of now but if it's an improvement on his original work it still recommend this for anyone who likes reading Harry Potter FanFiction or who just like reading good stories
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I like this one then the previous one good job author keep uploading 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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I enjoyed both the original and the rewrite, though I like the rewrite more because of all the stuff he does before he get to Hogwarts. This dude barely even needs the system.
Um cara normal ? A maioria dos protagonistas são caras normais só a armadura da trama pra manter eles vivos afinal vc vê protagonistas tomando venenos que matam só com o toque durar minutos ou segundo pra um milagre acontecer e curar ele segundos d** .só não se perca fazendo um (deus x máquina da vida)kkkkkk
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Please update regularly, i loved the other novel and this one seems even better. Also i loved the cultivation aspect of the last one , it is reminiscent of another novel i read that had a system and cultivation but it was about naruto. The first novel was amazing too
I REALLY LIKE THIS KIND OF NOVELS BUT THEY ALWAYS GET ABANDONED OR THE HISTORY STARTS TO GET REALLY BORING, KEEP GOING ITS REALLY INTERESTING.
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I WOULD LIKE MORE CHAPTERS...IF POSSIBLE...REPLYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAITING..................................................................................................................................................................
I have not read your original version but I rather like the fact that I got to enjoy reading this version without making any mental comparisons. I think it is excellent writing and character development so far - I hated running out of chapters to read as it was only just enough to hook me! I truly hope you continue this version. I think what I enjoyed the most was the plot beginning and direction.. I found it above the norm going in a very original direction that completely addicted me. I honestly want to beg for updates but I realize that for the writing to maintain its quality it must come at your own pace! Thank you for being willing to write and publish in such an open forum - it takes courage. Great writing and looking forward to your updates!
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This story is pretty good. This is very original as it features Harry reborn. The updates could be faster and more often. I am looking forward to how the story will develop as MC is already super OP.
The story itself is nice. But author has to update more often and consistently. There should also be more of a background story about the main character in the first few chapters. Overall it is not bad so far.
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I quite like this novel. I just hope the author didn't drop it without notice as has been a month since the last update. I also hope that the author has something planned with his mother.
I am not a writer, nor any type of content creator, so I can not say how much effort you put into your work or how much you care. Therefore, I regret if I sound offensive or disrespectful in my criticism. The protagonist is not insensitive ?, I ask this because of the lack of mention of mourning for his mother, even if he does not know that dead, at least the worry about not seeing her again or because of her situation. That is my only complaint or doubt, otherwise, thank you for uploading this content.