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I didn't think I would like this as much as I did bit here I am. The previous review talled about the dumb protagonist and I'll agree, I believed I wouldn't have been able to read until chapter 5 if he continues being stupid. But I was really convinced by how the protagonist interacts with the surrounding characters and how his world views influence everyone else. I belive the characters and the story have a lot of potential and I really hope the Author can find a way to continue writing this novel.
Sadly, I have to stop reading this story. I like the idea but this is too much. The MC continues saying that ghost doesn't exist when he himself has exorcized them. Your soul is from another world, what the heck are you saying? That cultivation doesn't exist? He himself says that maybe it is a new type of energy of this world, so why he doesn't admit that cultivation is the use of this new energy? Well, I wish you luck author. I hope you continue improving.
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Some minor, easily brushed past problems. Like the idea of a successful cultivator who does not believe in cultivation. But, once you get past that its good. I did kinda want MC to be a little more "aware". But it is fine. I was practically smiling and laughing all 12 chapters.
I didn't think I would like this as much as I did bit here I am. The previous review talled about the dumb protagonist and I'll agree, I believed I wouldn't have been able to read until chapter 5 if he continues being stupid. But I was really convinced by how the protagonist interacts with the surrounding characters and how his world views influence everyone else. I belive the characters and the story have a lot of potential and I really hope the Author can find a way to continue writing this novel.
Sadly, I have to stop reading this story. I like the idea but this is too much. The MC continues saying that ghost doesn't exist when he himself has exorcized them. Your soul is from another world, what the heck are you saying? That cultivation doesn't exist? He himself says that maybe it is a new type of energy of this world, so why he doesn't admit that cultivation is the use of this new energy? Well, I wish you luck author. I hope you continue improving.
ネタバレを明かす
Some minor, easily brushed past problems. Like the idea of a successful cultivator who does not believe in cultivation. But, once you get past that its good. I did kinda want MC to be a little more "aware". But it is fine. I was practically smiling and laughing all 12 chapters.