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I like the overall storyline, but the punctuation could be better. In chapter one, it was a little bit hard to tell when the characters were speaking and when the weren't. I was also getting mixed up on who was speaking. But I do like the story, and I would recommend the author to fix these errors, and I could really tell the the author really tried to make a good story, and is so far successful in doing just that.
I like the overall storyline, but the punctuation could be better. In chapter one, it was a little bit hard to tell when the characters were speaking and when the weren't. I was also getting mixed up on who was speaking. But I do like the story, and I would recommend the author to fix these errors, and I could really tell the the author really tried to make a good story, and is so far successful in doing just that.