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4.15

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YourShadowsenpai

This review may come up as random but i was just feeling reminiscent and was going through all the novels i have read. I just Notice this was my first ever naruto fanfic and u Author gived me the Best experience thank you 🙏🏾 . Hope ur doing well

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Will_Caruso

From Potention : To be honest, this novel is alright. No idea why it has such a low review score, but just ignore it and give the novel a try. It's pretty okay. I think it has to be all the TROLLS out there !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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DG2
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The story is a crack fic fantasy. The system is the standard type, but the author doesn't plan out the powers he receives. Instead he listens to the reviewers to decide what to add. There isn't much story building and characterization because it was sacrificed to rush the plot. Also combining the uchiha and senju bloodlines gets the rinnegan. The author is aiming for a harem which will destroy the fragile plot he created. I hope he doesn't do. Otherwise this is a decent read to pace some time.

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Nemesis_246582

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Kurosis

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DabanCrow

When Hashirama made his entrance I decided that yes, this is a fantastic novel!! It already had my attention before then but now I was trapped... good job!

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ZandA
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Just continue. After the end of this world you can transfer him to another world without his companions and some some restriction to summon or without it, but with his skills and write about new world and characters as you wish.

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Planetsama

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SatanTheBest

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YoungReaperX

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Melshan

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Potention

To be honest, this novel is alright. No idea why it has such a low review score, but just ignore it and give the novel a try. It's pretty okay.

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animetraveller2002

This is fantastic ......................................................................................................................................

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gman12567

pretty good fanfiction only thing is that it needs to do less time skips and have more character development but the characters were young so the time skips are acceptable.

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gman12567

pretty good fanfiction only thing is that it needs to do less time skips and have more character development but the characters were young so the time skips are acceptable.

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gman12567

pretty good fanfiction only thing is that it needs to do less time skips and have more character development but the characters were young so the time skips are acceptable.

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CZ2128_Delta

Refreshing... MC not to Bloodthirsty and OP.. I just hope that the updates are stable in the future!! More chapters please author! Refreshing... MC not to Bloodthirsty and OP.. I just hope that the updates are stable in the future!! More chapters please author!

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GGMissFortune

Escuché a gente decir que Hanzo se fue hace unos 30 minutos hacia el este hacia el ninja Konoha, por lo que ahora debería ser el momento perfecto para hacer una escapada. Hemos guardado nuestras cosas en rollos de sellado, para lo cual Hashirama fue una gran ayuda para crear Estaba casado con un sellador de primera clase, por lo que estaba obligado a recoger algunas cosas

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YourShadowsenpai

This review may come up as random but i was just feeling reminiscent and was going through all the novels i have read. I just Notice this was my first ever naruto fanfic and u Author gived me the Best experience thank you 🙏🏾 . Hope ur doing well

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Will_Caruso

From Potention : To be honest, this novel is alright. No idea why it has such a low review score, but just ignore it and give the novel a try. It's pretty okay. I think it has to be all the TROLLS out there !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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DG2
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The story is a crack fic fantasy. The system is the standard type, but the author doesn't plan out the powers he receives. Instead he listens to the reviewers to decide what to add. There isn't much story building and characterization because it was sacrificed to rush the plot. Also combining the uchiha and senju bloodlines gets the rinnegan. The author is aiming for a harem which will destroy the fragile plot he created. I hope he doesn't do. Otherwise this is a decent read to pace some time.

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Nemesis_246582

I hope you update soon I hope you update soon I hope you update soon I hope you update soon I hope you update soon I hope you update soon I hope you update soon I hope you update soon I hope you update soon I hope you update soon

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Kurosis

keep going auther plz don't drop and ty posting cause SatanTheBest spammed 1* not fair in my eyes 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

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Kurosis

keep going auther plz don't drop and ty posting cause SatanTheBest spammed 1* not fair in my eyes 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

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DabanCrow

When Hashirama made his entrance I decided that yes, this is a fantastic novel!! It already had my attention before then but now I was trapped... good job!

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ZandA
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Just continue. After the end of this world you can transfer him to another world without his companions and some some restriction to summon or without it, but with his skills and write about new world and characters as you wish.

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YoungReaperX

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Melshan

Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém

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Potention

To be honest, this novel is alright. No idea why it has such a low review score, but just ignore it and give the novel a try. It's pretty okay.

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animetraveller2002

This is fantastic ......................................................................................................................................

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gman12567

pretty good fanfiction only thing is that it needs to do less time skips and have more character development but the characters were young so the time skips are acceptable.

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gman12567

pretty good fanfiction only thing is that it needs to do less time skips and have more character development but the characters were young so the time skips are acceptable.

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gman12567

pretty good fanfiction only thing is that it needs to do less time skips and have more character development but the characters were young so the time skips are acceptable.

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CZ2128_Delta

Refreshing... MC not to Bloodthirsty and OP.. I just hope that the updates are stable in the future!! More chapters please author! Refreshing... MC not to Bloodthirsty and OP.. I just hope that the updates are stable in the future!! More chapters please author!

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GGMissFortune

Escuché a gente decir que Hanzo se fue hace unos 30 minutos hacia el este hacia el ninja Konoha, por lo que ahora debería ser el momento perfecto para hacer una escapada. Hemos guardado nuestras cosas en rollos de sellado, para lo cual Hashirama fue una gran ayuda para crear Estaba casado con un sellador de primera clase, por lo que estaba obligado a recoger algunas cosas

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